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Immersed

Setting sunlight glimmers across your form
               Waves with enticing, smiling eyes
     teasing, flashy,
                              dancing-hypnotic,
to all who are nearby

With promises to never leave,
               your currents kiss my feet
     the ebb and flow - a pull,
as you caress my cheek.

"Find your peace," trickles softly in my ear.
               Cradled in your soothing embrace
     rhythmically stroking me 
                    away from weighted years

Sunlight streaming through
                              my warm cocoon
               looks on with tenderness 
                                            our union
I've found my place - my soul at home
     
                    forever love
                    forever more
                    forever one

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Lyric Man Date: 7/2/2018 12:45:00 PM Sara.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me... Login to Reply

Patricia Cresswell Date: 10/12/2017 4:47:00 PM Your words are the picture well chosen and beautiful. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 10/12/2017 11:45:00 PM Thank you Patricia :)

Honestly J.T. Date: 8/25/2017 10:57:00 PM I like your passionate words. well done -JT Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 8/27/2017 4:50:00 PM Thank you JT :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/6/2017 11:43:00 PM wow, fantastic personification, Sara and I love the picture! Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/7/2017 10:24:00 PM Thank you Andrea :) I was so happy to find this picture :) <3

Darren White Date: 7/5/2017 6:38:00 AM How could I miss this!!!! It's beautiful Sara. Absolutely smashing :) Great personification. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/5/2017 9:40:00 PM Thank you so much <3 This is great praise, my friend :D

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/2/2017 11:56:00 AM I love: Your currents kiss my feet! Lovely one, Sara! Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/2/2017 12:06:00 PM Thank you Kim :)

White Wolf Date: 7/2/2017 11:53:00 AM Now, this is excellent writing, Sara! An absolute pleasure to read! Think I'll keep this one if you don't mind Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/2/2017 12:05:00 PM Thank you so much Rick :) <3

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/2/2017 5:00:00 AM Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/2/2017 7:34:00 AM Thank you Ravi :)

Eve Roper Date: 6/30/2017 8:34:00 PM Wow, amazing write, Saram, the imagery is just amazing.. I see you're new, I want to welcome you to soup.. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/30/2017 10:22:00 PM Thank you Eve :) I have been so blessed to be a part of Poetry Soup <3

Akkina Downing Date: 6/30/2017 8:10:00 PM Oh how beautiful this is, sweetness of love. I love it, :) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/30/2017 10:21:00 PM Thank you so much Akkina :) <3

Lisa Ricci Date: 6/30/2017 10:51:00 AM Good morning Sara. This is beautiful. Your words and layout are very much poetry. The ending is very poetic and a marvelous touch. Also marvelous is the attached image you share. In my opinion the theme is timeless. Well done entirely. It was an honor to read and turn to your page. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/30/2017 1:24:00 PM Hello Lisa :D Thank you so much for your kind words <3

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2017 4:51:00 AM - Beautiful, written with ink of love Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/29/2017 6:27:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 6/28/2017 8:54:00 AM This is so beautiful. I love it. It makes me want to be there. You ended it so nicely too :) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/28/2017 1:50:00 PM Thank you so much, Heidi! :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/28/2017 7:33:00 AM A newborn love! Sweet, Sara! Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/28/2017 8:14:00 AM Yes! Thank you Kim :)

Chris Green Date: 6/27/2017 6:04:00 AM This was absolutely beautiful Sara. The sea is such a calming and soothing place that touches many. There is something quite magical about the constant rhythm of the waves, the sea air and the feeling of being one with the water. Such a gorgeous piece of writing Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 6/27/2017 7:24:00 AM Thank you Chris :) I think your wonderful compliment expresses exactly how I feel about the water <3