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A Fairy Tale

A Fairy Tale
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Once upon a time, long-long ago there was a wishing star.
She, unlike a billion other bright shining stars, was magic.
Bored with her galaxy, she began to wander far away.
Streaking through the atmospheres was very hot, but not tragic.

Pausing to wonder with much time to ponder, she cast her spell.
“Tiny goblins on Halloween, by light one wish I will grant.”
Who should be the recipient of this very special wish?
Earth children roaming streets that night in one hand my gift, I'll plant.

Oh who should receive my amazingly special gift of light?
So many young ones, in who's humble heart this wish I could grant.
Out of all the precious children that have come within my sight.
The child who has the purest wish is the one I will enchant.

I'll sprinkle on my chosen one, crystal glitters, gold balloons.
A ride follows to fairyland, ending on the golden moons.
With a magical flight through a rainbow high where dreams come true,
And a house of candies in the land of Marshmallow-Lagoons...

Oh, that magical light shining through sweet cotton candy clouds,
Her wish she may...her wish she might...there's one ghoul she'll bless that night.
Of princesses, fairies and goblins, a good heart will be found.
Quickly child, make your pure wish, before the magic star takes flight.

CONTRIBUTING POETS: Charmaine Chircop, Carolyn Devonshire, James Marshall Goff, John 
Loving III, Robin Gass, Raul Moreno, Ruben D. Ortellao, Patricia Prescott, 
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Premium Member Odyssey

"Human mind knows no constraints. Without spending time or money, one can make an odyssey into the outer space and even into other planets. What is needed is the fuel of imagination."  - By Poet



Outside, the night was gathering strength
How swift our lightning Sputnik,
Out running the speed of sound and light 
Shot into space with a violent jerk, leaving us psychotic.


At a distance were luminous spheres
Suspended like glowing lanterns
Comets and meteors in hyper space
Seemed more like diffused patterns


An asteroid came whizzing towards us.
I closed my eyes in dreadful shock,
Fearing a terrible head on collision.
Thank God! It deviated from our track!


I looked at my friend seated beside
Obviously not here, lost in thought!
Looking down, I saw Mother Earth
A luminous ball, not bigger than a sapphire dot


Oh! How quickly we landed on Mars
It is so different from what I had learnt
Neither a barren belt of sterile terrain
Nor a rugged stretch of craters burnt


But a heavenly place so cool and serene
Full of scintillating scenes and ravishing sights
We, the emissaries from a far away land
Were warmly received by a team of alien sprites


The weight of the world suddenly lifted from us
We bounced up and down almost floating in the air
Found ourselves in a gorgeous garden
With springing fountains and blossoms fair


Trees were laden with dazzling gems
Lagoons and lakes of liquid silver
Vast expanse of tawny vistas
Plains waving with luxuriant verdure


What fun…! Hmm…over there,
Nothing like those seen on planet Earth
A herd of animals so strange and rare
Grazing on red grass in a canyon of great width


Our restless eyes scanning all around,
We accelerated our pace in rising delight. 
As we were eager to explore every bit of ground,
We moved forward with enthusiastic gait.


Sudden was the sound I heard behind
And saw my mother standing near 
Puzzled and confused as I looked around
In my ears her voice fell ringing clear-
     
 “You lazy one, know this is exam time”
Rough and curt was her angry tirade. 
“Again you can’t play a dumb mime”
Her words made my afternoon reverie suddenly fade
      

I saw my open book sneering at me
And my uncovered syllabus, a vast sea

Premium Member Ceaseless Constellation

sometimes I sing 
antique anthems,
of the nights 
I was confined 
  within a bottle
of diamond tears,  
wept woefully
   from the widest sky
that held kaleidoscopic stars~
amidst festooned fields of 
pixie-dust flowers,
hanging like 
  starburst chandeliers, 
when t i m e was never in favor
of designing a
  heart-shaped galaxy 
to ease the 
  troubled torrents….
as languid linings
cast by the 
  sombre umbra
soaked me
  in melancholic sprinkles,
of what was left in my strength;
for I knew nothing
  beyond the evening clouds
that mirror 
    marshmallow musings, 
stained with 
    tuscan tones. ..

yet, I remember
    seeing your sunflower smile,
as I dreamt of 
    your mystical melodies,
spoken poetically,
   way before I knew you
   would become my reality,
though the homely hideaway
to my hopes 
   now fester amongst
corners of your 
     dusky eye lashes…
I’ve battled with nothing
   but obsidian obstacles
  that laid
in the 
    tiny tunnels
of my 
    crippled consciousness.

