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Premium Member Now We Stand and Sulk


Now We Stand And Sulk


We were the two 
standoffish 
in a small pond.
One day, 
how I wished 
we got carried away,
to a rubbing 
of our fins and bellies, 
so fond.
Life would have smiled on good fate, 
a favorable life,
how my eyes belay.
Instead gloom frowned on and on,
off and off,
over and over.
At worst it brought me to her,
lost and lost.
When we did get carried away,
on a magic carpet, 
to aquarium land,
our tails touched briefly
to her indifference.
Bubbles shot to the surface,
hers,
big round ones,
made just for me.
I looked at her puffing lips,
bad,
"I hate you."
I look back,
my puffing lips,
bubbling,
to no effect,
"asking why."
She raced away.
See I told you.
Our life now a crayon box 
of pebbles, plastic seaweed,
my votive candles,
and unanswered prayers,
inside a glass box,
us,
swimming inharmonious.
Yet we're petted,
externally,
and not internally
to the puzzlement
of onlookers and me.
Each day passing by,
the two standoffish,
each immune,
to sitting together.

connie pachecho

2/16/18


Lady Jane In Waiting

She sits in the silence
  of the long and lonely quiet of afternoon
thinking the sunlight
 once gave light to the warm spring moon
but the evening yields shadows
 of cold, dark memories gone by
and the lingering illusions
 quickly blind the September skies.

Would that the world 
 could see her in springtime
when lovers and dreamers
 still warmed the heart’s fire with wine
 once enraptured by blossoms of Eastertide.

Now alone, she frowns at the emptiness
 that life leaves a loneliness scheme
while drawn deep in her heart
 the illusion of youth still remains
as the eyes and the body
 tremble with unanswered questions like wind and rain.

Caught in the whirlwind
 of continual change and peaceful unrest
she ponders with fear
 of completing and failing life’s tests.
Would that she could break free
 and cling solely to life for a short time more
but for now
 she sits in the hush waiting, waiting…



Rewrite from 1978 for a neighbor
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Form: Rhyme

Premium Member If But One

A single kiss
      Can change your life forever
           Or leave you barren
               With a hundred unanswered questions.
                  Your first kiss
                    Was a shameless swindler
                     A brash and brazen thief of the night
                     Stealing my breath, heart, expectations ...
                    My proud and precious walls
                  Utterly obliterated
               In the instant of an instant
           By the simple, tender application
      Of your candied lips
To mine.





~ 1st Place ~  in the "October No. 2 2018 Any Form Or None" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

FAITH AND DOUBT


ADVANCE OR GO HOME
Stay fit through the tough and rough 
Flee to make out for better stuff

LIVE OR DIE
Make marks of honour in history
Never mind if no points stain your mystery 

HELL OR ROME
Managing laughter a force face 
Presenting visitors with no beast trace

ROPE OR TIE
Frustration gearing a wish for suicide
Lie down a dream of infant to avoid homicide 

ADVANCE OR GO HOME
LIVE OR DIE
HELL OR ROME 
ROPE OR TIE

KISS OR SIGH
Pretence is the genesis of earthly love
Suspicion is the revelation of earthly above 

 OR FINGER
Sex is no play to some 
You finger(play) it; no peaceful home

CHILL OR CRY
While toughness hang 
Her stillness is outside a cruel tongue 

HEAT OR LINGER
Chooses to remain yet faithful 
No storm but still being artful 

KISS OR SIGH
 OR FINGER
CHILL OR CRY
HEAT OR LINGER

SETTLE OR FLOAT
Got a pride in marriage 
Yet always gallant to disparage 

READY OR FLIRT
Commitment lacking in heart
Lagging so deceitful in mind's desire a hit 

TAKE OR GIVE
Ready to take chief; her ultimate 
Insisted you leave not; divorce she hate 

MAKE OR LEAVE
She jugs like staging her stay 
If so relax,  black hair will color grey 

SETTLE OR FLOAT
READY OR FLIRT
TAKE OR GIVE
MAKE OR LEAVE

SCAM OR SCOPE
Roam like a caring wife
Foam as a freeman scouting knife

BREAD OR RICE
Lives  locally 
Always admire living nationally 

PATIENCE OR ELOPE
You see poise in your spouse
Ready to say goodbye to your house 

SELFISHNESS  OR SACRIFICE 
Regret is a treat so threaten
Requiring improvement so lengthen  

SCAM OR SCOPE 
BREAD OR RICE 
PATIENCE OR ELOPE 
SELFISHNESS OR SACRIFICE

BACHELOR OR  MINSTER
A new young good man 
Respect for the church oath counted fun

POVERTY OR LIBERTY
A rough start and desirable end 
A good morning  and an awful night's trend 

SUPPORTER OR FIGHTER 
What's important to do  in pair
Two working singly out flair 

PROPERTY OR ENTIRETY 
Aiming at inheritance off permission 
Freedom okay for both ambition 

BACHELOR OR MINSTER 
POVERTY OR LIBERTY
SUPPORTER OR FIGHTER 
PROPERTY OR ENTIRETY

Unanswered rhetorical silly questions 
Seek and confirm 
While you wish for actions
Has it happens at home; it do happen also in political realm
Form: Couplet

