Paloma P Poet Prose Poetry

Wholly Immersed

Your tender voice anointing my ears
        the delectation of my spoken name
that look of adoration in your eyes,
 speaks to me softly 'neath intensely lit moons,
    'midst subtly mesmerizing whispered passion
             lost in quintessential heart's surrender

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Anthony Mark October 17, 2016 at 5:50 PM You have a way of seducing the words to great effect, ....lovely wordage throughout...well done....Ian Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:07 PM Seducing words, oh I like that, thanks so much Ian.

Charmaine Chircop October 17, 2016 at 3:43 PM So very beautiful ! Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:06 PM Thanks Charmaine!

Chris Green October 17, 2016 at 3:19 PM This is a love poem extraordinaire. Absolutely beautiful Paloma. It leave the reader breathless. Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:05 PM Wow, now I'm breathless Chris, many thanks!

Jan Allison October 17, 2016 at 2:59 PM So beautiful and romantic Paloma:-) hugs Jan xx Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:05 PM Glad you enjoyed it, thanks Jan. :)