My Head Is Clouded By Love

i cant think what to write

bang loves dead what a fright

as i sit here staring at the screen

all i need to do is scream

i wish she would hear my plea

i love her why cant she see

in my room i sit alone

feeling like the millionth clone

searching for the truth to find

im going out my simple mind

i think of things to write and say

best save them for a rainy day

without her here by my side

i feel my mortal soul has died

that fire that burnt so deep inside

has dwindled and down about died

hoping for another spark

to light it up in a fresh start

another love could not compare

im all alone in my dispare

my bodys broken soul has gone

can no longer i be strong

im losing the will to live

to you my heart did i give

you tore it up and threw it down

i didnt make a single sound

i thought id die without your love

im still here just need a shove

or a message from above

this feelin wont last that long

i just need to stay strong

im thinking straight now cant you see

im telling you to set me free

ill spread my wings 

and fly away

to find love my special way

then youll see me walk right past

as if our love would ever last

ive broken the spell you cast

the love in me is so vast

youll never feel it once again

really thats just a shame

youll look back then youll see

what youve lost its plain to me

i hope you really can move on

stop playin our favourite song

my head is clear 

i know which way my heart to steer

anothers love ill find

and hold so dear

without fear

only love cant break a heart

only love can mend it

love will come and go

but your heart will remain in you for eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/30/2009 4:31:00 AM
Beautifully and masterfully done....this is good writing my friend..
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