Gawked Poems | Examples

The Maze

I lay , Frozen in my own creation - The Maze
 It is gawked at by passerbys
Only to laugh and scrutinize.
They undermine the hold of them on me
Not one willing to stay and untangle the poisoned ivy parasitically preying

They comment at my state
And hand me empty maps
Telling me how simple it is to evade
Damned if I attempt to escape
I resign to my demise
Damned if I pray for a saviour
I attempt to sew my own tears
If only I was defined
If only I had refined
If only I hadn't mind
If only I'd been blind
Would the tangled vines remain intertwined?

If I tear through will I survive?
Or is it easier to stay docile?

I'm the prisoner of my own mind
Put on death row subjected to a perpetual decline,
Was it my fate to become like this?
Or was it a fault of mine?
I fear I don't have enough time to decide
For I'm next in line

Premium Member The Morning After

The consequences known, foretold for years, 
a crushing blow would break the country’s back,
eclipsing the most pessimistic fears,
a devastating night of blackest black…

The zealots would be working ‘round the clock
to mete out punishment to those opposed,
while sheeple, noses pressed to glass, just gawked
’neath red bills lest their faces be exposed.

Impossible as it might seem to most,
the world did spin much like the day before,
though once the quakes were dampened on the coasts, 
it tilted to the right a little more.

Go hug your neighbor, whether loss or win;
In four short years, we do it all again!
Form: Sonnet


Premium Member Confident Cousin Claire

At the laundromat a girl who could not find a chair
Sat in a dryer, her attitude was beyond compare
She did not care who gawked or gave her a stare.
I know her well, she is my self-confident cousin, Claire.
Form: Monorhyme

Premium Member How Much Longer Does a Woman Wait

how much longer does a woman wait?
she feels humiliated and gawked at
she got all dressed up to be jilted?
in public? In the fanciest restaurant in town?

She was thinking it was wedding proposal time.
Wearing her prettiest silk dress, it has been an hour.
Her phone dings. She looks down. I’m running late.
She leaves an hour later, finally getting it.

Premium Member Swaggy Doggy

Once, I saw a doggy, shaggy
His dress style was super swaggy
And when he walked
The people gawked
For off came his trousers baggy


27th February 2023

For "Put your best (one) limerick forward (be like Rico Leffanta)" contest

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Form: Limerick


Premium Member Gawking

Forty-eight, sixty-eight, eighty-eight
Age has no bearing whatsoever
When it comes to a gorgeous young filly
As long as she's breathing, that's all we need
When the time we have left gets short
We must use the time remaining
To drink in all the beauty that life has to offer
At the risk of sounding like a dirty old man
Please excuse my verbosity
I'm just trying to explain the working's
Of an old man's mind or ANY man's mind
Gorgeous women were always meant to be
Admired, gawked at and drooled over
Plain and simple... it's why we exist!
So here's to gawking, may I gawk forever
It sends shivers down to my toesies
With each sweetie that prances by
My wiggler starts wiggling
And puffs of smoke stream outta my ears

Premium Member Snowed

It snowed last night which pleased me - but hardly enough - it just teased me.

The thin, white sheet of snow looked bright and fresh 
the dull, browned hedges of fall became holiday dressed, 
the air had a sharp, chill perfume and the ground a new, sparkling flesh.

Lisa, a New Yorker who knows snow, gawked at me as if I were insane,
“You’re excited by NOTHING,” she sarcastically complained.

I replied, “When it snows there’s a quiet solace, and the world looks clean and flawless.”

The weatherman is promising us a blanket of snow this weekend
and that would be nice, a storm of ice, to lock us in as the week ends.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member 17, 37, 57

Seventeen, thirty-seven, fifty-seven
Age has no bearing whatsoever

When it comes to a gorgeous young filly
As long as she's breathing, that's all us guys need

When the time we have left gets short
We must use the remaining time

To drink in all the beauty that life has to offer
At the risk of sounding like a dirty old man

Please excuse my verbosity
I'm just trying to explain the working's

Of an old man's mind or ANY man's mind
Gorgeous women were always meant to be

Admired, gawked at and drooled over
Plain and simple... it's why we exist!

