Immense

I was so strongly beaten by my fate,
one girl i loved so much,but i was late.
i loved her from the depth of my heart,
like birds who cant remain apart,
if i don't get her i would die,
like 3.14 equals to pie.

In this world,
its so hard to remain single,
but i don't have any problem,
if she agrees to mingle.
if she is angry with me,
i apologize for all my deeds,
like those irritating weeds who destroy the seeds.

Its so irritating to stand in a queue,
especially for a girl,
with whom you want to start your life as fresh and new.

I could see her in my dreams,
I could feel her in my thought,
but the problem was that ,
I just can't forgot.


From the day i saw her,
Her love burnt me with such intense fire,
but let me tell you,
i am a consummate liar.


My first meeting with her was so strange,
like aeroplanes from the cloud sprang,
i wish,if i could get her,
i would fulfill all her needs,
like sweet fruits grow from their seeds.

After the first it was my last,
I was little bit confused,why was it so fast.
expressions of the eyes,
vibration of the soul,
bad beginning for me from rest of the all.


You fall in love ,
like bubbles of water hug,
you try your best to talk,
like something written with blood instead of chalk.



But all your hopes are crushed in juices,
when someone comes in between and fuses.
but how can my heart forget her
which is dancing in her sweet memories,
like swaying leaves of some lovely trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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