Sara Ella Poet Personification

Immersed

Setting sunlight glimmers across your form
               Waves with enticing, smiling eyes
     teasing, flashy,
                              dancing-hypnotic,
to all who are nearby

With promises to never leave,
               your currents kiss my feet
     the ebb and flow - a pull,
as you caress my cheek.

"Find your peace," trickles softly in my ear.
               Cradled in your soothing embrace
     rhythmically stroking me 
                    away from weighted years

Sunlight streaming through
                              my warm cocoon
               looks on with tenderness 
                                            our union
I've found my place - my soul at home
     
                    forever love
                    forever more
                    forever one

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Lyric Man July 2, 2018 at 12:45 PM Sara.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me...

Patricia Cresswell October 12, 2017 at 4:47 PM Your words are the picture well chosen and beautiful. Sara Ella October 12, 2017 at 11:45 PM Thank you Patricia :)

Honestly J.T. August 25, 2017 at 10:57 PM I like your passionate words. well done -JT Sara Ella August 27, 2017 at 4:50 PM Thank you JT :)

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2017 at 11:43 PM wow, fantastic personification, Sara and I love the picture! Sara Ella July 7, 2017 at 10:24 PM Thank you Andrea :) I was so happy to find this picture :) <3

Darren White July 5, 2017 at 6:38 AM How could I miss this!!!! It's beautiful Sara. Absolutely smashing :) Great personification. Sara Ella July 5, 2017 at 9:40 PM Thank you so much <3 This is great praise, my friend :D

Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2017 at 11:56 AM I love: Your currents kiss my feet! Lovely one, Sara! Sara Ella July 2, 2017 at 12:06 PM Thank you Kim :)

White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 11:53 AM Now, this is excellent writing, Sara! An absolute pleasure to read! Think I'll keep this one if you don't mind Sara Ella July 2, 2017 at 12:05 PM Thank you so much Rick :) <3

Ravi Sathasivam July 2, 2017 at 5:00 AM Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Sara Ella July 2, 2017 at 7:34 AM Thank you Ravi :)

Eve Roper June 30, 2017 at 8:34 PM Wow, amazing write, Saram, the imagery is just amazing.. I see you're new, I want to welcome you to soup.. Sara Ella June 30, 2017 at 10:22 PM Thank you Eve :) I have been so blessed to be a part of Poetry Soup <3

Akkina Downing June 30, 2017 at 8:10 PM Oh how beautiful this is, sweetness of love. I love it, :) Sara Ella June 30, 2017 at 10:21 PM Thank you so much Akkina :) <3

Lisa Ricci June 30, 2017 at 10:51 AM Good morning Sara. This is beautiful. Your words and layout are very much poetry. The ending is very poetic and a marvelous touch. Also marvelous is the attached image you share. In my opinion the theme is timeless. Well done entirely. It was an honor to read and turn to your page. Sara Ella June 30, 2017 at 1:24 PM Hello Lisa :D Thank you so much for your kind words <3

Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2017 at 4:51 AM - Beautiful, written with ink of love Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Ella June 29, 2017 at 6:27 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands June 28, 2017 at 8:54 AM This is so beautiful. I love it. It makes me want to be there. You ended it so nicely too :) Sara Ella June 28, 2017 at 1:50 PM Thank you so much, Heidi! :)

Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2017 at 7:33 AM A newborn love! Sweet, Sara! Sara Ella June 28, 2017 at 8:14 AM Yes! Thank you Kim :)

Chris Green June 27, 2017 at 6:04 AM This was absolutely beautiful Sara. The sea is such a calming and soothing place that touches many. There is something quite magical about the constant rhythm of the waves, the sea air and the feeling of being one with the water. Such a gorgeous piece of writing Sara Ella June 27, 2017 at 7:24 AM Thank you Chris :) I think your wonderful compliment expresses exactly how I feel about the water <3