Long Defeatist Poems

Acromion's Tension  
      was used to subdue the
    National Championship from
 "the meaniest" Galgon Birchever
  or Galgon "the Meanest" Birchever
     ...

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FEEL AFRICA

Silence!
Silence Africa!
One can hardly get Africa to be silent;
Africa habours a pulsating bubble.
Everyone in Africa bounces to rhythm resilient.

Africa, like Zambia, or
Zambia, like Africa;
Dear ones, whichever comes first
Swells with energy in the sun!

You see...

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The deep and sonorous voice of
his defeatist self-talk was paternal,
and torturous, 
reinforcing the force fed message,
"There is no happiness,
only gradients of misery,"
leaving him indifferent to the present,
careless of the future.

Reared in the shadows of perfection,
parental...

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Abort me not
What's the thought was I was brought 
Electrified turbulent sequences 
Triggers action imaginative 
Visionary dreams of scheme 
Abort me not
A way of things I am bothered electrified a promise 
Attilating spark a due...

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I gave up on winning my mothers approval because I never received it, 
in doing so gave up on winning approval and set free of it,
I do not know what this win offers and thus...

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1963

I sent you away from me to look for our beloved.
I watched you fade in the distant as you walked down the dusty foot-path towards town.
My dull brain craves the lost opportunity to prevail...

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she was of gypsy descent 
life's' hard lessons learn t- 

my grandmother warned 
as I was growing up, 

she said only two duties 
a man was concerned of 

getting it up, and shooting 
satisfying themselves...

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As touch-me-not shrinks of threats, fear, to our mind, warning brings,
Fear is not always defeatist; it has prophetic rings;
Fear has been, from ancient past, part of human unfolding,
Has been functioning, in mortal growth, like strong...

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His attitudes defeatist, His posture is defense;
He longs to be accepted;
But He stays behind a fence.
   He dodges speeding bullets, He often rides the blinds
   He hides behind simplicity;
  ...

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At Last
09/08/2018

Old thoughts in my mind
Found it hard to be kind
Undeserving, unnerving
Unwilling to unwind

So positivity blind,
To myself unkind
Defeatist, hedonist
True pleasure find

Searching for moderation
Full of resignation
Obsessive, compulsive
Unsure of destination

Questioning my commitment
Thought I’d be committed
Irrational, delusional
Suicide attempt...

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Of all things I have learned about the world it is this, 
Anything is possible. 
And nothing has yet shaken that belief

Of course just knowing it has been enough to both delight me  and...

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Enslaving Love
             by Odin Roark

An eagle rides the updraft
Peering down at the happenings

Man's best friend wags his tail
Hesitantly

A bouquet of flowers seeks the...

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I Can't be discreet I wanna roll with the elite but the word on the street is I got a defeatist attitude, 
can't compete its not about gratitude. 
Trust me I'm thankful but its not...

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"Gazing at the rising sun and telling yourself- 'the new day has newer promises for me' fills you with gallons of fuel to run the whole day"- By poet


See life blooming in full and keep...

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8, A Trait Higher than Nature
Every Year Sing "Hallel" on July "11's",
A Stroke Grew Tall, Into My Life's Elm,
Prior, in 2005, Our Chassuna Dance!
Now, Our Foot "Pattie Cake" is Seldom.

8 Denotes Transcendence,
Judaism is Not in...

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8, A Trait Higher than Nature
Every Year Sing "Hallel" on July "11's",
A Stroke Grew Tall, Into My Life's Elm,
Prior, in 2005, Our Chassna Dance!
Now, Our Foot "Pattie Cake" is Seldom.

8 Denotes Transcendence,
Judaism is Not in...

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A turbulent year has faded out and a new year is before us. Many who were with us are no more. Many are maimed and marred in the battle of life. Let us hope that...

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Your face at my success, 
said I did not deserve it, 
then you would express, 
It was only worthless, 

all I think is are you thick
cus if you’re not you’re evil
treating me the opposite 
to...

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Wish all my friends on Poetry Soup a joyful, peace filled and prosperous New Year!


As the glow of 2022 has died out
When a new dawn’s halo is round the arc
Best wishes and prayers from all...

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Family should be loyal and caring
and not instigating. Accusations fly 
In the blink of an eye, they have no
appreciation of how hard you have 
tried.

When a daughter goes through bondage
and struggles, in a world filled...

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Mist and Blaze 

Mirror and my face
Down in sorrow a fraction of me 
A ice burning tea .

In a Place of  flakes of fake 
judgemental parade 

 I can't just sit and laugh in...

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Every now and then, every so often,
I'm approached by they needing advice regarding their poor situation.
I offer them what I know to be a most helpful suggestion.
The response I usually receive is, "That's easier said...

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Before the laughter cries
Defeatist tears flow down your eyes
  I walk on in my mind into the beginning this place
The space where God gives me Amazing Grace
Compelled to relish and sinful pride
Caught up locked...

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Permanently resting upon steel tracks,
 a retired rail car passes the time, 
weathering away.
Contents empty,
 it is a lonely shell, abandoned
 on an unused track
in an overgrown pasture,
   unseen and forgotten.
Tired after decades...

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Ruminating over the droning sound deep down my heart
Is a nerve wrecking experience of my hidden fear
Not of any suffering nor death of my loved and dear
Neither materialistic loss is suffering's counterpart

Losing my grit and...

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