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Happy Womens Day:The Beautiful Faith of a Woman

She has patience that defies great despair
In the face of age eroding her motherhood, Sarah waited and gave birth to a nation

She has penitence that overcomes shame
In the face of a cruel death, Magdalene braved the stones and shame and became a saint

She has loyalty that is audacious 
In the face of fear and the disciples going in hiding, Mary and Magdalene stayed by Jesus’ side 

She can be armless but still walk with defiance
In the face of bloodshed and an incarcerated husband, Winnie Mandela fought apartheid for a nation

She can switch from polite conductor to tough commandant
Carrying brain injuries Harriet Tubman was the female Moses who free slaves with armed invasions

Her beautiful face soaks up tears of pain but always shine bright again
In the face of a world of turmoil and hate, women give us the beautiful half of humanity

Happy women’s day!

Premium Member The Elephant and the Ant

There once was a little mighty ant
Who was extravagant and arrogant 
Known to be exorbitantly militant 
She was so combatant and petulant
They nicknamed her My Commandant

One day she came across an elephant
Elegant and obviously dominant
She started on her typical rant 
Then stopped and decided to recant 
Both agreed it was all very insignificant 

They chatted, it turned out the elephant
Was actually the ant's aunt
Suddenly the intolerant ant
Has become cheerful and exuberant
And now routinely breaks out in chant



Read on air by invitation  ~  May 26, 2020  'WORDS & MUSIC'

AP: 2nd place, Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on October 20, 2018 for MID OCTOBER 2018 CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

and February 23, 2018 for contest MAKE ME LAUGH sponsored by Robert Haigh

Lapse of Existence

As nightfalls come to fruition

Leaving room of conditions

For dreams to strive

And before dawn breaks

Memory ceases to create

So to mediate

Our corporal world

Into transient capacities

Of unborn fallacies

To mitigate now’s journey

Into sanctuaries bearing

All fruits of now’s nativity

In proximity to the ability

Of mystical remnants

Encompassing clear disordinance

When no clue of commandant has risen

To prove indifference

To whom

No one, not here, not now

As priors fall apart

In the discard of somber triumphs

Where cyclical is met first hand

Unlike tombs

Where nothing is apparent

And the rest

relies

on wonder

-Salvador Martinez


Premium Member Limerick: Once a Mom Tigress Spurned Her Lame-Born Cub

Limerick: Once a Mom Tigress spurned her lame-born cub

			for Commandant Cousteau’s son

Once a Mom Tigress spurned her lame-born cub 
Wild Life Champ admitted cub to his club
Took cub under his wing
Till she could wildly spring:
Club members now learn to swing the knobbed club.

© T. Wignesan – Paris, 2013

Snow In Poland

Snow falls on the brittle leaves of birch trees,
their branches miraculously overlooked by the December wind.
It makes a sound like the marching feet of scary Germans rushing through Poland.

Snow, mixed with freezing rain, 
falls hard on the roof of an unheated barracks in Auschwitz,
filled with men and boys in pajamas.
It sounds not unlike the far-off thunder of the radio in the commandant’ s house,
the angry voice of the Fuhrer.

Snow, descending from the sky like shaved ice, on a brittle day, 
5 maybe 8 degrees.
It covers the makeshift roadblocks in the streets of Warsaw, 
making little mountains — so pure on the outside but fetid, rotten, corrupt beneath the fine powder. 
This snow, 
this ice falling to the ground, 
sounds like Russian boots jumping over the mountains.

Rain in Gdansk,
a fine mist,
the smell of the sea.
It covers the streets, where men whisper things that will someday be heard 
and old women fall on their knees to pray the Rosary.
This rain,
it smells of freedom.

Losing Armies

Losing Armies (dignity)

May 1945, the occupying forces in Norway surrenders, a flag 
is lowered another one hoisted. The occupiers’ commandant 
hand his revolver to the man from the home front, there is
 dignity. The enemy now prisoners, go back to their barracks 
and wait to be skipped home to their country.

Another war, in the Middle East 70 years later, the occupiers
leave in the night unseen by the masses, they too have lost
but pretend they are victors. No dignity, only an unspoken 
sense of dishonor.  And the soldiers, of the vanquished army, 
will be demobbed, given medals and sacrifices are forgotten.


Premium Member Vistas

Vistas this morning blessings from above
Feeling the spirit, filled with his love

Glorious color words cannot describe
Orange or maybe apricot feast for the eyes

Blue/Black ink clouds stood still 
At attention for  the commandant review

He found them in perfection
No change he would have made

Gave his command for the continuance
Of the grand and stately parade

Birds in flight a swallow, 
Three crow just looking around

Observe the scene of glory
Not uttering a noisy sound

As the earth inches around
The day has to begin with a bound

How I long to hold on to these moments
All the way to the end of what promises to be

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