My Inspiring Brother Vijay Kumar

Vijay you are such an
Inspiring character possessing extreme                          
                            talents and capable of:
Jovially handling sensitive people,
Aiding weak souls 
Youthfully —which is truly good.

Keep going little chap
Understanding you to the core is
Mesmerizing, enriching and pleasing and
                                 i am
Awe-struck at your sense of humour that
                        you seamlessly flourish,also
Radiantly spreading smile everywhere.
                             
 8-4-2020

~DEEPA~

7th place in "Your fave poem 2020 not written for a contest"
Sponsored by John Hamilton.
18-6-2020
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Ashley Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Oh, your expressive and golden pen spilled such lovely ink in this beautiful tribute to your brother, Deepa. Such an inspiring piece. And I'm also impressed at how smoothly this poem flows as an acrostic. Very creative and skillful poetry. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in John's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Deepa Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Hello mam, Wow.. Thankyou for showering me with soulful appreciation.I am cherished to read such a wonderful review..:-):-)Also.. I am very much pleased to know that my work impressed you.:-) Thanks a lot for your kind words. Best wishes for all your works too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
Hamilton Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 11:17 AM
Thanks for entering, congrats on placing!
Deepa Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Thankyou Sir for your lovely rhyming appreciation:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Hello V. Deepa, this is a lovely tribute to your brother. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day. Be safe my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 5:49 PM
Hello V. I will encourage you any way I can. You have done well creating this poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. So create more poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.
Deepa Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Hello mam, Beautiful appreciation recieved with gratitude. It's really nice to see you encourage a beginner in positive tone. Thankyou for the support!!
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