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Rain - Raging

RAIN
raging
relentless

I was a small girl
amid the violence
paralyzed by the bruised skies

“I was mesmerized by the force.”

[Clarity Pyramid, two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all)]

Copyright © Linda Alice Fowler | Year Posted 2023

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/30/2023 3:58:00 PM wow, an emotional one for rain. Way to go on your win! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/30/2023 5:38:00 PM Thank you Andrea. A appreciate the support and congrats. :)

Len Gasun Date: 4/30/2023 5:07:00 AM You wrote a very creative and fascinating pyramid poem about rain my dear poet friend Linda. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/30/2023 7:40:00 AM Hello my friend Len! Thanks for visiting and leaving such thoughtful comments. :)

Valsa George Date: 4/29/2023 10:25:00 PM Love this one abounding in childhood memories. Congatulations, Linda on your great win. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/30/2023 7:38:00 AM Many thanks my friend Valsa. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. :)

Reason A. Poteet Date: 4/29/2023 5:05:00 PM Love the bruised skies, Linda. I enjoyed your clarity pyramid on RAIN, alliteration especially. A worthy write, congratulations. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/29/2023 6:41:00 PM Thank you, Reason, for your thoughtful and supportive comments. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/29/2023 4:40:00 PM Great imagery! Speaks volumes! Congratulations! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/29/2023 6:40:00 PM Many thanks Kim. I appreciate the encouraging support! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2023 11:58:00 AM - A beautiful poem, Linda :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/29/2023 1:25:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 4/29/2023 9:29:00 AM Those rain storms can be scary, Very nicely penned Linda, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/29/2023 10:14:00 AM Many thanks to you Joseph. I appreciate the placement and the contest - a fun challenge! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 4/13/2023 4:10:00 PM Dear Linda, I really enjoyed your Clarity Pyramid poem. Your description of Rain is marvellous! Love ~ Mala Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/13/2023 5:00:00 PM Thank you for your visit and kind words dear Mala. :)

Bill Baker Date: 4/13/2023 3:46:00 PM Great entry for the contest. "paralyzed by the bruised skies" and “I was mesmerized by the force.” Very powerful lines Linda. I like the form for this contest, I may have to enter a few of these contest. I've never tried a contest yet. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill p.s. I read it again, it belongs on my FAVs list! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/13/2023 5:00:00 PM Thank you for your kind words. You must try the contests Bill! I like the challenge of the form. Thank you for the fav my fellow Texan!

Speaks Volumes Date: 4/11/2023 5:03:00 PM Linda a story in a pyramid, to a child, what we see as a violent storm, through a child's eyes they don't see destruction and danger. A child sees torrents of rain and wind as an excitingly beautiful scene. your poem is perfect ! Infact it's a favourite for me. best wishes.;) Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/12/2023 6:24:00 AM You are SUCH a good friend Wen. Thanks for the sweet words and the fav! :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/10/2023 4:11:00 PM Hello Linda, I think it would be her showing herself the way home. Her inner voice would guide her. Hugs. /Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/11/2023 10:22:00 AM Hello Linda, I always listen to my inner voice. It guides me in the right direction. Hugs./Darlene\ Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/10/2023 6:10:00 PM Quite right Darlene. That is indeed what she ultimately did, once the mesmerizing effect left her. :) hugs my dear, Linda :)

Speaks Volumes Date: 4/10/2023 2:51:00 PM This is so beautiful, and you are the loveliest lady. Thank you so much for being you . Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/10/2023 2:56:00 PM Hello my friend Wen! You are kind with your words. I blush. :)