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A Moanaku Or Seven Edited

One line before breakfast
One thought before the toilet calls
One moment to ponder
Yes, silence is preferred
Before flushing
If not
What a great moanaku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:56 PM
:)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 8:54 AM
LOL!!!! ;D
Bangalee Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:30 AM
lovely
Solomon Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:23 AM
You're a friggin' classic, mate! Just dony moanaku to me too much tho! I moanaku enough for everyone. Lol
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:19 AM
ha ha ha ha ha - got to add this gem to my faves its freakin hilarious!!!!:-) The title is perfect too lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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