Rapture

Autumn creeps in slowly
Tenderly, seductively
Summer giggles and blushes
Tickled by crisp exhilarating breezes
The colors of fall mesmerize her
She needs to feel the fiery reds and golden hues.
She longs to don their passionate splendor
Autumn’s tender kisses entice her
Swept away with reckless abandon
The excitement overtakes her
Enraptured in effervescent glory
Autumn sinks in
His force penetrating
Deep into the heart of Summer
His grip is unshakable
Summer struggles to hold on
The waning sun warms weakly
Flowers bloom in last ditch effort
She feels herself slipping away
The vibrant luring colors fade
Withering into brown lifeless forms
The once lush green leaves of Summer
Flutter helplessly down to the cold hard ground
Autumn, triumphant, drags his defeated prey
Onto the alter of Winter.
Giving himself over as well
The henchman lies down his life
Winter’s deep frozen death reigns.
A great, barren arctic tomb (womb?)
Under which Summer waits to be reborn
With Spring’s first gentle kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/23/2009 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Sara. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Sara! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:32:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/23/2009 9:58:00 AM
Dear Sara, Thank you for sharing this lovely feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 10/21/2009 11:19:00 AM
Well deserved poem to be featured this week.. Congrats....Rhonda Hero
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2009 5:55:00 AM
Interesting comparisons and metaphoric language. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/26/2009 5:24:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful images in this lovely poem Sara, a joy to read>>James
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