- A Mesmerizing Scene -

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13.11.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                     The moonlight's pale rays
                                      Pockets of crystal water
                                         - expectation pearls
                                 Fragrance of moonbeam flowers -
                                      ready to be kissed by light

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/25/2024 10:41:00 AM

Anne-Lise, a nice combination of thoughts, sights, actions, and aromas. You do so much in so few words!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2024 10:24:00 PM

descriptive, mesmerizing delightful Tanka dear Sunshine Smile - so well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2024 7:00:00 AM

Imagery is gorgeous! Fave! Hugs ~ Kim

Michael Tor

Date: 11/14/2024 6:18:00 AM

This is so beautiful to see and read. You are the queen of imagery and Poetic vibrant scenes Anne-Lise. Spectacular imagery you share in your chosen words to take the reader to a visual surreal moment, bringing in senses of smell, and experience this mesmerizing scene. Love this one and I am favoring... Thank you for sharing...

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/14/2024 4:48:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, What a beautiful tanka that captures a moment of serene anticipation. I loved your delicate interplay between moonlight and water. I felt that your evocative language transformed nature into a canvas of expectation, with the moonbeam flowers awaiting their luminous embrace. Outstanding! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel