Elating Poems | Examples

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Premium Member SNOWY CHARM

‘Great Wonder to watch Winter's  shiny show of snowy  charm strictly speaking , a splendid 
       splendour,    

     Since born, staying only in summer zone,
     no idea of natural beauty in snow.
     So far tasted only ice cream cone.
     About snow fantasy how could I know?

     Debut of snow flakes in chilled attitude :
     on my first meet with serene snow scenario
     in a tourist spot on high altitude.
     Me slandering up, clouds floating below.

     Hanged icicle stalactites with pointed tips
     from roof of our hotel ! A great wonder
     We two to enjoy honeymoon trip !
     Snowy charm whelmed me ! Sheen splendid splendour !
     
       Shiny snow elating whiteness over slant path-
       Skating on silvery slippery snow downhill
       Fun in throwing snowball and jogging in mirth
       We ventured sliding on sledge on amorous thrill.

         I can reminisce fantastic snow fantasy :
         Metaphoric mirage drifting on dazzling ice !
         Enchantment of glossy massy snow turned classy.!
        Danced delight : Divine numinous noble nice.

Premium Member A Ducky Song

Waddle with me in a downpour of rain
Singing in a symphonious refrain
Jumping in puddles, splashing everyone 
Simply because we will have lots of fun.

We'll fluff up our feathers, inhale fresh air
Twist and shake until we have no breath there
Because we are smarties, we have it cracked 
And expertly do a ducky class act.

One two and then quack, one two and then splash
Allow alluring eyelashes to flash
Look to the left and then look to the right
Dancing and prancing from morning to night.

Then we can dream elating ducky dreams
In the wondrous world of fantasy themes
Arriving there, surely one can't do wrong
Waddling to the tune of a ducky song.

Premium Member A well

So few have ever understood me on a level well; so deep
Even less have I let witness my tears as they seep
They come forth in the darkness while others sleep;
Thoughts of you can be so elating when they creep
Finding the way out of them, climbing a chasm so steep
The glory amongst them is the harvesting I shall reap.
For the memory of that golden gaze, it is the one I shall forever keep.
It's within this lifetime; to love you is my most daring leap.
She takes hold, and then my strongest feelings sweep
To find a way to support her love, a life's goal, I must upkeep
Failing you is not an option, for if I did, filling a sorrowful well, I would forever weep.


Premium Member Zen mode

dead of the night we awake
Divine Mother has the right
awareness placid like a lake 
beholds truth in direct sight

that that is seen is a knowing
osmotically in us percolating 
doing nothing, we keep flowing
caress divine heart elating

Premium Member Star Seeds

As night time sets in, my arms wrapped around you, waiting
Feelings of warmth I share with you, mine inside totally are elating
A field of darkness springs from the horizon emanating
Star seeds infinity planted throughout it, germinating
I hold you as still water surrounds us, your beauty without debating
You exceed all expectations exceptionally in a word, obliterating
My unhappiness that was brewing and percolating
As you enjoy a dozen red scents, twelve times more happiness, I wish for you than I'm relating
Your enchanting, extraordinary, respecting you even after those growing stars no longer radiating

Spreading Happiness, One Dandelion At a Time

Slyly tiptoeing through fields of gold
Picking dandelions with a heart so bold
Rays of sunshine, he gathers his treasures
Each yellow bud a gift, his heart full of pleasures
Amidst the greenery, a young boy roams
Dreaming of spreading joy in his hometown
In his little hands, the power to enchant
Nurturing hope, his simple but grandiose plan
Giggling with glee, sharing his floral toys

He gallops amok, swirling amongst girls and boys
A smile on his face, a mission ahead
Puppy in toe, wagging a happy thread
Playfully skipping, he hums a blissful air
Inebriating smirkle, warm energy of a sun flare
Naturally a love for life, his twinkle infects
Elating the blessed with his giggled gifts 
Sharing his spoils with folks all around
Splendid smiles and laughter, his sweetest sound


Perfect For Me

We used to talk all night long
In the silence with no lights on
Saying goodbye and start talking again
Getting wet in the first rain
It was just magical to me
You were perfect for me
So please come back once more
I will hold you closer to my heart
After you, I was feeling so down
I need to once again hear your sound
It was just enchanting to me
You were perfect for me
It was a fairytale
So please text me back once again
I need to see your merry face
It is so hard to strain
It was just elating to me
You were perfect for me.

Spring Blossoms

What cascades pour light into my pores
with their holy waters, laving me
cleansing me of dusty layers?

What delicate fingers bloom my buds
with breezy touch, brushing my petals
making them flutter and dance in rhyme?

What surreal light my skin soaks up
with its rainbow colors suffusing
through and through my hollow being?

What bird warbles its soft melody
with verve, wafting around in my boughs
elating every nook and cranny?

Is it onset of sunny spring, 
herald of bounteous blossoms?

Premium Member Winter To Enter

WINTER

          Winter showing snowy splendor
              elating elegant whiteness
              in calm cold and chilly wonder.
              Silvery snow shines to impress.
              Chilled cold breeze blowing much no less.

              Snow falling as droplets of rain.
             Sledges slide on slippery snow.
             Snow caps on sky kissing mountain.
            Placid sky holds Sun in pale glow
           White  panorama to follow.
             
          Birch displays ivory white bark
           Boxwood hedges hide shy snowdrops
           Nesting success by bird sky lark.
            Snow flakes slipping on most roof tops.
            Frosty waves hitting winter crops.

          
     12/31/21

Premium Member Dying Ember

Gleam of our eye, dulled by stupor
Mind-body cage, becomes bondage
Our fickle attention wavers
Fears and desires, our heart ravage

Regret, remorse, inner conflict 
Gleam of our eye, dulled by stupor
With love aligned, our stance perfect
Propelling us to realms upper

Childlike joy and playful caper
Stifled due to ego craving 
Gleam of our eye, dulled by stupor
Self-blocking bliss throb elating

As is above, so is below
God omnipresent, our saviour 
With love flow, in stillness mellow 
Gleam of our eye, dulled by stupor

17-July-2021

Premium Member Sketchy

Holidays                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     
                                            halcyon, luxurious
                                       elating, inspiring, cheering
                                  feasts, beaches, rustle, holistic skills 
                                       worrying, depressing, startling 
                                              arduous, laborious 
                                                    workdays 




Written Mai 2, 2021

Spring or Summer Diamante Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

Premium Member Spanda: Path of Vibration

immediate here and now this-ness
integral wholeness indivisible
flow of innate aliveness 
in bubbling renewal

all of manifestation 
upon space-time screen
vaporises during cessation
whose essence we would glean 

we as limited entity here sentient
within this mind body encased
are cognisant to life current
flowing at an easy pace

duality requires polarity
needing pause of interchange 
void the pivot enabling continuity 
life stirrings both familiar and strange

choosing to immerse therein our attention
poised in restful attentive mindfulness 
we slip into trance meditation 
present in inky oneness

stilling not our stillness 
we let stillness still our being
reverberation Ohm in consciousness 
beginning-less endless throb thus renewing

identity yet remains so this not true oneness
even though we know of our expansion
revelation of all interconnectedness 
bestows mantras for meditation 

back to form in bliss elating
thought rested awareness present
we feel the sound of one hand clapping
in cave of our heart where love is resident

30-January-2021

Premium Member Winter Enters

WINTER ENTERS   
 
              Winter showing snowy splendor
              elating elegant whiteness
              in calm cold and chilly wonder.
         
             Snow falling as droplets of rain.
             Sledges slide on slippery snow.
             Snowcaps on sky-kissing mountain.
  
            Placid sky holds Sun in pale glow
            Snow-white passive panorama 
           Sunrays shine on silvery snow.

           Birch displays ivory-white bark
           Boxwood hedges hide shy snowdrops
           Nesting success by bird sky lark.

           Chrysanthemums: Winter glory 
           Also, Dahlias and snowflakes.
            Frosty weather is Winter’s story.
 
          Santa Clause, glad about reindeer.
         Thawing heart of barren winter,
         for little warmth come close My Dear. 


    12/20/20

  'Winter' Contest by  Emile Pinet

Rains

Rains

The sky had brightened up with different hues..
Everyone experienced a unique breathtaking view..

In minutes,.the clouds decided to have a rendezvous with mother earth
Nature welcoming it with glee was quite a worth

Rains came slashing with zest and vigour
Everyone waiting for it eagerly to savour
Truly drenched in joyous treasure

Leaves studded with dew drops appeared like garlands on trees 
Merrily swaying in the cool gentle breeze

Enriching the environment were radiant lovely blooms
Satisfying elating minds with happiness costumes
In turn snatching away all the gloom

Lo and behold...My heart knew no bounds..
Goodness gracious ! what a marvellous surround..

Suddenly as the rain shower lessened a bit
Clouds and sun rays playing hide n seek.
Vibrant colours of the rainbow were visible..
What a picturesque ambiance incredible !

Seemed as if nature had its beauty portray
Had put all problems for some time at bay

Premium Member Guru Chakra

The Guru chakra modulating
Flow of magnetic heat elating
It is the command centre 
Of the sublime divine raconteur
Unfolding our journey within
In chorus with all nodes singing
The hypnotic love song
For which polarities long
Following melody of the pied piper
Magnetism rises higher & higher
Union within the heart
In renewal each moment restarts
As an ignition 
In unending continuation 
An explosion 
Without cessation 
Teleporting us in blissful rapture 
An energy feeble mind cannot capture 
And yet if we do not resist
We be to become the bliss mist
Instantly 
Magically 
In the bliss continuum we are home
One with the pulse of Ohm

30-July-2020

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