Immersed In Peaceful Thought

A beneficial mediation for the mind...
being immersed in peaceful thought,
seeing clouds drift towards sunset,
imagining places pristine and wild.


On a shining rock facing the breezy West,
I lay whispering what comes naturally...
to make a connection with the Almighty;
I praise His creations being laid down to rest.


Colors are lively images of the fading evening,
the slower the ruddy sun reaches the horizon,
the stronger the jasmines smell without repulsing...
picturesque valley, tarry much longer and glisten.


Feeling and looking happy and so serene inside,
I breathe in and out to let gladness overwhelm me...
looking in a certain direction with my glance of intensity
to connect with the spectacular planets that seem to glide.


Let this face glow without denying its deserved joy,
let my contemplation carry me to the ends of infinity
to bring back healing secrets Mankind never discovers...
see me immersed in peaceful thought among marigolds!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew. Love,Carol
Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 7:18 AM
Many congratulations Andrew on your win in Tahera's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
Song Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 9:50 AM
It's all about imagery in this wonderfully written poem. Congratulations! Gwendolen
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Congrats on your win Andrew .
Mehta Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:27 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Tahera, Andrew
Neels Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:25 AM
Hey there Andrew, congrats on your win with this awesome write, I especially love your second stanza :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:19 AM
heavenly! triple cheers for your fine, fine win, andrew! :) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Congrats Andrew on your wonderful win in the Yoga contest with this exciting adventure into meditation land.. awesome as always my friend..enjoy another victory luv..
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 1:48 AM
what a glorious piece swirling in my head, andrew.. is this for a contest?? winning's best!! :) huggs, nette
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