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As King Bhoj is no more

Today Dhara feels shelter-less
And Goddess of Learning, let down,
Learned, peerless men, patron-less,
King Bhoj having gone to heaven.
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Translation | 26.10.2025 | death, learning/education, king

Note: King Munj and king Bhoj ruled kingdom of Malwa in Central India during 10th-11th CE. Their capital was Dhara, today’s Dhar. Sanskrit scholar Kalidas happened during the rule of Bhoj. Both were learned men. Once, king Bhoj wanted to know how people would feel when he is no more. So, on an expedition he was declared dead. When asked, poet Kalidas wrote this shloka on dead king. What happens when the king returns? See the next verse. The transliteration of Sanskrit text is as under:  

Adya Dhara nir aadhaaraa  nir aalambaa sarasvatee |
Panditaam khanditaam sarve  bhoja-raaje divam gate || Kalidas ||

Man of merit knows merit

Man of merit knows merit, 
No one else devoid of it.
The mighty knows what might is,  
No one else who from fight flees.
Koel knows spring’s worth, not crows,
Tusk lion’s might, mouse ne’er knows. 
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Translation |30.10.2024|merit, cuckoo, crow, spring, lion

Poet’s note: Sanskrit has thousands of verses of wisdom called Subhashhitam. Only a man of merit knows what is merit, a strong man knows what is strength. Cuckoo knows what spring is.  Elephant knows lion’s strength, not mouse. The transliteration of the Sanskrit verse follows:
Gunee gunam vetti na vetti nir-gunah, 
balee balam vetti na vetti nir-balah |
Pikah vasantasya gunam na vaayasah, 
karee cha simhasya balam na mooshhakah ||

All in self are sunk

Birds fruitless trees forsake, 
Swans and cranes leave dried lake,
Courtesans scarce to wealth-less cling,
Counsellors leave a corrupt king, 
Honey bees flee from lifeless flower,  
Beasts forsake a forest on fire, 
Motive-dunk men in self are sunk,
In this world, who to whom is dear?     
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Translation |17.08.2024| free verse, love, self-interest   
The Sanskrit verse:

vrksham ksheena-phalam tyajanti vihagaah, shushkam sarah saarasaah 
nir-dravyam purushham tyajanti ganikaah, bhrashtam nrpam mantrinah |   
pushpam paryushhitam tyajanti madhupaah, dagdham vana-antam mrgaah 
sarvah kaarya-vashaat-janah abhi-ramate, tat  kasya Kah vallabhah  ||


Premium Member Little Mamba

How not to steal from a mamba
That came to your house
To check on your children
How a little snake mamba
Comes in like robin hood
Asking children
Have you eaten anything good we can share
Bismillah hir-Rahman nir-Rahim
And maybe a little portion of food
Left for him everyday
Even in your thoughts 
And blessing from God
The Little mamba moves away
Singing dancing
I’ve enchanted them all
To give a little to time and thought
To animals on this earth
Living and struggling for food

Daniel Henderson My Newest Lion-Tamer

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Today, three years too late - almost - I read a short, insightful article by Daniel Henderson ("Holy Spirit ... Come? Or Control?" 2019(c) Daniel Henderson). I am so thrilled. I have good help in explaining New Testament theology.

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Thank you Daniel come again
Yes. For me: Daniel has come again
To tame the lions of charismatic over-reach
Such because weak or new believers
Feel less, unless -
They join a bandwagon: "More, Spirit, more!"
Bandwagon Balderdash?
I said it, as a Poet, I wrote it
Last month already: "Jesus's best deposit" -
Holy spirit comes to indwell all as an escrow
Guarantee that Jesus claims us, 
He will only leave if we leave LORD JESUS
No need to run all over, looking for more of the Most 
Gentle, the Most
Holy Spirit
Of God
Also known as, GODS SPIRIT OF HOLINESS

III (Daniel HENDERSON explained):
" ...like other common elements of  Christian vernacular, it [asking Spirit to come] is nit in the Bible. Nir is it a prayer consistent with the new covenant secured for us by the precious blood of Christ."

Vashi Bhoot

Vishav anthha goom goom sah vansha Jam chakara bayhdem na chotam prithvi loakha nir goon ahankara bashi bhootam naan priya na shaskaly nir paapm sang hasth dhehk adhiyoag mhakal... 
Vashi booth samprpyami 
Om. Maa 
15:30


Premium Member Snakes and Children

How not to steal from a mamba 
That came to your house
To check on your children
How a little snake mamba
Comes in like robin hood
Asking children
Have you eaten anything good we can share
With a simple prayer
Bismillah hir-Rahman nir-Rahim
And maybe a little portion of food
Left for him everyday
Even in your thoughts
And blessings from God
The little mamba moves away
Singing dancing
I've enchanted them all
To give a little to time and thought
To animals on this earth
Living and struggling for food.

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