now our souls 
   seem chained in pearls
       and coiled in amethyst anklets 
as one, in stellar waves 
 through a 
   ceaseless constellation; 
 cosmic connection
endorsing these fingers
with your 
    poignant pantoums, 
aligning my heart to lay
within your
  evergreen embrace,
limited by 
  the lyrical land
you’ve lavished
my 
  longing lagoons into. 

so here I am, scribbling stories
    of our zealous zenith 
within your platinum presence~
as confessions disguised
    within tangerine tercets 
  of vanilla villanelles 
have now come alive,
amidst a rebirth 
   of a warrior meant
to b l e e d
vivid verses 
  eviscerating
   nacreous nebulas
into blissful b l u e brines,
that shall stream
through 
    unfamiliar  rivers of dragon roses 
     till every electrifying element
                       rests in  aesthetic harmony.


Premium Member Soft

“Just because you are soft doesn't mean you are not a force. Honey and wildfire are both the colour gold.” ~Victoria Erickson

Tonight the moon sanctioned 
her golden halo
to unfurl butterfly wings
rinsed with honey 
and champagne ribbons, 
as feathers of lunar crust rise,
to embellish the sky 
with silver sequins, 
drizzling second chances
upon fickle hearted dragonflies, 
gifted as weapons of 
deception to the sweltering breeze,
that wrapped my weakened knees. 

I’ve always known trusting 
is a losing game with no winners, 
but why do I always feel 
like an intruder sinking deep
into the depths of spiteful seas~
where planktons and stinging marine
nettles prick my untouched skin?

Yet I am still searching for 
a singing star that wouldn’t 
need written renderings of 
how my black tinted glass 
heart was left to drown.

Who would have thought, 
there’d be more to the 
onyx glittered
ripples that stream,
in teal blue waves?
If only they’d hear 
every unspoken tale 
of shipwrecked ruins
resting amongst graphite 
motions of frozen intuitions,
forgotten through forsaken 
lagoons amidst 
fleeting monsoons,
left as memoirs along 
soft coral mists swiftly 
passing through patch 
reefs in abandoned atolls.

So let me take my splintered
spheres to a realm of no return,
forgiving sinful anthems 
that lured me to believe
that friends were more 
than enemies in sweet disguise.

I am soft,  not fragile,
neither am I a 
shrunken blossom.
I am a tiger lily, 
fragrant yet fierce,
ready to face  whatever~
hypocritical fangs of fate 
may serve in merlot wine chalices.

Premium Member Seaworthy

under a  doting amber moon
beneath rolling crescent waves
the mermaid of his dreams
sways gracefully in rhythm
with his vacillating moods
capriciously oscillating
from depths to
crystal blue lagoons



AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on December 15, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL 3, ANY FORM, ANY THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

Originally posted on May 17, 2019

Premium Member No Prettier Sight

The Eiffel Tower gives up its power,
                               When seductive Paris we travel through.
                                  Mayfair is oft-huddled in a shower,
                               Tahitian lagoons lose their dreamy blue.  
                                Little awe Greek islands inspire in me,
                               The romance of the Taj Mahal does pall,
                                   An aurora’s magic I’m slow to see,
                                Each place we go I feel I’ve seen it all. 
                                  The eye no Saharan sky can excite,
                                  Few vistas thrill on a hot air balloon. 
                              The Arctic presents no breathtaking sight,
                                     In Rio I’m hardly over the moon. 
                             The loveliest scene pales next to your face,
                                And no glimpse of paradise can amaze.


Ensnare My Heart


"Ensnare My Heart"

By M. Taha Effendi

(Ballad)

O beautiful maiden of my captive heart,
Are you not the lone bard's pompous muse?
With allure that inspired the divine art,
Heavens' hand made you with such delicate use,

What sweet circumstance upon me befalls,
My heart the endearing perfidy has plotted,
Entombed in my bosom, it beats to your calls,
Loves beyond reason the heart besotted,

Let my soul swoon at your eternal beauty awhile,
Mesmerize by sheer fineness of your chiseled cheek,
Beguile by crimson roses that adorn your seraphic smile,
Savor in you the beauty of which poets speak,

