Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Seaworthy

Under a doting amber moon
beneath rolling crescent waves
the mermaid of his dreams
sways gracefully in rhythm
with his vacillating moods
capriciously oscillating
from depths to
crystal blue lagoons



AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on December 15, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL 3, ANY FORM, ANY THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

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Gregory Richard Barden December 17, 2019 at 5:52 AM Gorgeous imagery! Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest,Line - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3 Line Gauthier December 17, 2019 at 8:59 AM Thank you so much, Gregory. Most appreciated.

Na Na December 16, 2019 at 3:02 PM Congrats on your winning poem Lin Line Gauthier December 16, 2019 at 4:35 PM Thanks, Gregory.

Gershon Wolf May 23, 2019 at 6:46 PM I'm one with M.L Kiser on this instant FAVE, Line. This is really so perfect: Rhymical, romantic,...Seaworthy, indeed!! Best wishes, Gershon Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 7:11 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

M. L. Kiser May 21, 2019 at 2:26 PM Had to "fav"; beautiful and tranquil. Line Gauthier May 21, 2019 at 7:07 PM Thank you, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Kim Rodrigues May 17, 2019 at 7:05 PM Sways with his vacillating moods...so cool! Line Gauthier May 17, 2019 at 9:13 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.

Tom Cunningham May 17, 2019 at 5:30 PM Love the imagery in your verse Line. Tom Line Gauthier May 17, 2019 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated.