Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

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Mesmerizing Mermaids

The seas softly speak with voices that talismanically tweak,
Magical maids in their mystique porpoises of their physique…
Ambient aqua-marine waving seductresses of their craving,
A splashing sylph spraying through wandering waters braving…

Goddesses of the dousing deep show finesse as they leap,
Enchanting when they weep collecting desires for their keep…
Landing on our sandy shore all eyes on the deceptive décor,
Mystic Mermaids to adore Lorelei longing from the Ocean floor…

A siren seducer submersing a temptress of the water traversing,
Below lavender skies nursing her delinquent desires dispersing…
Mesmerizing mermaids silently sailing with their mermen tailing,
A sorceress in their scaling intoxicated by their Venus unveiling.





Sept.23.2019
MERMAIDS Poetry
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Mark Peterson September 30, 2019 at 9:40 PM Gosh, you handled this with such compelling skill. I enjoyed every line while silently realizing I could never have done it myself. Congratulations.

Elaine Perrin September 30, 2019 at 8:48 AM Another of my favourites , simply beautiful :-) x

Swetha Vangaveti September 25, 2019 at 12:25 PM Wonderful description of enchanting creatures. What a picture you have added to it! Beautiful :)

Jennifer Proxenos September 24, 2019 at 2:07 PM ^WW^ another gem you craft with your poetic quill! This one is quite something - enthralling! Hugs, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong September 24, 2019 at 1:36 PM This is very lovely! I adore the story of Lorelei. An enchanted piece for the contest that should fair very well WW. My favorite line"Mesmerizing mermaids silently sailing with their mermen tailing," I hope that doesn't make me seem too chauvinistic. ; ) xxoo

Chris Green September 24, 2019 at 12:45 PM Wow, this one blew me away. Such creativity flows from your pen my friend. Best wishes in the contest

Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 5:29 AM Oh bro bro this is so amazing! You must write little puff puff some tales! She would be mesmerized by your words as I just was!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 24, 2019 at 2:00 AM So amazing... Best wishes for the contest and God bless you

Jan Allison September 23, 2019 at 11:10 PM Such wonderful imagery, rhyme and a liberal sprinkling of amazing alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx

Hello There September 23, 2019 at 10:56 PM Another very well written and creative piece of writing, ^WW^, mesmerizingly so ~

Heidi Sands September 23, 2019 at 9:22 PM Brilliant rhyming again WW! Good luck in the contest :)

Bobby May September 23, 2019 at 6:25 PM There you go again W.W. your talent is putting me to shame, BTW no I am not going to build you a wood ship in a bottle, lol Bobby May September 23, 2019 at 7:44 PM That I can do my friend, lol Winged Warrior September 23, 2019 at 6:28 PM How about a toothpick in a salt shaker? lol...^WW^ :o)