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Monday Morning Early

Rounded ovals of color fall loosely into the jar
shortly before the store opens
first rays of dawn creep over 
the houses, buildings on this small street

the children stir from their cocoons and rise 
put on their fall garb, wrap up tight
late September wind begins to blow
collars lift, boots are pulled on
nostrils flare, slightly red

traffic growls to life, busses hiss 
then vacuum seal passengers on their way
grown ups with no time to play

kids make a last ditch effort to fake sick 
then head out over the 10 blocks

a few stop by the store
look at the jar
pull out some coins
something sweet before school
to soothe the sting of challenges,
being so young.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/11/2010 9:20:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Sara.
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Date: 8/10/2010 4:24:00 PM
The sad time for some children that is the first day back at school..I felt the emotion in this emotive and expressive write..Good job..Sara
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