Best Edited Poems
In Search of 50 Names -Edited For JudgeIn Search of 50 Names(couplets alphabetized for ease of footnoting the names)
A) A tom cat sits in heather nearby a willow tree.
Rose and jasmine fill the air. A billy goat I see.
B) 50 words that sound like names I seek. A pail I carry.
I wade...
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Categories:
edited, words, , cute,
Form:
Couplet
The Heart of Christmas -EditedTinsel sparkling on trees that toys lie beneath,
Holly with berries and the hanging of the wreath.
Everything is red and ever-green.
Hearth and home are comforting;
Evening is nigh.
As the snow begins to flurry,
Radiant we see the stars in the sky
Tonight.
Oh, Holy Night the angels sang beneath one...
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Categories:
edited, christmas,
Form:
Acrostic
Promise of Hope--EditedStreaks of anguish like drooping trees
Entrap pale hours across nightscape ,
Then crushing low upon my feet
Each leaf's motion reflects one bid
In neutral shades when moon withdraws--
That all around, on pine and lake,
My flame of hope enkindles breath
To glint beyond November's...
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Categories:
edited, blessing, devotion,
Form:
Blank verse
Before I Kick the Bucket -EditedI never really made a bucket list,
but I guess I kind of did it when I had
one thing I wished for – which was to be kissed.
That one got kicked off by a gorgeous lad!
I also wished the world I’d get to see,
for I was...
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Categories:
edited, life,
Form:
Sonnet
From Bliss To Hell -Edited(I just edited this to include the word "rhyme" within the poem, if that was needed)
378 days of bliss; then for no rhyme or reason came 176 of living hell.
Those last days have shown me that I didn’t know my lover very well.
To think we...
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Categories:
edited, humorous, lost love,
Form:
Rhyme
Cannibalism - Re-EditedRaped and left for dead
Tears still running down her eyeless head
Screaming her heart out,
Which's been removed and stacked into my mouth
I can still see your skin peel
Orgasming on the fact your wounds won’t heal
I only need my grinding teeth to make you paste
Shut the hell...
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Categories:
edited, abuse, crazy, dark, death,
Form:
Rhyme
You Have To Be a Hexagon -EditedA hexagon, a hexagon, you have to be a hexagon.
You say you are a pentagon?
What use have I for pentagon?
You’re too close to the White House lawn!
So you’re a base to stand upon?
This isn’t baseball, Pentagon.
You silly polygon, be gone!
A hexagon, a hexagon. You...
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Categories:
edited, humorous,
Form:
Rhyme
Chickadee - Editedretweets of alarm -
owls in the vicinity . . .
chick-a-dee-dee-dee
Jan. 18, 2021
for Tania Kitchin's A Cardinal, Blue Jay, Or Chickadee Haiku Poetry Contest
(had to totally change this one. Soup does not allow the fun little word for
chickadee which the whole haiku was originally based...
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Categories:
edited, bird,
Form:
Haiku
A Moanaku Or Seven EditedOne line before breakfast
One thought before the toilet calls
One moment to ponder
Yes, silence is preferred
Before flushing
If not
What a great moanaku...
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Categories:
edited, art, character, mountains, philosophy,
Form:
Monoku
On Learning About When Moon Is Seen By Day - EditedOne day (I don’t remember when), but I
could see the moon quite clearly in the sky.
It made me feel like things had gone awry!
Silly thought, I had one – could moon then be the sun?
Was sun now on the run – no, sun had well...
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Categories:
edited, moon,
Form:
Sonnet
Don'T Look Back - Edited and RepostedFingers linger
Thoughts flying everywhere and
Stumble
Crumble
What was I thinking, where does this
word come from
How is it written
How come that in my head thousands of lines tumble
And not a word leaves my fingers
My thoughts fumble
What was I thinking, I cannot do this
They said I could never...
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Categories:
edited, courage, encouraging, life, strength,
Form:
Free verse
Defenseless - EditedSince the day our eyes first locked
you held the key to my heart.
I come to you defenseless.
Old barricades I’d put up
tumbled down; you built me up!
I come to you defenseless.
I have trust in all you do.
No fear have I in trusting you.
I come to you...
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Categories:
edited, trust,
Form:
Tristich
My Language - Edited By Space CadetThe words
I write are fluent;
my pen twitches, my face
with eyes closed, ...
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Categories:
edited, emotions, silence, smile, words,
Form:
Free verse
BIO POEM -edited
Wordwarrior
Authentic, conscientious, fun-loving and down to earth.
Daughter of Roger and Jean
Lover of strong friendships, family and food
Who feels grateful for many things, often content, and very rarely bored.
Who fears pain, chaos, and terrible danger such as death by fire
Who would like to see an end...
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Categories:
edited, poetess,
Form:
Bio
His Gaze -EditedToday I caught a young student staring at me.
This young man, who seldom comes to class,
greets me, nonetheless, with a beaming smile
the days he does show up!
This adventurer (who once described how
he had driven backroads of Alaska all by himself
to enjoy its raw...
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Categories:
edited, people,
Form:
Free verse