Mesmerizing Poems | Examples

mesmerizing the moon

If the stars could speak,
They would speak of only your light,
How it dips and peaks ,
In its celestial respite.

If the stars could wonder,
They would wonder of only your touch,
How it echoes like thunder,
And causes Saturn to blush.

If the stars could bleed, 
They would bleed for only your dreams,
That call to anguish the pleads,
Of Venus to Mercury.

If the stars could dance, 
They would dance to only your tune,
And be locked forever in your trance,
That mesmerizes the moon,
Categories: mesmerizing, beautiful, beauty, muse, stars,
Form: Rhyme

Mesmerizing Message


T-itle
E-mploys
S-ubtle
S-ymbolism

©bfa041625
Monocrostic (Birthday of Tess B. Pacamara)
Categories: mesmerizing, birthday,
Form: Acrostic


Premium MemberLilacs bloom

lilacs bloom into
an ambrosial siren
springtime seduction



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Categories: mesmerizing, flower, nature, sensual,
Form: Haiku

Waxing Lyrical

I love her easy smile
Am mesermerized by her beauty
She has the gentleness of a Gazzel
The grace of a Girraffe browsing 
Upon the majestic accacias of the Savana
Her voice makes Fairies jelous in the nether world
Her's is a love the Angels and Jinn alike crave for
She has that tantalizing quality her Kind are famed for
When am with her all mine good moods ignite in love
I stare at the laptopscreen thinking only of her beauty
Her love leaves my innards all mellow and wanting more
When with her it's as though time grows wings and flees
It's with her I chose to make mine life revolve around
Till eternity as we hold hands and walk meadows of Genna
Categories: mesmerizing, appreciation, beautiful, cute love,
Form: Blank verse

Premium Member- A Mesmerizing Scene -


                                     The moonlight's pale rays
                                      Pockets of crystal water
                                         - expectation pearls
                                 Fragrance of moonbeam flowers -
                                      ready to be kissed by light
Categories: mesmerizing, beauty, moon, mystery, nature,
Form: Tanka


Premium MemberAdorned and Adored

Adorned and Adored

Let us adorn 
   our daughters with pearls!
Gifting 
One pearl — so very dearly 
   ocean-made, fresh…
To dress each earlobe
With a radiant luster,
Emphasizing the spirited 
Life-light 
In her glinting,
   mesmerizing eyes…

Then, gather your heart
To proudly place a string 
Of one or some pearls 
Around your daughter’s
    so-familiar neck 
To lay — more precious 
   and worthy than diamonds —
Just below her delighting smile.
Categories: mesmerizing, beauty, fashion, giving, imagery,
Form: Imagism

Mesmerizing

Every heads turn
To take a look
The handsome prince.
Categories: mesmerizing, appreciation, beauty, celebrity,
Form: Than-Bauk

When Our Eyes Met

Call it yours, Call it mine,
The tale we wrote was glorifying.
I was a driller ,
Your eyes were the mine.
'Excavated until I could see through them,
The mesmerizing light was the love with shine .
Light wet eyes with high hopes charm,
The cold beat I got when it met mine.
The skipped beat and the heartily terror,
Brought a smile not of fear.
Our eyes were talking mouth hardly said a word,
'Cause it was enough for the bashful us.
Beats were fast I could not resist,
I had them on the first place when you saw me.
But kept them aside so no one will know ,
Stopped saying 'cause no word could rhyme.
The moment was over but I loved the past,
Past was the journal and I could not stop encoding your thought .
All I had was this tale as mine,
And now I stopped cause no word could rhyme.
Categories: mesmerizing, 10th grade, beautiful, beauty,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberRain - Raging

RAIN
raging
relentless

I was a small girl
amid the violence
paralyzed by the bruised skies

“I was mesmerized by the force.”

[Clarity Pyramid, two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all)]
Categories: mesmerizing, environment, feelings, lost, memory,
Form: Verse

Premium MemberMesmerizing Muse

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(PoetrySoup Format)
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My mysterious muse is curling ‘round clouds of cotton.
In fact, she is content soaring through the sky, 
soaking in serenity, while sailing in the sunshine.
She’s not concerned about the weight of the world.

