A Feel'N Untold

I thought i found that one until you came into my life

I put up a fight to keep my heart from losin sight

What is this feel'n i fight every night

Could it be you that is my morning light

I gave you my heart, soul, body, and mind

Made sure when it came down to you i gave my all as if it wasnt just mine

In due time i started to give in

My heart started to fall and was put to the test wit no rules or laws

My heart can no longer fight in this battle called war

But then i came to realize i still wasnt your one and only gurl

Your heart you gave to another and i was just your lover

My feelins i wanted out but in deed to scared to bring about

Please show me a sign that my love is not blind

Show me that the thoughts i think at night are all dreams and will go away in the 
morning light

Some say im a fool for doin what i do when it comes to you

But they have no idea of the feelins thats i have for you

I see the better in you and i want the best for you

When i first met you, you took my breath......how cute

You made me feel up in the worst of time

Just seein your face and bein around you puts me in another mind

You brought out another side of me

A side that i couldnt even believe

Doin things and feelin ways i never felt before you see

Questioning past relationships and the love that was in store

I want to tell you those words that i never said to you before

Not a joke or play time......this is real and nothin less

But give me time for the words i have in store go beyond the mind and puts your 
heart to rest

How can i let you know my feelins without hurtin my soul

Deep thinkin is where i am

Missin you is what im doin

I really do need to tell you so i can get this off my chest

But man this is hard but in the end a friendship will always be left
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006


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Date: 4/20/2016 2:50:00 AM
Twaneisha Chovan, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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