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Premium Member Pits for those who Die


Off the land and into the pit, September rolls around.
Simple days have long since gone upon the family ground.
Stolen pride-dignity.
Gossip hounds' voices sound like trumpets to the games.
I'm in the pit, grease to my neck, not hearing the marching band.
But thoughts intrude, they are so vain, adding layers to the pain.
My dream is muddled in murky grey as the selfish look for more.
Holding on till morning light, body spent, truth ignored.
I'm but a serf upon my land, the devil has the upper hand.
So as September rolls on through, my thoughts no longer good.
Purple bands upon our hands, the grease hides all the pain.
Dreams alive for those who stare, not a clue of something wrong.
For in this pit and man-made hell, I'm struggling to hold on.
Stress like devil's electric pain, the blood beats through my veins.
Beats of heart like coffin nails erase the final stand.
In the box the farmer goes, absent from the land.
Rob a farmer of his love, you steal his soul. 
There's nothing left, they're asking why, but refuse to understand.

Premium Member Burn Pits Veterans

Burn pits veterans,
you stood tall in bravery,
we honor you.
The U.S. government passed
the PACT Act a few years ago,
and President Biden signed it,
to give you the care you deserve.
My military brothers and sisters,
many pray for you,
Welcome Home. ~

A Bowl of Pits

Life is like a bowl of pits
From in the cherries someone spits
And though there are some juicy bits,
There aren’t quite enough.

For often things go very wrong
And even if you think you’re strong,
You find it’s hard to get along
When hit with painful stuff.

I’m feeling just a little sad
Because of incidents I’ve had.
I know that life’s not mostly bad
But man, it can be rough.


Premium Member Pitiful Pits

You dig 
pit 
after 
pit 
after 
pit.
Then wonder why nobody comes around.
The few that tiptoe into your eggshell world  
are only there to use you...

In greener years you were just another cutter
graduating to just another pit digger...

Blood or not, I won't dance in your self-inflicted pits.
I'll just sidestep the "hole" mess and say happy digging.

Premium Member The World Falls Into Pits of Despair

Mass destruction is happening on a global basis.
People are dying, killing, maiming, hurting.
Sheila is determined to finish her masterpiece.
Her love for her creation is on fire; she is in a frenzy.
The chords and notes she plays are chilling.
They are dangerous and provocative.
Striking terror in the hearts of those who still have a soul.
There is something ominous and frightening about her song.
Her fingers hit the keys with purpose and resolve.
She has left her body, and is watching it now, go on without a soul.
Some empaths have figured it out. Hair stands up on their necks.
The world is falling into pits of despair, yet her soulless body plays on.

Premium Member The Pits

I'm stuck in a hole and cannot shout
To ask for help to get me out

Out of this hole of deep despair
I feel no pressure while I'm stuck in there

I feel a peace when I am on my own
My thoughts belong to me alone

The walls surround me like a glove
The hole does not allow thoughts of hate or love

Trying not to think at all
In the darkness of this pitch-black wall

I think that in this hole I'll stay
Until all troubles fade away


Premium Member Dinosaurs Found In the Tar Pits

Dinosaurs
D i s c o v e r e d 
Evolution 

Diplodocuses
U n e a r t h e d
Tar


10/29/2020

Premium Member I'Ll Never Forget What's His Name

He did not teach me much, 
he had rather take me out to lunch.

Be honest all your days,                                                                              that was what he would say.

Everyday work hard,                                                                                    with all of your heart.

A winner never quits,
even if it is the pits.

A quitter never wins,                                                                                  they get it on the chin.

This great man did not teach me much,
yet in reality he taught me a bunch.

Dad what a great name,                                                                              you should be in the hall of fame.


(Dad You Were The Best)   Date: 9/17/2019

Premium Member All Peaches Have Pits

All Peaches Have Pits
By: Tom 8-12-2019
Haiku

Life is like a peach,
Sometimes its warm and fuzzy.
But some days, the pits.

Premium Member Cherries Are For the Pits

There once was a lady named Terry
Who's favourite fruit was a cherry
Till one day she bit
Down hard on a pit
Screamed bloody murder, quite scary!

Michael's Salon of Pits

People often say now I understand
When they hear that I'm from Paree
Not Gay Paree silly, but redneck
In the heart of Tennessee

I am the newest style of hairdressers
Here to lay out all the facts
I no longer work on the tops of heads
But straight out of the pits

It all happened when I got bored
With the every day to day
Trimming of the head left me feeling dead
That's when it hit me..."Underarm Braid"

That right there was my life saver
That right there was my turn around
If it didn't make me world famous
At least it did on this side of town

Now people come from as far as Nashville
To have their underarms done
I even gave a left and right pit Mohawk
To the Governor's daughter and son

What? Did you think I only braided?
There's so much more that I can do
Just ask the Punk Rock Chick's that wait in line
To have their armpits colored blue

My older clientele have let there hair grow out
Since it is they learned 
I'm now specializing in for both women and men
Their favorite sets and perms

So feel the freedom of the pits
That hippie chicks have long since known
Here at Michael's Salon Of Pits
We'll do something special with that growth

Cherry-Pits and Foggy Air

anxiety, care, corruption, creation, destiny, environment, rainforest,

CHERRY-PITS AND FOGGY AIR©

Miseries mount on high
If only I had that again
Too little too late too much
Life’s no bowl of cherries
And the rain fell hard today!

Skies sheathed in dust and smog 
Pollutes the once green terrain below
 The ‘fresh’ air demotes to shallower breaths
Intakes ‘tanked’ to partings of out rage

The taste of ‘bottled’ flavoured water rises
The ‘breaths’ of air when bottled will increase
And next it will be one costly ‘purification’ deed
For those left and known to mankind.

Premium Member Cherries Are For the Pits

There once was a lady named Terry
Who's favourite fruit was a cherry
Till one day she bit
Down hard on a pit
Screamed bloody murder, this Terry!

© Jack Ellison 2015

Pits

The outer expression of hatred comes from the depth of my past,
Eating the love shown and shined on me and captured by the pitiful memories,
Each day is mourned, never healing but pressing out the brokenness,
In the pit of my hate, the encapsulated heart beats to the uneven beat.

No one can began to imagine the pain bestowed upon me,
How my life was rushed to a standstill before the time needed,
Childhood stolen by the silent truth of this world's reality,
Never to be received nor seen again.

Premium Member In Pits of Pain

Inside scrapings of darkness
how restless and doomed,
the bellow crashing in like
an agonized moon; 

the tunnel hears blood whooshing
in pits full of rain,
hurling damn imaginings
of her fetus’ pain,

wails rip through the stained window
and grinds near right lung,
heart reeks for a babe frozen 
knowing breath is gone;

if I could pluck her memories
from uterine wall,
to touch sun’s glint christening
new eyes on dawn’s call.

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*Sadly,research estimates that approximately 1 in 4
 pregnancies end in miscarriage; and most women
experience a grief period during such occurrences.

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