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Greet the Fresh Dawn

"Gazing at the rising sun and telling yourself- 'the new day has newer promises for me' fills you with gallons of fuel to run the whole day"- By poet


See life blooming in full and keep smiling Grab the little joys the mind can contain Dismiss all defeatist thoughts surfacing Wait for the fresh dawn about to begin Inhale the clean air and begin again Hope for a better and happier day With greater appetite, life's zest regain New vistas will open and come to stay Downhill, the crystal clear stream glides gurgling Listen to its dulcet rhythmic refrain Put aside all smothering blues brewing Just cast away all sad and throttling pain Admire the purity of white flowers Those that open in the dead of the night Love nature with the fervour of lovers Feel glory in each sound and every sight
July.6.2022 ~ Placed First~ It’s All about Three Q’s Poetry Contest Sponsor- Constance La France Theme- Nature Syllable Count. 10 each (HMS)
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Peck Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 3:25 PM
Lovely poem, Valsa! It lifted my spirits! Congrats on you win!
La France Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest with your beautiful Quatrain, excellent writing and I love your image and quote, blessings ~ Constance
George Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 7:03 AM
It is my turn to thank you for the series of contests you organize from time to time in an impeccable manner. Also for liking my poem and giving it a first place win.
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August 4, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Valsa, this is just brimming with your "zest" for life - challenging us to embrace every positive thing, every small miracle leaving no room for the dark or negative to creep in and leave a permanent mark. Truly the dawn is an invitation! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of every good and glorious wonder to you!
Peck Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 2:17 PM
A lovely, upbeat poem, Valsa. So pleasing to read. Congratulations on First!!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 10:49 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your win. What a Lovely write/picture. Today be blessed as you write away...............
Pandit Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 7:21 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your first place, Valsa. So well deserved, as always.
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Back with Congratulations on your top contest win, Valsa. Best regards
Baker Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Wonderful expressions of natures attitude. Internalize the faith of nature and the appreciate the start of each new day. I enjoyed your poem and your quote, Valsa. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill
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July 6, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Nature can cheer us straight away! Joy begins in the morning! God bless you, Valsa!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 9:47 AM
A Lovely write/picture. Have a great/blessed day.................
Pandit Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 5:35 AM
Much exuberance in your talented poem, Valsa--as there is in the rise of dawn. Beautiful poetry! Best to you.
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July 6, 2022 at 4:59 AM
Valsa, The metaphors you built in your writing are magnificent, and the feelings they provoke are vivid and powerful. The beautiful verses and rhyming paired with your superb diction brought even more magic to your amazing poem. This is definitely going to end up on the winning side.
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July 6, 2022 at 2:45 AM
Great positive poem, dear Valsa. Perfect lines and rhymes. Best for a win.
Horsman Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 10:20 PM
Wow, this is a hard contest, Valsa, your poem, is amazing hope it is a winner...
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