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Mesmerizing Mermaids

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The seas softly speak with voices that talismanically tweak, Magical maids in their mystique porpoises of their physique… Ambient aqua-marine waving seductresses of their craving, A splashing sylph spraying through wandering waters braving… Goddesses of the dousing deep show finesse as they leap, Enchanting when they weep collecting desires for their keep… Landing on our sandy shore all eyes on the deceptive décor, Mystic Mermaids to adore Lorelei longing from the Ocean floor… A siren seducer submersing a temptress of the water traversing, Below lavender skies nursing her delinquent desires dispersing… Mesmerizing mermaids silently sailing with their mermen tailing, A sorceress in their scaling intoxicated by their Venus unveiling. Sept.23.2019 MERMAIDS Poetry Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Mark Peterson

Date: 9/30/2019 9:40:00 PM

Gosh, you handled this with such compelling skill. I enjoyed every line while silently realizing I could never have done it myself. Congratulations.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 9/30/2019 8:48:00 AM

Another of my favourites , simply beautiful :-) x

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 9/25/2019 12:25:00 PM

Wonderful description of enchanting creatures. What a picture you have added to it! Beautiful :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2019 2:07:00 PM

^WW^ another gem you craft with your poetic quill! This one is quite something - enthralling! Hugs, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/24/2019 1:36:00 PM

This is very lovely! I adore the story of Lorelei. An enchanted piece for the contest that should fair very well WW. My favorite line"Mesmerizing mermaids silently sailing with their mermen tailing," I hope that doesn't make me seem too chauvinistic. ; ) xxoo