Short Feedback Poems
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It's a howling love
poem yet unable to
write curly feedback
Anyway 7 rated
wonderful lovely poem
so glad to read it
sweet so worm's hidden
sour's free from natural foes
good faces feedback
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a metaphysical philosophy and dissertation on the many facets of life. all feedback and critique warmly welcome.
“Christmas Lives!!”
Christmas was…
Because Christ Lived!
Christmas is…
Because Christ Lives!!
Noels_Art
Comments: FEEDBACK WELCOME.
Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer
twinkling on a hunter’s wall this year.
Bulbs and ornaments animate his rack.
Day after Christmas, Santa’s getting feedback.
A Shotgun Gleaming
Spent Shells make noise in the forceful wind
Bodies lay lifeless
Note: Still learning how to create haikus feedback and help much appreciated!
this is propaganda [eggs]
this is your brain on propaganda [frying eggs]
any questions?
if you have any questions please provide your feedback
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Form:
Constructive criticism,
A term oft misused.
In enhancing another's,
Daily performance.
Be politically correct,
and leave less abused.
Positive feedback,
Encourages conformance.
I would like to thank everyone who has commented and gave me positive feedback. sometimes I get to depressed to even write but then i see that people actually like what i write. Thanks for the motivation.
- Jordan
Form:
My heart shakes with joy,
My cheeks sheen superbly,
My eyes stressing out,
When i hold no gloom.
I set my life at a save pace,
Everything around at peace,
An unexpensive feedback to life,
In turn an addition to live.
My wifey poo Cathie thinks I'm a weido poet
But the feedback I receive sure doesn't show it
They want much more
Of my limericks galore
Can't live without youse guys and she knows it
© Jack Ellison 2015
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artificial
logical, swift
calculating, processing, evolving
input, actuators, feedback, brain, heart, emotions,
feeling, loving, erring
frail, boundless
human
Oppressed and suppressed
Facing hate speech
Rude snarky remarks
Unsympathetic sympathies
Bully laughs
Bizarre comments
Negative feedback.
Note.Victim Blaming is common in Pakistan.
Stop meddling and mind your own business.
Life out of control
Dictated circumstances
Limited options
Thank you everyone for your time and feedback, much appreciated. I am trying to hone my
writing ability, so hopefully I am improving.
Anthony -http://artcomet.blogspot.com
What is the summary of these two poems : "on the memory of mr edward king, drowned in the irish seas by john cleveland, mark anthony;"when as the nightingale chanted her vespers dirge" by james shirley. Please I need feedback on these two poems.
In natured wording,
In what season can you say,
“Never say never?!”
It’s said, “God never leaves us!”
Never will this not be?!
Never ever stop
Fighting for liberation;
No, never ever:-
Such audacious wordplay;
Saying, “Never say never.”
Polar Vortex
Knock, knock, knock,
Open the door
The cold rushes in
Knocks me to the floor!
Lock, lock, lock,
Locking the door
Cold go away
Come back here no more!
NoelsArt
Comments: Minus something, it’s cold outside! FEEDBACK WELCOME.
Small iambic form named
Sonnet- is quite succinct
Scripted in fourteen lines
Sundered into three parts:
Stage- outlined in Octave
Sestet- four-line feedback
Summation- last two lines.
January 22, 2022
Contest: Your Choice 2022
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Jamming without an audience,
audience feedback limit’s you.
You must remain free and easy,
easy to do while just jamming.
Jamming with a brand new lyric,
lyric that has become complete.
Complete yet it’s unexpected
unexpected hits grow jamming.
I have a general tendency,
to not respond to comments left for me,
but please everybody,
do not take that personally,
because I do appreciate your feedback greatly,
but the truth is in all honesty,
that you're dealing with someone who is very awkward socially.
A Poem or two a day
May make things feel a little bit more okay
Find a place to post it on the internet
And feedback you might get
Stuck here near the Florida beach
Much creativity is in reach
We are winning this war
Since we know how to defend from being a bore
James was pretty good at his job
Left- handed nonetheless
Most thought it was not music
The kids just could not care less.
The feedback always washed him clean
The crowds breathed purple haze.
At 27, he died on Paisley satin sheen
Too much talent, he just ran out of days.
I have begun a short haiku series based on my favorite opera La boheme. This haiku may begin the series,not sure. Hoping for feedback. Thanks for reading.
le bon homme Puccini smiles
white magnolias
by concert halls bloom
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(c)sally Young eslinger 1/14/2021
I
Skills galore
Wills afore
Adam before
Uneven score
Evils galore
II
Reading, re-reading
Poems, Writing
Encouraging, engaging
Lisa, Linda, Harry, Joe
Suzette, Michelle, Insolent Rib
III
Mystical Roses
Lyrical Crosses
Sometimes Glosses
Savior's Losses
Love's Roses
sounds of living water
winter's mute snow moths
spring into thunderstorms
NOTE: There is some flexibility with the 5,7,5 syllable rule. This haiku used 6,5,6 syllables. Thanks for any feedback, or advice. (c) Anil Deo, 2017March28.