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Rain - Raging

RAIN raging relentless I was a small girl amid the violence paralyzed by the bruised skies “I was mesmerized by the force.” [Clarity Pyramid, two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all)]

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 3:58:00 PM

wow, an emotional one for rain. Way to go on your win!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/30/2023 5:38:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. A appreciate the support and congrats. :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/30/2023 5:07:00 AM

You wrote a very creative and fascinating pyramid poem about rain my dear poet friend Linda. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/30/2023 7:40:00 AM

Hello my friend Len! Thanks for visiting and leaving such thoughtful comments. :)

Valsa George

Date: 4/29/2023 10:25:00 PM

Love this one abounding in childhood memories. Congatulations, Linda on your great win.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/30/2023 7:38:00 AM

Many thanks my friend Valsa. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/29/2023 5:05:00 PM

Love the bruised skies, Linda. I enjoyed your clarity pyramid on RAIN, alliteration especially. A worthy write, congratulations.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/29/2023 6:41:00 PM

Thank you, Reason, for your thoughtful and supportive comments. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2023 4:40:00 PM

Great imagery! Speaks volumes! Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/29/2023 6:40:00 PM

Many thanks Kim. I appreciate the encouraging support! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2023 11:58:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Linda :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/29/2023 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/29/2023 9:29:00 AM

Those rain storms can be scary, Very nicely penned Linda, Congrats on your win

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/29/2023 10:14:00 AM

Many thanks to you Joseph. I appreciate the placement and the contest - a fun challenge! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/13/2023 4:10:00 PM

Dear Linda, I really enjoyed your Clarity Pyramid poem. Your description of Rain is marvellous! Love ~ Mala

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/13/2023 5:00:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and kind words dear Mala. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 4/13/2023 3:46:00 PM

Great entry for the contest. "paralyzed by the bruised skies" and “I was mesmerized by the force.” Very powerful lines Linda. I like the form for this contest, I may have to enter a few of these contest. I've never tried a contest yet. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill p.s. I read it again, it belongs on my FAVs list!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/13/2023 5:00:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words. You must try the contests Bill! I like the challenge of the form. Thank you for the fav my fellow Texan!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/11/2023 5:03:00 PM

Linda a story in a pyramid, to a child, what we see as a violent storm, through a child's eyes they don't see destruction and danger. A child sees torrents of rain and wind as an excitingly beautiful scene. your poem is perfect ! Infact it's a favourite for me. best wishes.;)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/12/2023 6:24:00 AM

You are SUCH a good friend Wen. Thanks for the sweet words and the fav! :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/10/2023 4:11:00 PM

Hello Linda, I think it would be her showing herself the way home. Her inner voice would guide her. Hugs. /Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2023 10:22:00 AM

Hello Linda, I always listen to my inner voice. It guides me in the right direction. Hugs./Darlene\

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/10/2023 6:10:00 PM

Quite right Darlene. That is indeed what she ultimately did, once the mesmerizing effect left her. :) hugs my dear, Linda :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/10/2023 2:51:00 PM

This is so beautiful, and you are the loveliest lady. Thank you so much for being you .

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/10/2023 2:56:00 PM

Hello my friend Wen! You are kind with your words. I blush. :)