Sashi Prabhu Poet Rhyme

Immersed In Your Thoughts

In your thoughts I have immersed and lost myself,
Without you  I yearn to be immersed and lost again all by myself

Forever...lost in your thoughts,
Aimlessly wander with my thirstful wish to be silently quenched sought,

I wander aimlessly
On the brink dwell, now my lonesome life  to surrender

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 8, 2012 at 9:17 PM Sashi, a beautiful write from you as always! Congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda Sashi Prabhu June 9, 2012 at 11:03 AM thank you Rhonda

Ralph Taylor June 8, 2012 at 6:11 PM Congrats, Sashi. Outstanding. Nice going. Ralph Sashi Prabhu June 9, 2012 at 11:05 AM thank you Ralph!!!!!!!!!

Samia Ali Salama June 8, 2012 at 12:17 PM Congratulations on your win sashi! :) Sashi Prabhu June 9, 2012 at 11:04 AM many many thankies Samia!!!!!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2012 at 11:38 AM Congratulations Sashi. Love, Carol Sashi Prabhu June 9, 2012 at 11:05 AM thank you Carol

David Williams June 8, 2012 at 3:55 AM Sashi congrats on your win...David Sashi Prabhu June 8, 2012 at 9:53 AM thanx David!!!

Wilma Neels May 13, 2012 at 12:29 PM Stunning write Sashi ;) enjoyed it tonight ;) Sashi Prabhu May 29, 2012 at 7:58 AM thanx Wilma!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2012 at 9:00 PM deeply romantic one!! Keep it up!! Sashi Prabhu May 12, 2012 at 1:01 PM thanks Andrea!!

Nette Onclaud May 9, 2012 at 12:47 PM the sweet, passionate touch makes this a worthy read, sashi... you wow me..:) huggs!