So here's to gawking, may I gawk forever
It sends shivers down to my toesies

With each sweetie that prances by
My wiggler starts wiggling

And puffs of smoke streams 
Outta my ears
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Whirling Watermelon Ride

I woke up one gray and melancholy morning
munching oatmeal and buttered toast, alone
same as yesterday, last week and maybe tomorrow 
when I saw a whirling wonder flying down the road. 

It whirled outside my windowpane
it whirled from head to toe
it whirled with neon pinks and greens
it whirled and twirled and flowed! 

I saw a bicycle with watermelon wonder wheels 
as they rode in tumbling tandem down the road 
and on it sat a generous, rotund lady ballerina 
with bright red lipstick, holding a bright red rose. 

She waved at me and smiled, as I gawked at her, alone
her hair flew wildly behind her, as she pedaled down the road
the clouds suddenly parted, and as the morning sun shone
joy filled my eyes, to see that watermelon ride 
whirling down the road.
Form: Rhyme

Five Little Boys

Five little boys climbed a tree
Perhaps they didn't heed of the banshee
They still had time to flee

She emerged out  the dark with her face full of glee 
With a Panthers agility 
The lads looked at her amicably 
Without realizing the abnormality

She heard a racket and veered back in confusion 
A girl came out a bush and gawked at the illusion 
She wailed at the phenomenon 

The witch lent a smile for she assumed it was her doing 
till she glanced into the girl's eyes 
and realized 
she wasn't looking at her but instead
she was staring behind 

The croon twisted to see
A sight she could never foresee
For the boys were no longer sitting
But  dangling from the tree
Form: Ballad

The First Time

The hand came forward to hold her wrist
While the other gave her breast a twist
The undressing slowly as he gawked
The deafening silence as neither one talked
She never gave permission to visit her tonight
He said he didn’t need it, she was his despite the fight.
Soon his hand grabbed at her thigh
And started up toward brown sky
With caverns underneath for exploring
Not a chance these caves would be boring.
He delved into the cave, flashlight in hand
Pushing and pulling against the soft sand
Which covered the floor of the cave he was in
He reached back slowly and grabbed her shin
When his search for gold was finally done
He left her as he found her, in the car, alone.

Written for a Creative Writing class in 1990, assignment: a court case given to us to reflect in a poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Blame It On the Moon

I lost my mooning contest 
   with the moon.

The odds were in my favor:
   two pallid orbs

against one: a sullen sack
   up there, barely engaged,

as the gamblers around me
  gawked. But

when the blood billowed 
   down to my noggin, 

I swooned, face dunk 
   in the mud.

Next day all the grog in Terra 
   below could not 

stake a rematch between me
   and that bad 

bulbous bag of apathy
   in the night, 

that orbital ogler flashing 
   its silk surveillance through 

our innocent panes
   and unsuspecting livers,

exposing our competitive 
   genitalia to alleged shame,

a heavenly body, distinguished
   by the negligence of its ilk.
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Hunky Man, For Rico

The hunky man with tarzan zeal 
had sexy buns made of steel   
when he walked 
the girls gawked
as they cried, Oh heh, can I feel ?
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Blue On Black

Blue knee to a frightened black neck
9 long minutes to kiss the heartbeat of death
many gawked while others numbly recorded
the burning would start come early morning.
The protesters are marching for sweet justice
the rioter lions want a long sip of pigs blood
looters are rooting just for freebies and fun
bear and panda dream of wrecking democracy
the anarchist want to nail mayhem to peace...
Now the wolves move in on the innocent sheep
now the entire free world is unable to breathe
by George may all the hate in this world cease~

Premium Member I'Ll See Myself Out

It was a whisper to his mate as they gawked.
It was no secret. Everyone thought it. 
“That one was rode hard and put up wet.”
I get it. 
I’d throw me out too, if I could.

Have you ever held council with a dumpster
trying to convince yourself that you’re not peers;
that you maintain social standing?

“C’mon buddy, you know you can’t be here.”
I don’t belong here
I don’t belong
“I won’t be long…
I just need to warm up.”

Pipe dreams down the pipe. 
I’ll just huddle in a dumpster.
Fill it with trash. 
Why am I trash?
“Don’t answer that. 
Who cares anyway…”

I've thrown myself out,

too.

3/16/2020

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