Feedback Poems

takes

Harvard’s a black hole, info wise.
So, let’s see.. what’s going on? What’s in the news?
Anything? Anything?

Hot take..
Not to be spicy and negative,
but sometimes i’m too much myself.
Too comfortable, open and vocal.
I can be opinionated.
Who knows who’s listening?
It could be anyone.
“That’s not red, it’s carmine,” I blirt.
There’s a rise and rush of feelings around the table.
FAQs

OF SAGE NATURING WORDS: A Reflection On Pontificating Words

In natured wording,
In what season can you say, 
“Never say never?!”
It’s said, “God never leaves us!”
Never will this not be?!

Never ever stop
Fighting for liberation;
No, never ever:-
Such audacious wordplay;
Saying, “Never say never.”

Friendliness equals self sustaining positive feedback fruit loop

Friendliness equals self sustaining positive feedback fruit loop

My humble apology
for inducing thee
to manure yourself 
thru figurative following poop,
best flushed down the toilet 
of the behavioral sink
why yours truly wretchedly reaches out
cuz I never experienced popularity 
as witnessed like craze of yoyo hula hoop
impossible mission to categorize 
one feeble hominid specimen as belonging 
to *****sapiens

Flashes Of Feedback

There are flashes of feedback 
when I try and listen;
Not from you, you play with precision;
It’s your echo;

The silence of what once was,
the times filled with just because;
It’s static that just won’t go away,
it’s your echo;

Feeling your hands 
digging fresh marks along my spine
turning the pit of my stomach,
it’s your echo drawing blood;

So deep I

Feedback

Feedback has beginnings and endings beyond one's

                control, disorder, and manipulation are the results of

                feedback. In the midst of and betwixt between a process

Strictly Positive Feedback

"Come over here guys...
 What a spectacular performance!
 Were the judges as impressed?
 I think there's a very good chance..."

"My darling, that was FAB-U-LOUS!
 It had elegance. It had style."

"That was so so beautiful!
 It made everybody smile!"

"Well, that routine was off the charts!
 I'm speechless once again..."

"Look! Craig's dusting off the cobwebs
 And he's

My Amygdala's Disambiguation

Methinks it's time for me to create
A rhyme.
My marbles have been scrambled and
Methinks it's quite a crime.
To lose the grand red Highway running athwart my mind.
all my T's and F's and Z's are running amuck.

It is the Amygdala's disambiguation
Messing up my brain.

I was making such amazing progress!
I was starting to achieve,
Intrigued I am - about

Thanks Ii Eucharis

I
Skills galore
Wills afore
Adam before
Uneven score
Evils galore

II
Reading, re-reading
Poems, Writing
Encouraging, engaging
Lisa, Linda, Harry, Joe
Suzette, Michelle, Insolent Rib

III 
Mystical Roses
Lyrical Crosses
Sometimes Glosses
Savior's Losses
Love's Roses

Feedback

Lovely feedback, makes me glow,
Taking time to let me know
That my efforts hit the mark
And even caused some smiles to spark.

A job well done feels great inside
But emails, texts and calls provide
An extra boost that’s guaranteed 
To let me know some folks agreed.

Of course, some feedback might report 
The opposite of true support 
Although, for

Sponsor's Feedback Minichu

Innocent memories 
Was a first trial on the Minichu contest 
Some queries 

Date extended 
Few more muses trickled in next 
Splendid!

Bizarre 
drew out the best 
Par!

Innocent memories 
Few more muses trickled in next 
Par!

3.10.2020
Note: Example of feedback from myself as a sponsor of Minichu contest. Soupers may like to write a feedback Minichu from their

Number of Views

I once posted a poem on poetry soup
I checked for feedback a while later
I smiled to find I had one view
It was enough to be a motivator
Every time I checked my views they increased by one
Then my smile faded when I realized I was my own fan
Celebrating my own views
A lone spoon for my poetry

Effective Feedback

Who would want a thermostat
unable to effectively regulate talking to itself?

We all long for recreative environmental response systems
of mutual listening wonder,
sacredly transcending mere domination of will-power
without bilaterally cooperative holistic prominence
of systemic identity ourselves.

Who wants a mono-disculturing GodSystem?
Unable to unite cooperative
and disassociate competitive 
and sometimes co-dependently paranoid
about overheated outcomes
runaway collective blow them off economies,
unlistening strings of

Feedback Echoes

Feedback Echoes?

I shout out into the dark void!
I cast my tunes out wondering?

My words transmit the pictures.
Mind floats on the notes I hear.

Giving heart rises and falls with the melody.
Great hurts and pleasures flow with the lyrics.

Spirit floats over the waves of light.
Sputtering packets of energy undulate!

Why do my eyes see what others do not?
Waves

Feedback

My thoughts
The bridges in my brain
My memory
My courage
The baggage of a name
Letters scripts projecting all the same
Contacting the central station of my brain
My brain 
It holds and release 
Messages increases
Para-thesis
Sneezes
Cripple loads paraplegic
Pieces 
Brought together whether we need it
Life begins photosynthesis heat bleaches
Turn colors creative catastrophic catastrophes repeated
Who is to see it?
Revolutionized revelation exceeded
Time capsule opened

Good Faces Feedback

sweet so worm's hidden 
                              sour's free from natural foes
                

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