Get Your Premium Membership

Ceaseless Constellation

sometimes I sing antique anthems, of the nights I was confined within a bottle of diamond tears, wept woefully from the widest sky that held kaleidoscopic stars~ amidst festooned fields of pixie-dust flowers, hanging like starburst chandeliers, when t i m e was never in favor of designing a heart-shaped galaxy to ease the troubled torrents…. as languid linings cast by the sombre umbra soaked me in melancholic sprinkles, of what was left in my strength; for I knew nothing beyond the evening clouds that mirror marshmallow musings, stained with tuscan tones. .. yet, I remember seeing your sunflower smile, as I dreamt of your mystical melodies, spoken poetically, way before I knew you would become my reality, though the homely hideaway to my hopes now fester amongst corners of your dusky eye lashes… I’ve battled with nothing but obsidian obstacles that laid in the tiny tunnels of my crippled consciousness. now our souls seem chained in pearls and coiled in amethyst anklets as one, in stellar waves through a ceaseless constellation; cosmic connection endorsing these fingers with your poignant pantoums, aligning my heart to lay within your evergreen embrace, limited by the lyrical land you’ve lavished my longing lagoons into. so here I am, scribbling stories of our zealous zenith within your platinum presence~ as confessions disguised within tangerine tercets of vanilla villanelles have now come alive, amidst a rebirth of a warrior meant to b l e e d vivid verses eviscerating nacreous nebulas into blissful b l u e brines, that shall stream through unfamiliar rivers of dragon roses till every electrifying element rests in aesthetic harmony.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/10/2024 2:18:00 AM
Indeed you are a great poet with your aesthetic harmony. Such beautiful poetry. I was surprised by your metaphoric phrases that depart from the usual oft used imagery. That's what makes me wonder as I read your poems knowing I can never reach your heights.
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:01:00 AM
Awwn thank you dear victor, thats such a kind thing for you to say, i admire your poetry too.
Date: 4/9/2024 9:34:00 PM
This wa an intriguing piece kelp my mind dances many blessings
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:04:00 AM
Awn thank you so much dear
Date: 4/9/2024 1:16:00 PM
Lots of gorgeous images and a profound message in this one, Ink. I found this little phrase so adorable: marshmallow musings. They must be very sweet!!
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:08:00 AM
Awn thank you so much sweet andrea im so grateful for your support always
Date: 4/9/2024 10:30:00 AM
This on the day of the solar eclipse, makes it more special. "pixie-dust flowers, hanging like starburst chandeliers", sounds dazzling, your poetry flows so easily, Empress, streaming steadily and cascading now and then, which makes its deepest thoughts come alive! I love tangerine tercets, all of it...Electric! hugs~Anaya
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:13:00 AM
Awwn thats such a sweet comment dear anaya, i am so grateful for your kindness and selfless support. Truly. Appreciate always your poetic presence
Date: 4/9/2024 7:29:00 AM
This exciting poem was written with the flair of genius. It appears there is nothing too large for your pen. "When time was never in favor of designing a heart-shaped galaxy" transported me to the outer edges of the Milky Way where I view all of eternity. A delectable poem. To fav.
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:15:00 AM
Awwn dear hilda im truly honored! That you thought of this poem as a fav! Truly, thank you so very much . … im always grateful for your poetic presence
Date: 4/9/2024 5:10:00 AM
Wonderful poetic symphony, my friend--that reverberates throughout in delightful vocabulary: --yet, I remember seeing your sunflower smile, as I dreamt of your mystical melodies, spoken poetically, way before I knew you would become my reality,----amidst a rebirth of a warrior meant to b l e e d vivid verses eviscerating nacreous nebulas into blissful b l u e brin---you are gifted, Ink.
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:20:00 AM
Dear Vijay, im always grateful for your kind and generous support truly from the very beginning. Thank you so very much for leaving sincere comments always
Date: 4/8/2024 7:46:00 PM
I always say poetry and manifestation goes hand in hand. It's like a prophecy and that's why I call poets gods. Yes, you write them and they come into reality. That's who you are. "when t i m e was never in favor of designing a heart-shaped galaxy." Time is never in favour of anything. Lol. Heart-shaped would really have been amazing. I always love to imagine your descriptions and metaphors. "confined within a bottle of diamond tears." Loved this line. I hear mermaids' tears are diamonds.
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:21:00 AM
Ah maybe i am a mermaid awwwn you are truly such a kind and generous soul, i always am grateful for your selfless support and uplifting comments that make me feel heard. Sending you light always poetic soul
Date: 4/8/2024 6:50:00 PM
why is it that when I read your poetry dear Ink, the world of black and white suddenly blooms with every color. Your awesome, !
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:54:00 AM
Awwn haha yes i love colors… to paint darkness over. Thank you so much sweet rose
Date: 4/8/2024 5:47:00 PM
Beautiful incarnate, loved the alliteration throughout- <3 you're a gem in my circle of writers that I love, I absolutely love your voice
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 3:57:00 AM
Awwn sweet paige you are so kind thank you so very much
Date: 4/8/2024 5:38:00 PM
sorry, running out of time this evening...will comment tomorrow...at first read, though, I was quite taken by your poem till then, Sara :-)
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 4:00:00 AM
Awwn pls take your time! Im grateful that you took time to visit my page too! Sending you light always
Date: 4/8/2024 4:20:00 PM
I bow to your mystical word usage that paints pictures of refined thought from a creative mind with a poetic verse that invites the reader into a garden's realm of poetry
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 4:05:00 AM
Ah thats such a kind thing to say truly im grateful for your generous and sincere support thank you so very much
Date: 4/8/2024 2:54:00 PM
this is so beautiful, the images are so creative and brilliant, enjoyed your imagination here yann
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 4:05:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much
Date: 4/8/2024 2:37:00 PM
Dear Ink, This poem is a captivating exploration of the depths of self-discovery and the profound connection that love can bring. It skillfully delves into the trials of the past and the transformative nature of a romantic relationship. The story beautifully captures the experience of triumphing over challenges and discovering peace and togetherness. The writing is beautifully descriptive, capturing the essence of emotions and surroundings with phrases like "tears like diamonds," "fields adorned with beauty," "stars like a kaleidoscope," and "nebulae with a pearly glow." The combination of simple and complex language amplifies the richness and complexity of the imagery.
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 4:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much for such a beautiful and thoughtful comment! So grateful for your poetic support from the very beginning! Truly!
Date: 4/8/2024 12:41:00 PM
was confined within a bottle of diamond tears,..oooo that imagery!! when time was never in favor of designing a heart-shaped galaxy to ease the troubled torrents…. Ooo that is beautifully articulated!! for I knew nothing beyond the evening clouds that mirror marshmallow musings, obsidian obstacles that laid in the tiny tunnels of my crippled consciousness. oooo those alliterations !!! now our souls seem chained in pearls and coiled in amethyst anklets as one,.. in love with the heaviness of this piece
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 4:14:00 AM
Papi thank u for taking your time to read and comment
Date: 4/8/2024 12:31:00 PM
Your poems are always great . I love the ending once Again …
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 4/10/2024 4:14:00 AM
Dahlin thank u so much

Book: Shattered Sighs