On the Eve of Christmas

The poor boy heard Christmas beckoning at the door
He saw every house bright with many a lamp
And streets illumined with colorful lights and stars
But his tiny hut looked dismal n’ dark like a prison camp

With a suppressed sigh, he inhaled the festive air
His little heart grew weary and dim
There has never been a merry Christmas in his life
As the days advanced, he grew moody and glum

He, born into a cheerless, crammed shack
With parents so poor having very little means
To bring up their children and foster a family of seven
At a tender age, saw shattered all his budding dreams

One evening, on a leisurely walk from school
The boy saw a man selling colorful balloons
With the little penny tucked safely in his trouser pocket
He bought a balloon and headed straight to the lagoons

There as he sat on the sprawling silver sands
A strange idea had come upon his little head
To send a letter to Heaven asking for some urgent help
Hoping Jesus would help, he too being born a poor kid

On a white paper he carefully scribbled these lines:
“Merciful God, look upon us, this miserable seven
Here in our humble hovel, we die of hunger and cold
On this Christmas, send us a little cheer up from heaven”

He folded the paper and fastened it to the balloon
Nevertheless he didn’t forget to put his full address
When the wind was strong, he let it go off his hands
And watched it soar high with his earnest plea for redress

Days went by and the awaited Christmas Eve arrived
While the world splurged in all gaiety and merriment
The poor hut remained dull and cheerless as before
The helpless parents were lost in grim bafflement

Abruptly, there halted a Mercedes before the hut
A man, old and graying with a graceful smile
Alighted with his hands loaded with Christmas gifts 
Looking for the boy, he had traveled many a mile

It was during one of his daily strolls around the lagoon 
That the gentleman saw a balloon suspended on a willow tree
The white paper tied to it made him curious
He took it up and saw an innocent’s earnest plea

The man so rich and kind was moved at heart,
He from his wealth decided to donate a large sum
To support that family of seven in dire straits
And give them the merriest Christmas with no trace of gloom

The little boy believed Jesus had answered his prayer
He came in the guise of a man, he had never before seen
With rising delight, he saw a star in the graying sky
It shone right over his head with a brighter sheen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/27/2021 12:03:00 PM
This was a lovely Christmas story, I believed God did answer his prayer. Thank you for writing it. Blessings ~ Debra
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Valsa George
Date: 12/28/2021 1:57:00 AM
Yes, God answered his prayers ! If we believe, miracles will happen ! Thank you so much dear !
Date: 12/24/2021 10:16:00 AM
Jesus in a Cadillac? I am surprised I haven't seen that on TV! Enjoyed!
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Date: 12/25/2021 11:33:00 PM
Ha.... ha ! If all those who travel in luxury cars are Cadillac, you too are one... Thanks a lot Rico~~
Date: 12/24/2021 8:08:00 AM
Grinding poverty and homelessness are both very real, and a miraculous such type you correctly identify seems encouraging, especially during the holiday season. With this storyline, you're a prodigy, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 12/26/2021 10:03:00 PM
When we see starved lives around us, we should feel sorry for our over indulgence. Thanks for your great sentiments of compassion !
Date: 12/24/2021 4:32:00 AM
Your story tugs the heart! Once in a while the divine blessings come through as your poem so brilliantly illustrates, Valsa. Poverty and suffering are both so real---a miracle such as the one you describe feels so comforting--apt for the festive season.
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Date: 12/26/2021 9:59:00 PM
Seeing some lives, I wish if some divine intervention had taken place... ! Hearing of such mercies descended itself is a joy. Thanks a lot Vijay for your kind comment !
Date: 12/24/2021 1:32:00 AM
A beautiful Christmas story Valsa it should be POTD tomorrow. A fave for me. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 12/24/2021 3:32:00 AM
This comment I cherish a lot from a master story teller and am ever thankful to you, dear Tom ! Stay blessed and let more and more rhyming poems flow from your pen...
Date: 12/23/2021 11:16:00 PM
You are a genius with this narrative. Wonder if as thews spread, we see the lagoon full of balloons. May your Christmas be a happy one for you and family. Victor
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Date: 12/24/2021 3:29:00 AM
i am never a genius,Victor ! After reading many good poems of all of you here, I get inspired and there is always a desire in me to improve. Thanks a lot dear poet friend who is always there to encourage me...
Date: 12/23/2021 9:02:00 PM
A heartwarming spiritual tale of hopefulness, overcoming despair. Thanks Valsa!...ab
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Date: 12/24/2021 3:26:00 AM
Thanks a lot Ansemo. When despair is overcome by hope, miracles happen ! Thanks a lot for your sweet comment !
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