Distant distractions or alluring attractions asking why.
My mesmerizing muse, twirls and swirls in savory sweet rhyme.


~ A Simple Scribble ~  
(Embracing everyday Enchantment)
Categories: mesmerizing, happy, muse, sky,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMesmerizing Night

seductive moon rose 

joyful clouds played hide and seek 

mesmerizing night!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
      06 June 2020
Categories: mesmerizing, moon, night,
Form: Haiku

My Inspiring Brother Vijay Kumar

Vijay you are such an
Inspiring character possessing extreme                          
                            talents and capable of:
Jovially handling sensitive people,
Aiding weak souls 
Youthfully —which is truly good.

Keep going little chap
Understanding you to the core is
Mesmerizing, enriching and pleasing and
                                 i am
Awe-struck at your sense of humour that
                        you seamlessly flourish,also
Radiantly spreading smile everywhere.
                             
 8-4-2020

~DEEPA~

7th place in "Your fave poem 2020 not written for a contest"
Sponsored by John Hamilton.
18-6-2020
Categories: mesmerizing, brother, inspirational,
Form: Acrostic

Premium MemberSassy My Labby

SASSY MY LABBY

Mom and Dad always teach me new
Words, I know many,
They are loving and enterprising,
I’ve heard the names of only family
At the dinner table this
Christmas, hope it will be mesmerizing,
Thank goodness I get tit-bits 
During cooking preparations, the aroma of
The turkey as it cooks is totally tantalizing,
I’m not just a doggy, mom and dad say
I’m clever, tell the family please,
Sometimes they are so patronizing,
Can’t wait, I’m excited, heard them talk 
About Santa, a new ball, a rubber chicken and
A squeaky toy, waiting for Christmas Eve is
AGONIZING, 
I hear them talking about God and above,
So on Christmas Day, will give them 
Extra servings of love!


Entering in: “Your Favorite Animal Contest”
Sponsored By: Gregory Paul
Categories: mesmerizing, dog,
Form: Rhyme

Mesmerizing Lullaby

A hypnotizing drip drip
of the rain pounds outside
on the gravel driveway
In a steady calming beat in
natures lullaby bringing all
to a mesmerizing sleepy state

Thunder rumbles in the
background like a base drum
rolling with a crash of 
lightening as cymbals in a 
symphony of sounds

A cool breeze weaves 
between each drop of rain 
to float in caressing your 
warm face bringing a chill 
down your spine

A softer pitter-pat hits the 
window-sill with everyother 
drop tapping at the window pane
A faster tempo splashes in 
the mud puddle with a splish 
splash adding yet more sounds 
to natures symphony
When thunder again rolls 
with lightenings cymbals crash

The cool breeze bobs and 
weaves through the rain to 
kiss your face with its 
coolness calming you, taking 
you deeper into a tranquil sleep

All around are transformed 
into a restful state from 
the soothing rhythm 
of natures relaxing song

This is an older poem! I use to love the rain but any more.... I really am so tired of it! But this was written to make a friend feel better! Maybe it will make me feel better now!:)
Categories: mesmerizing, nature, rain,
Form: Free verse

Mesmerizing Mermaids

The seas softly speak with voices that talismanically tweak,
Magical maids in their mystique porpoises of their physique…
Ambient aqua-marine waving seductresses of their craving,
A splashing sylph spraying through wandering waters braving…

Goddesses of the dousing deep show finesse as they leap,
Enchanting when they weep collecting desires for their keep…
Landing on our sandy shore all eyes on the deceptive décor,
Mystic Mermaids to adore Lorelei longing from the Ocean floor…

A siren seducer submersing a temptress of the water traversing,
Below lavender skies nursing her delinquent desires dispersing…
Mesmerizing mermaids silently sailing with their mermen tailing,
A sorceress in their scaling intoxicated by their Venus unveiling.





Sept.23.2019
MERMAIDS Poetry
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

Placed 4'th...Thank You
Categories: mesmerizing, beautiful, fish, sexy, women,
Form: Rhyme

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