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Last-ditch Effort


Final, strained breath drawn,
Hope's faint ember starts to glow,
One last push to rise.

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Premium Member Sacrificial Lamb

Streaks of pallid moonlight  
wash over blood-stained  
burnt umber leaf blight.  
Glistening stainless steel remains  
within wilting noir roses  
and blistered blades of grass.  
Sickening hands shake my repose,  
heart racing, sure to collapse,  
feeling faint.  
A revolting nausea elevates,  
trying to find restraint,  
as madness deregulates.  
A heart separated  
from a lifeless corpse—  
death awaits.  
Flashbacks play like static reports,  
too hard to get a clear picture.  
Splashes of splattered red fill  
spaces in between scriptures.  
Screaming echoes spill,  
dirty visions getting clearer,  
as the sacrificial lamb  
becomes the predator, evaporating fear.  
Fighting for the blade, fingers clammy,  
spinning out of control.  
How could you bring me to this?  
Steel cuts against palms, foretold—  
splatters of crimson spray, don't resist,  
covering fear-filled eyes.  
One last-ditch effort:  
grab the hilt and arise.  
On this deadening night, collect.  
You became Samhain’s sacrifice,  
a feast for the demonic nether, sanctified.

Premium Member Banana vs Orange

Written: February 23, 2024

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In a grove, a feud grew, no doubt,
Fruit factions were ready to shout.
Banana sought peace,
But his pleas soon would cease,
As the orange kept stirring the route.

With a temper as fiery as flame,
Orange sought to bear Banana shame.
He shouted and yelled,
While Banana rebelled,
Trying to douse the feud's flame.

But Orange was relentless and mean,
His anger turned downright obscene.
He challenged Banana,
With no sign of mana,
Creating a chaotic scene.

Banana, in a last-ditch effort, pled,
"Let's put this feud to rest," he said.
But Orange just jeered,
And sneered as he neared,
Determined to jam Banana with dread.


Reconsider Suicide

He was worth more dead than alive 
Told himself they’d survive
He didn’t think it was sin 
To violate one of the Top Ten 
Thou shalt not kill included himself  
It was in the dusty Bible there on the shelf  
With an empty heart and lost soul 
Life had become out of control
Last ditch effort to ease the pain 
He put a bullet in his brain 
Now his heart doesn’t beat 
But his spirit feels the heat
 
Envision continuous raging fires
Feel the smoke burn your eyes 
Smoldering sulphur in your nose
Flaming furnace without a hose 
Before you pull the trigger or ring the bell
Imagine an eternity spent in HELL

When the light looks dim at the end on the tunnel
GOD is the one to get you out of trouble!!!

A Gardeners Valentine

Please be my Valentine! 
I'm getting desperate now 
That you will never notice me 
Somewhere, sometime, somehow 

Even though I've tried 
To get some of your attention 
I'm nowhere on your radar 
I never seem to get a mention 

I'm feeling quite neglected
And I'm always overlooked 
I wish you would spend time with me 
Instead of that new book 

So in a last ditch effort 
I write you this poem in a card 
Please be my Valentine! 
Love from your overgrown yard

Premium Member Brown Marmorated Stink Bug

Brown marmorated stink bug
    
Two days of doing battle with this invading army.
Two days searching out to find where is their hidden lair.
Two days capturing dozens upon dozens of these onerous soldiers.
Two days the battles raged on behind and on the front of my curtains.
Two days trying to wash off the vile stink, their defensive, smelly weapon
Two days, my weapon, wads of toilet paper, picking them off, down the toilet
Day two, in an attempt, searching for mercy ?,  from the killer, this brave warrior.
Day two, two dispirit soldiers, the last two I hope, came to me and landed on my left leg,
as if they were pleading, in a last ditch effort, for their lives, the sword struck, in the toilet.

B. J. “A ”2
December 7th, 2022


The Virtually Perfect Family

Placid waters
Boat, mildly rocking
Cheerful faces
Picture perfect snaps
Posted on social sites
Flattering comments
‘Wonderful family’
Flashback
Happy memories
Happy?
Nay!
Last ditch effort
At calming
Inside turmoil
Save marriage
Children’s sake
Alas!
Unbridgeable difference
Between 
‘Perfect family outing’
And 
‘Not so perfect family’

Running From the Embryo

Heaped in the same organic embryo 
Forget the last ditch effort
To choose beyond the pail
Trading thin-ice thoughts
For a politeness to perpetuate 
The flimsy manner of excuse and apology

Your relationship to One
Like the poise of a rising Sun
That same energy to give or take 
Stacking collapsibles or elbowing for some space

Monday Morning Early

Rounded ovals of color fall loosely into the jar
shortly before the store opens
first rays of dawn creep over 
the houses, buildings on this small street

the children stir from their cocoons and rise 
put on their fall garb, wrap up tight
late September wind begins to blow
collars lift, boots are pulled on
nostrils flare, slightly red

traffic growls to life, busses hiss 
then vacuum seal passengers on their way
grown ups with no time to play

kids make a last ditch effort to fake sick 
then head out over the 10 blocks

a few stop by the store
look at the jar
pull out some coins
something sweet before school
to soothe the sting of challenges,
being so young.

Rapture

Autumn creeps in slowly
Tenderly, seductively
Summer giggles and blushes
Tickled by crisp exhilarating breezes
The colors of fall mesmerize her
She needs to feel the fiery reds and golden hues.
She longs to don their passionate splendor
Autumn’s tender kisses entice her
Swept away with reckless abandon
The excitement overtakes her
Enraptured in effervescent glory
Autumn sinks in
His force penetrating
Deep into the heart of Summer
His grip is unshakable
Summer struggles to hold on
The waning sun warms weakly
Flowers bloom in last ditch effort
She feels herself slipping away
The vibrant luring colors fade
Withering into brown lifeless forms
The once lush green leaves of Summer
Flutter helplessly down to the cold hard ground
Autumn, triumphant, drags his defeated prey
Onto the alter of Winter.
Giving himself over as well
The henchman lies down his life
Winter’s deep frozen death reigns.
A great, barren arctic tomb (womb?)
Under which Summer waits to be reborn
With Spring’s first gentle kiss.

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