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Setting sunlight glimmers across your form Waves with enticing, smiling eyes teasing, flashy, dancing-hypnotic, to all who are nearby With promises to never leave, your currents kiss my feet the ebb and flow - a pull, as you caress my cheek. "Find your peace," trickles softly in my ear. Cradled in your soothing embrace rhythmically stroking me away from weighted years Sunlight streaming through my warm cocoon looks on with tenderness our union I've found my place - my soul at home forever love forever more forever one

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Date: 7/2/2018 12:45:00 PM
Sara.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me...
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Date: 10/12/2017 4:47:00 PM
Your words are the picture well chosen and beautiful.
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Sara Ella
Date: 10/12/2017 11:45:00 PM
Thank you Patricia :)
Date: 8/25/2017 10:57:00 PM
I like your passionate words. well done -JT
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Sara Ella
Date: 8/27/2017 4:50:00 PM
Thank you JT :)
Date: 7/6/2017 11:43:00 PM
wow, fantastic personification, Sara and I love the picture!
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/7/2017 10:24:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :) I was so happy to find this picture :) <3
Date: 7/5/2017 6:38:00 AM
How could I miss this!!!! It's beautiful Sara. Absolutely smashing :) Great personification.
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/5/2017 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much <3 This is great praise, my friend :D
Date: 7/2/2017 11:56:00 AM
I love: Your currents kiss my feet! Lovely one, Sara!
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/2/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 7/2/2017 11:53:00 AM
Now, this is excellent writing, Sara! An absolute pleasure to read! Think I'll keep this one if you don't mind
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/2/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Rick :) <3
Date: 7/2/2017 5:00:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/2/2017 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Ravi :)
Date: 6/30/2017 8:34:00 PM
Wow, amazing write, Saram, the imagery is just amazing.. I see you're new, I want to welcome you to soup..
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/30/2017 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Eve :) I have been so blessed to be a part of Poetry Soup <3
Date: 6/30/2017 8:10:00 PM
Oh how beautiful this is, sweetness of love. I love it, :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/30/2017 10:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Akkina :) <3
Date: 6/30/2017 10:51:00 AM
Good morning Sara. This is beautiful. Your words and layout are very much poetry. The ending is very poetic and a marvelous touch. Also marvelous is the attached image you share. In my opinion the theme is timeless. Well done entirely. It was an honor to read and turn to your page.
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/30/2017 1:24:00 PM
Hello Lisa :D Thank you so much for your kind words <3
Date: 6/29/2017 4:51:00 AM
- Beautiful, written with ink of love Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/29/2017 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/28/2017 8:54:00 AM
This is so beautiful. I love it. It makes me want to be there. You ended it so nicely too :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/28/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! :)
Date: 6/28/2017 7:33:00 AM
A newborn love! Sweet, Sara!
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/28/2017 8:14:00 AM
Yes! Thank you Kim :)
Date: 6/27/2017 6:04:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful Sara. The sea is such a calming and soothing place that touches many. There is something quite magical about the constant rhythm of the waves, the sea air and the feeling of being one with the water. Such a gorgeous piece of writing
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/27/2017 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Chris :) I think your wonderful compliment expresses exactly how I feel about the water <3