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written for the contest sponsored by "constance la france" i chose the word " soft" 

Soft

“Just because you are soft doesn't mean you are not a force. Honey and wildfire are both the colour gold.” ~Victoria Erickson

Tonight the moon sanctioned 
her golden halo
to unfurl butterfly wings
rinsed with honey 
and champagne ribbons, 
as feathers of lunar crust rise,
to embellish the sky 
with silver sequins, 
drizzling second chances
upon fickle hearted dragonflies, 
gifted as weapons of 
deception to the sweltering breeze,
that wrapped my weakened knees. 

I’ve always known trusting 
is a losing game with no winners, 
but why do I always feel 
like an intruder sinking deep
into the depths of spiteful seas~
where planktons and stinging marine
nettles prick my untouched skin?

Yet I am still searching for 
a singing star that wouldn’t 
need written renderings of 
how my black tinted glass 
heart was left to drown.

Who would have thought, 
there’d be more to the 
onyx glittered
ripples that stream,
in teal blue waves?
If only they’d hear 
every unspoken tale 
of shipwrecked ruins
resting amongst graphite 
motions of frozen intuitions,
forgotten through forsaken 
lagoons amidst 
fleeting monsoons,
left as memoirs along 
soft coral mists swiftly 
passing through patch 
reefs in abandoned atolls.

So let me take my splintered
spheres to a realm of no return,
forgiving sinful anthems 
that lured me to believe
that friends were more 
than enemies in sweet disguise.

I am soft,  not fragile,
neither am I a 
shrunken blossom.
I am a tiger lily, 
fragrant yet fierce,
ready to face  whatever~
hypocritical fangs of fate 
may serve in merlot wine chalices.
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Hind Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 5:16 PM
In my favs! This is amazing work, Ink. <3
La France Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 9:10 AM
Ink, you have penned a lovely poem and love your quote, congratulations on your win in my contest, hug, Constance
Brul Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 6:14 AM
Rich imagery that flows like silk, your expression is just divine! Congratulations dear Ink!
Beaufort Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 7:05 PM
IE, soft is also sexier! I'm not fond of hardness in relationships. Of course, it does sometimes create brief difficulties if with an insensitive person. However, like you say, soft can be strong and deal with anything!!!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I loved reading your wonderful "Soft" write. Yes, "I am soft, not fragile." So True... Have a great day with your wonderful win..................
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 11:22 AM
I love how you worked the idea of the quote into your poem. I remember seeing that quote as well when I searched for good quotes on soft. Well, at least something similar to it. Beautiful as always, Ink
George Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 6:59 PM
"I’ve always known trusting is a losing game with no winners." Being soft is what makes anyone strong. It's a good thing to trust someone until it's not. I'd rather not face the ache that comes with it. It's like putting your fate in the hands of someone, who doesn't trust themselves. I loved this line too, "ready to face whatever hypocritical fangs of fate may serve in merlot wine chalices." Accepting to face anything is the step needed for growth.
George Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 6:59 PM
We are ready to dance in whatever deceit that comes with it. They have fangs, you have claws. You'll sip wine until someone needs to be punched.
George Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Each line you write is pregnant with meaning. You are emptying your heart clogged with betrayals and deceptions from those you took to be friends. "So let me take my splintered spheres to a realm of no return, forgiving sinful anthems that lured me to believe that friends were more than enemies in sweet disguise." Despite all such betrayals and deceptions, life is to be lived with resilience and grace. Your concluding stanza shows the srength in you. "I am a tiger lily, fragrant yet fierce, ready to face whatever~ hypocritical fangs of fate may serve in merlot wine chalices." Powerful poetry, dear Empress
Rose  Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 8:24 PM
lol your beautiful essence lives within you, you should be proud to be that tiger lily that you are. May the sun always warm your petals, and God bless you with rain, and abundance, dear Ink :)
Greenhough Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 6:06 PM
I enjoyed this poem and the concept it tells. Softly, quietly, bravely.
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 1:57 PM
Another fine rendering in your superb vocabulary, my friend. Intense emotions resonate throughout enhancing your theme.--I am soft, not fragile, neither am I a shrunken blossom. I am a tiger lily, fragrant yet fierce---impactful!
Poet Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 12:51 PM
Dear Ink, Your poem shows great skill. Your exploration of the theme, weaving celestial imagery with emotional turmoil, captivates me. You beautifully capture human emotions, revealing vulnerability and strength. Butterfly wings in honey, champagne ribbons, second chances like sequins, a glimmer of hope amidst uncertainty. Trust, once broken, is impossible to repair. May you find solace in the night, may the seas of the condemned not disturb your peace. Good luck with the contest, poet friend.
Parker Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 8:20 AM
trust is a bond once broken and can never be repaired...as you search the night find peace and not turbulent seas from those Dante relegated to the fiery pits...good luck, dear poet
One Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 8:18 AM
I think this is the first 'soft' word poem I have seen for this contest.. I love your quote and take on the theme.. Your poem captures a beautiful celestial imagery and emotional turmoil.. It shows the complexities of human emotions, painting a vivid picture of vulnerability and resilience. The imagery of butterfly wings rinsed with honey and champagne ribbons, juxtaposed with the notion of second chances drizzling like silver sequins, evokes a sense of hope amidst uncertainty.. Through the symbolism of the tiger lily, it asserts strength and determination in the face of adversity, refusing to be defined by fragility or past betrayals. This poem resonates with its raw emotion and evocative imagery, inviting readers to reflect on their own journeys of resilience and self-empowerment.. BOL in contest.
Rhymes Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 7:00 AM
The ending is just wow … amazing
Empress Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 7:20 AM
Ah thanks dahlin
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