Your eyes are gleaming lagoons of preserved vintage,
Shades the cerulean ocean from their depths did lease,
The jealous eye of heaven envies your radiant visage,
The blushing moon embarrassed cowers beneath the seas,

Would you shelter me in your silken veil perchance?
That imbue elation in those who wander in its shade,
And sways to cadence of zephyrs in an eternal dance,
To invoke dark urges of soul with a sublime serenade,

Premium Member Friend I'Ve Never Seen

A kindred spirit halfway 'round the world
I can not see his face only his heart
His kind words and verses reveal his pearls
Exuding confidence and mind so sharp
Does he hoist his sail with wind in his face
And drop his anchor in quiet lagoons
Or keep wind to the rear as if to race
Send dreams up high like helium balloons
 Does he smile and whistle returning home
Reconnecting to his past and old friends
Maybe stay in the present ne'er to roam
And live within and on no one depend
I think it would be nice to sit and talk
And to share some laughs on a friendly walk



   an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner  (DT)
    Pearls referring to pearls of wisdom in line 3

Blue By You

BLUE BY YOU

What’s Blue by me?  

Butterfly wings, 
the Blue Moth in flight,
stilettos, suede shoes, 
for dancing at night.
Moonbows and rainbows, 
in the spectrum of blue,
the eyes of your love, 
when he’s laughing at you!  
Purple Lupine, Periwinkle,
and Violets can’t be!
Forget-me-nots, Bluebells, 
are true bluer to me.  
Oceans, rivers, 
blue lagoons in the day,
on a raft or a sailboat, 
to blue Half Moon Bay.
Lapis, sapphires,
oyster shells from Cape Cod, 
Bettas and Dolphins,  
are deep blue in a pod.
Blue Willow, blue Fenton, 
Blue Delft on their stems,
Cobalt blue glasses, 
for wine with your friends.
You’re singing the Blues, 
when your down in the mouth,
your blue in a mood,  
if your spirits go south.
Blueberry muffins, 
blue cheese, and blue crab,
and blueberry buckle,  
that’ll run up your tab.
A Blue Footed Booby,
who’s feet look too cold,
a Bluebird, and Bluejay, 
whose terribly bold.
Something blue for a wedding,
sing alone with this moon,
“working blue” in a gig,
when a blue moon’s not soon!
Blue bloods are said, 
to be noble within,
but the silver in spoons
made them blue in their skin.
Blue dragons and Smurfs
and a painted Blue Boy,
stuffed hippos, and Eeyores,
are gifts of great joy.
We can’t forget, 
those blue denim jeans,
we lay down, to zip up, 
unless we are lean.
Baby and Navy, 
and Cornflower blue,
Steel and Teal, 
they’re vivid too.
Royal with Azure,
they share a bright blue,
Sky and Powder,
are softer in hue,
Electric and Space,
or a Midnight milieu, 
these are my colors,
now what’s blue by you.

-Edlynn Nau
©April 12, 2019
© Edlynn Nau  Create an image from this poem.

I Drown Within Your Most Beautiful Eyes - Valentine Collection

(Valentine's Collection)

50.

I drown within your most beautiful eyes,
through wonderful visions of precious love.
What visions I shall come to visualised,
come my beloved to Heaven above.
Sapphire eyes do become my paradise,
I now join your dreams, my beautiful dove.

I now swim within your lagoons of blue,
entranced by the blue sheen shining love-light,
Ever I see the glory that is you.
I lose myself in your eyes shining bright,
you are my delight.

10/02/2019.

Premium Member Heaven

The scent of jasmine in the evening breeze,
The glory of colors in autumn trees.
Love poems to enchant my impassioned heart
Sculptures, paintings and all forms of great art.

To hear children's laughter, play with them too 
Music of my choice that sings the day through.
To have animals to love and to hold
A floral garden with hues bright and bold.

Mountains in vistas that takes breath away;
Bathe in blue lagoons at end of the day.
Eat favorite foods and not gain any pounds
Never to argue, feel love that abounds.

To be with my soulmate, never feel blue,
To never grow old and keep healthy too.
Play any instrument I so desire
Raise my vibration higher and higher.

To meet up with kin and friends I have lost
For the price of dying , not a great cost;
Heaven is worth all the treasures on earth
With a wealth that consists of precious mirth.

Dancing with angels by light of the moon
Enchanted by magic until I swoon.
A sunset that lasts to put me to sleep... 
Feel cherished by God and graced by his keep!

9-3-18

Describe Heaven portrait contest 
Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal

Premium Member Abandon the Faithless flares

"The sun loved me again, when it saw that the stars would not abandon me" Jenim Dibie...

I paint on the blue-black arms of blank skies,
with pirouetting promises in midnight eyes,
no longer impatient for the dawning of hues~
manipulating the ache between ink and muse.

I breathe in silence, wrap my soul in rhyme-less forms,
to taste topaz tears of dusk, beneath swirling storms,
as I’ve long learned to sing with wistful stars alone,
amidst the warmth, cloaked within cold-chiseled stone~
flickers of grief, now veiled by bonfire blazes,
of melancholic memories and fleeting phases,
where love and light no longer collaborate,
yet sail like astral flames of fate that life must validate…

I ponder, do nameless ghosts of the sun recall my name?
For I crave not the fickle flares, nor to take their blame.
         I am kissed by the redolent rays~
of ruin and wild orchids in lilac moon’s haze,
surfing through lagoons drenched in marine dust,
fighting tilted tides mirroring broken trust…

So, let me abandon the scorching gold of sunrise~
forgive this heart, serving nothing but lyrical lies…

Premium Member Pillars of Mexico

Crumble
brothels sprout
flesh peddlers collect their fees
selling daughters
in twos and threes
Lopez or Diaz
lazy or defiant
escaped
in polluted lagoons
the virus spreads

Dancing with the dead
priests absolve the devils
in their mist
Pilar sold her virginity
for a few bars of gold
wrapped in an old ladies hatred
she murdered her vows

Mexico is a land of smiles
the knife only glints
in the Aztec sun
as they bury you
after eating your heart

Dominica

Dominica
Gawaine Caldwater Ross

We share melons and papayas
beneath a sun benevolent.
A salty breeze, the river is cool,
and the passion flower blossoms
are fragile but rich. We stroke
their fragrance and sip intoxication -
we slip a little further and
I find myself afraid of love.

Papaya trees are many breasted,
the flesh of mangoes, exquisite.
My restlessness is like the surf
seeking coral lagoons.
You speak in certitudes,
I dream of them.
Beyond the coconuts shining
in your eyes
I see gazelles outrunning lions -
you laugh,
I recall November sleet.

Your stainlessness and artless joviality
are in contrast to my venery.
But in honor of your being 
I play Schumann on the flute.
You respond with a noble clarinet,
Royal, but so voluptuous.

You think love means saying “Yes,”
I think love means bleeding.
You say, “That's a grim thought.”
I say, “Life is grief.”

We are divided by that which attracts us -
even as you speak of trust
I see the void behind the stars.
You speak of freedom,
possibilities, and taking risks;
but I have been to prison:
Saturn has bound me with rings of lead,
the acid rain has stained my face.

We lay our cards out on the purple silk:
today they say I am the Hanged Man.
Are you the Queen of Swords,
or the Priestess holding 


nine bright cups of Dionysian wine?
You smile and ask,
“Where, oh Where, is the
void in ecstasy?”

We strip and go against the current.
The water here is swift and cold,
the sunlight revels on your
scintillating buttocks.
I follow towards the cataract
and drink the water that has caressed your thighs.
You shriek, the monkeys leap,
and I wrestle with a jaguar.

You summon me to join you
high up on the rocks
where the moss is a foot thick.
I manage half a fervent laugh
And watch you diving into pools.

Opals ripple on the water.
We gather oleander, orchids,
Lilies and lotuses
and weave them into garlands
and in the falls we

linger in the timeless spray.

Premium Member Element Earth Gaia's Gift

I stand here looking out across the land
At sun kissed pineapple plants row by row.
Green tops on red earth outwardly expand.

Rich volcanic soil filtered throughout time
Has grown many harvests of sugarcane;
Papayas, lychee, and mangos sublime.

These islands are a melting pot of souls
Who love to surf and swim in waltzing waves,
Laze in lagoons protected by sea shoals.

Steep sweeping mountains overlook the sea
With climbing trials that lead up to hill tops,
As Earth gives birth to every plant and tree.

From precious gems and metals that abound,
To minerals and herbs to make us well,
We are blessed by Earth's bounty from the ground.

Rising Earth began with islands, you know?
As steaming lava flows toward the sea,
Hawaiians feel honor watching Earth grow.

Contest Element Earth Part 1
Sponsor Brian Davey
March 13, 2016
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