Long Feelin Poems

Year One -

Tell me Eve,
does this Garden have everything we need,
do you think the walls are too tall,
are the gatekeepers reasonable, tolerable, right about it all,
what did Lilith know, where did she go
far past the...

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medication malfunctions, feelin 6 in depression
world guessin eyes stressed when, lord of heaven drops confessions
code of matrix saturates, bash it's core of hate.....
make my getaway, in noble deeds as I speed.....
so fast must move slow,...

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Hello Feels Good 
written by David William Breidenthal (D.W.Breidenthal)

AN UNFINISHED SONG..... needs tons of editing!! 
Enjoy despite my lack of organization in this particular poem!

Hello, it's nice to see you again...
Greetings from my heart...promise me...

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 Bear my wretched soul
Make my ugly beautiful
Live a life without strife
Tragedy cuts me like a knife

You must have always known
That you’re on your own
On your own throne
On your own throne,
Thrown down all alone…

The crescent...

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Man I'm still standing & demanding though demand is drained
You can look in from outside see but not feel the pain
I’ve been through mad drills harsh anger & changed my face
quitting is Hell my friend...

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A love not to be forgotten
After the disaster, after the misery
Little sister of mine begged my dad for chicks
He tried to convince her what a bad idea it is
How a hard caring takes to keep...

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Rap from my son, Brooks Greenlee...BCG...borncreatingreatness...  Just like he left it to me.

What happened to rap, to the passion in the lyrics
everybody’s going mainstream try to make their fans feel it
what they don’t realize,...

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The demons are calling me
So, I will completely see
The how the darkness is so deep
And so very steep, I'm so ing up
Completely stuck, in the deep muck
Without the ing luck, I need to survive
The dark,...

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An oversized vintage T-shirt is 
My weekend attire or 
More like my mainichi attire
My face bare
Exposing an unnamed galaxy of freckles
The bottle of
Cheap combini
Apple sparkling wine
Feelin like a millionaire
A neon highlighter between my lips
A novel...

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When I take sip of this glass of juice, want to think how they squirt it out and make it loose, all sit around let’s get along , out of the 10 to the 20...

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Your innocence has blinded you from the real world makin any sense, 
what's that? Say your done with it..?
Na you ain't done with this 
were not even to the second quarter ya idiot, 
you see...

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MY WINTER

It is snowing in my heart, my heart
Wind is blowing can't stop it, stop
And I don't care about you
My mind eyes views are frozen
I've got a cold stone heart
I'm feelin bitter
In my winter

This solstice...

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Holding you close to me
while you rested on my chest
Seeing you hold on to me
was truly the best

I caressed your head 
and you’re soft loving hair
Kissed your forehead gently
to show that I cared

I looked into...

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the first day i laid eyes on you it was so not what i expected

the image you created and the way your eyes rested

i stared at you not realizing my curiosity was adjusted

the moment i...

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Blood is pump-in
Heart sending somethin
In line shaken…jump-in
You got to feed me somethin

Been fed the ball 
Since I could crawl
I’m in overhaul
Feelin 8 feet tall

Got nothin to lose
Everything to gain
Try stopping me
I make insane feel pain

This...

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wicked is how i feel about now.
wanna go to sleep but i have no clue how.
it's 3:42 and sleep is long away.
tomorrow WILL be wicked workin zoomin will i stay.
i'm up then down wanna sleep...

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I'm learning, to not be lonely
And coping, but the darkness is soaking
Inside my mind, to the point I can't find
The line, and the sign.
I want to get well, but I feel like in hell
Locked in...

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I thought i found that one until you came into my life

I put up a fight to keep my heart from losin sight

What is this feel'n i fight every night

Could it be you that is...

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I'm learning, to not be lonely
And coping, but the darkness is soaking
Inside my mind, to the point I can't find
The line, and the sign.
I want to get well, but I feel like in hell
Locked in...

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Bedtime came early on Christmas eve
"Ok girls", tucked in and kissed, "it's time."
Of course we couldn't sleep, no really big crime
we counted our wishes, and we really believed.

Next mornin we tried bein quite as a...

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SOMETIMES I FEEL STUCK W/NO POSSIBILITIES
LIKE IM ALONE CUZ NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ME
I KNO IM RARE CUZ THERE'S NO ONE LIKE ME
MIMICKIN IS NOT AN OPTION CUZ DEN U'LL HAVE 2 GET INSIDE OF ME
FLOW...

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Hey girl or hey love its all one in the same, i do have feelings but along the way i 
forgot the name. but please keep in mind i remember the times and above all...

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i cant think what to write

bang loves dead what a fright

as i sit here staring at the screen

all i need to do is scream

i wish she would hear my plea

i love her why cant she...

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My words wont ever hold a candle to Poe or Byron.
Rhymes about whiskey and loose woman.
No that pulitzer there really is no need in admiring.

For Im the guy that get's wasted and jumps 
over fire.
Gives...

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Can I say something? I think my minds funky! 
got me feelin like a caine junky, 
but I stick to my mary and my peanut butter chunky, 
like a looming depression i just can't link...

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