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I Drown Within Your Most Beautiful Eyes - Valentine Collection

(Valentine's Collection) 50. I drown within your most beautiful eyes, through wonderful visions of precious love. What visions I shall come to visualised, come my beloved to Heaven above. Sapphire eyes do become my paradise, I now join your dreams, my beautiful dove. I now swim within your lagoons of blue, entranced by the blue sheen shining love-light, Ever I see the glory that is you. I lose myself in your eyes shining bright, you are my delight. 10/02/2019.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/30/2019 2:19:00 PM

Your gentle humbleness and love for life and love is so powerful and evident in your poems Mike - wonderful writes, all of your poetry! Hugs, Jenny.

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 3/30/2019 1:31:00 PM

A delight some poem Mike, love is the actual language that can keep all minds happy..

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/3/2019 9:20:00 AM

Great poetry my dear friend. In my youth I often drowned in the eyes of those I had loving relationship with. A poet's heart rules in such matters. Truly enjoyed this well crafted romantic piece.. A fav..

Charles Messina

Date: 2/11/2019 8:52:00 AM

Wow, Mike. What a beautiful collection of Valentine's sonnets you have penned. I have read quite a few of your amazing poems. Great pen my friend. Have a great week...Charlie

Vladislav Raven
Date: 2/23/2019 10:23:00 AM

Hi Charles, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you the piece. I thought it would be easier to write this Sonnet the way the form is set out but it was the opposite. I always went onto the Sonnet. Finally got there though. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/10/2019 6:06:00 PM

This is so bright and beautiful. I enjoyed it :)

Vladislav Raven
Date: 2/11/2019 6:40:00 AM

Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. What joy to drown within a pair of beautiful eyes. So happy you enjoyed the read Heidi. The heart is still singing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2019 3:50:00 PM

How wonderful it is to drown in a loved one's beautiful eyes, Vladislav! Your Valentine's collection would uplift hearts on any day of the year. Hugs for you, Carolyn

Vladislav Raven
Date: 2/11/2019 6:28:00 AM

Hi Carolyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is wonderful indeed to drown within a beautiful pair of eyes. Glad you are enjoying the collection Carolyn. The heart is still singing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/10/2019 2:15:00 PM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. Hugs....Mike. XX