The Memory Room

Dim light
  sun rays reflecting 
 through the window glass
  casting shadowy images dancing along the walls,
early morning residue of the night
  where hopes and dreams survive
 immovable from mind and heart
  eluding the memories of the soul;
kindred spirits reawakened
  cluttering up the memory
 held snug, safe within each memento
  those I gave you, the ones you gave to me;
angels chanting
  of Christmases, birthdays out of time
 cascading flowers fallen petals, dried
  pressed within a card, a book, a bible;
secured in this sanctuary
  of silenced hymns and unanswered prayers
 grateful for what was, what is
  between two friends, companions, lovers in the night;
Extrapolate what you may imagine
  conjure up 
 your pseudo images
  to all that was and could have been,
here
  kept safe, protected,
 sheltered forever
  in the memory room.
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Dream Lover

Laying in bed between crisp white sheets,
I hear the yelping of Mr. Martinez dog,
while the crickets croon to the night.
A frog's ardent love call remains unanswered,
as my husband's restless snores beg for oxygen. 

Furtive moonbeams creep between 
venetian blinds while a lonely nervous 
intrepid breeze found the open window and
entered carefully, entreating me to sleep.
Feeling it's narcotic effect, I close my eyes.

I will again engage in infidelity with my
veiled lover who is aware of my covert desires
which only he can gratify. Lying prone I wait for
my dream to take me where my husband
never could.

Snippets,Tidbits, and Pieces Minus Peace

#Snippets,Tidbits, and Pieces minus Peace...

Flecks and Specks sprawled evenly and eventually...leaving no room for possibilities and puzzle pieces scattered haphazardly; no room for building inevitably, it's a choice, depending on a conclusive voice and it would be made known a Full understanding, of shards of discards desired to be left outstanding; BOULDERS BOLD OF TRUTH in this bit, built branding...No Tresspass* on this "BUILT TO LAST" Landing; Gated and Guarded Mentally; Let's Zoom In More...

Fragments Form Finalization For Formation
*ALL* Information Is Not Usually Deemed Necessary...On the Contrary, it Depends On *WHO* You're Talking To...Such a BROAD View   Skewed and Selectively the "fine print"  goes unnoticed, unobtained and UNANSWERED 

In conclusion, there's no illusion on this microscopic topic and poem; just like a house is not a home that always encourages understanding beneath it's dome... pebbles and fragments forms a foundation that stands alone; peace is not a negotiation, when missing pieces has no consideration and that's what happens when snippets and tidbits holds it's own...WHOLE OUTCOMES determine those snips* of seedings that's been sewn.

©Renee Denise Gross 12/9/2017#
Form: Rhyme

Unanswered

I thought silence was gone forever for me;
I can't even listen to crickets outside my home
without that ringing that fills my ears
whenever quiet is all that surrounds.

Then you began to steal away your time;
your calls, your voice, your sweet face
looking into mine with those eyes that kill,
and now I remember what silence really means.

I don't understand what you're thinking;
I might if you'd only tell me,
only decide I was worth but a few hours,
only keep our promise to each other to try.

We said we deserved each other, a bit ago;
the angry part of me now says we were wrong,
that you don't deserve me if you never reply,
and I deserve better than just a ringing phone.

I then recall things about you and breathe;
an image of you looking deep into me,
your voice saying things I'd never heard,
the feel of your lips against mine.

I want to tell you all this, to hear you;
to grasp where such a connection as ours
could have gone awry in so short a time,
but it takes two to talk.

All I really want;
to say, to ask, to know,
is -
why.

Growth of a Woman in Pieces

Thick humidity of memories clog a small girls heart
That pitter-patter like soft, insignificant rain
Such a lonely life was just an urban myth
But I knew the truth of it all

Soaked to the bone, or rather the soul, I took a troubled breath
And I spoke my deep blue feelings to a stagnant sea
The shivered incoherence of my desperate pleas
Went, in tortured time, unanswered 

17, forcing out a pained smile
Feigned and faded, frustrated and fated
Destiny leaped and hollered at a touch of weakness
Scribing plans in stone that scare me more than anything

Years went blurry and disoriented, surviving on withering hope
Yet eventually my feet moved slowly, again and again and again
23, I speak my light blue feelings to tricking streams
23 and my god I hope, I know, forever and ever on
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Premium Member Wild Fires

Jolted out of my sleep state,
I'm weary-eyed --- it’s 4 am.
It takes a minute to clear the haze
as I wake to the scent of distant fires.

Recalling the news of yesterday,
slowly reality begins to set in:
we’re not in danger here, but virgin
forests to the north are being decimated.

What of the wildlife? What of the secluded dwellings?
What of the fear and drama now filtering through the air?
A thick smog reeks of many fires, furiously gaining, 
ransacking everything within their path.

As the tragedy strikes just within reach,
my heart melts with compassion.
Yet I close all windows tightly,
knowing there’s not a thing I can do.

They need a downpour desperately
 – if only tears and prayers could help.
But our pleas go unanswered;
only heavy rains can save what’s left.



AP: 2nd place 2023

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