Mesmerizing Mermaids

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The seas softly speak with voices that talismanically tweak, Magical maids in their mystique porpoises of their physique… Ambient aqua-marine waving seductresses of their craving, A splashing sylph spraying through wandering waters braving… Goddesses of the dousing deep show finesse as they leap, Enchanting when they weep collecting desires for their keep… Landing on our sandy shore all eyes on the deceptive décor, Mystic Mermaids to adore Lorelei longing from the Ocean floor… A siren seducer submersing a temptress of the water traversing, Below lavender skies nursing her delinquent desires dispersing… Mesmerizing mermaids silently sailing with their mermen tailing, A sorceress in their scaling intoxicated by their Venus unveiling. Sept.23.2019 MERMAIDS Poetry Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Date: 9/30/2019 9:40:00 PM
Gosh, you handled this with such compelling skill. I enjoyed every line while silently realizing I could never have done it myself. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/30/2019 8:48:00 AM
Another of my favourites , simply beautiful :-) x
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Date: 9/25/2019 12:25:00 PM
Wonderful description of enchanting creatures. What a picture you have added to it! Beautiful :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 2:07:00 PM
^WW^ another gem you craft with your poetic quill! This one is quite something - enthralling! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/24/2019 1:36:00 PM
This is very lovely! I adore the story of Lorelei. An enchanted piece for the contest that should fair very well WW. My favorite line"Mesmerizing mermaids silently sailing with their mermen tailing," I hope that doesn't make me seem too chauvinistic. ; ) xxoo
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Date: 9/24/2019 12:45:00 PM
Wow, this one blew me away. Such creativity flows from your pen my friend. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 9/24/2019 5:29:00 AM
Oh bro bro this is so amazing! You must write little puff puff some tales! She would be mesmerized by your words as I just was!;)
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Date: 9/24/2019 2:00:00 AM
So amazing... Best wishes for the contest and God bless you
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Date: 9/23/2019 11:10:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery, rhyme and a liberal sprinkling of amazing alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2019 10:56:00 PM
Another very well written and creative piece of writing, ^WW^, mesmerizingly so ~
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Date: 9/23/2019 9:22:00 PM
Brilliant rhyming again WW! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/23/2019 6:25:00 PM
There you go again W.W. your talent is putting me to shame, BTW no I am not going to build you a wood ship in a bottle, lol
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Bobby May
Date: 9/23/2019 7:44:00 PM
That I can do my friend, lol
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Winged Warrior
Date: 9/23/2019 6:28:00 PM
How about a toothpick in a salt shaker? lol...^WW^ :o)
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