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Crumble brothels sprout flesh peddlers collect their fees selling daughters in twos and threes Lopez or Diaz lazy or defiant escaped in polluted lagoons the virus spreads Dancing with the dead priests absolve the devils in their mist Pilar sold her virginity for a few bars of gold wrapped in an old ladies hatred she murdered her vows Mexico is a land of smiles the knife only glints in the Aztec sun as they bury you after eating your heart

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Date: 10/8/2018 2:07:00 AM
Wow.
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Date: 10/7/2018 10:47:00 AM
Wohhh, nice, very nice
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Date: 10/6/2018 7:20:00 PM
A world of sin that eats the innocent ... I hope and pray that the innocent will prevail and sin will cease to exist .. The last stanza is very beautiful..
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Date: 10/6/2018 7:37:00 AM
A dark verse Arthur, your last stanza reminded me of that Mel Gibson film, Appocalypto. Tom.
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Date: 10/6/2018 2:40:00 AM
such a deep dark sad write Art but the final stanza lifts the piece:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/6/2018 2:28:00 AM
That is such a beautiful, yet sad poem... especially that final stanza. Well done my friend
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