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Damaged Goods

Damaged Goods



In summer sun’s sagacious rays
A butterfly with ragged wings
Settled on the sidewalk
In search of food or rest or other things
Slow, strolling steps brought me to her side that day

Her wings were slowly yawning to and fro
I saw the ragged edges marred
A predator had tried to take her life
She got away but bore the scar
Now she flies erratically, and slow

But ah, her colors shimmered so!
Blue purer than the air
In the sun, sparkled like a million atom stars
Yellow so shy it was hardly there
Emerald splashed like strokes by Michelangelo

They froze my gait 
And captured my eyes
‘til I was lost in a universe
of delicate size
and majestic fate

I held my breath
My throat grew tight
I fell in love
With the spirits’ fight
To live beyond its brush with death

Feelings tumbled from my breast
If I could only paste a part of my soul
On her wing to repair its ragged loss
I gladly would, to make her whole
Who more than measure, she had blest

But hope and want rarely comply
With harsh reality
Or the step of time.
Nor can beauty cure insanity
Or heart enfold a butterfly

So I stood entranced by her beauty there
And caught the spirit of her bravery
Though torn and damaged goods
She was the loveliest butterfly I shall ever see
Her injury made her only all the more fair

She could not have known how much I cared
We both were bound by destiny
The moment passed as moments do
And then she flew away from me
Fluttering and stumbling through the air

Premium Member Damaged Goods

It's clear to me I'm damaged goods,
The world's not always kind,
This fact, (for you are wounded too),
Weighs heavy on my mind.
I know I disappoint myself,
What chance that I won't you.
The truth is most feel lost in woods,
Fear others might be WOLF!

World's full of those who choose to harm,
YOU BLEED, THEY'RE NOT ALONE,
Please understand, but hate their choice,
A sin like this is stone
That they must wear around their neck,
A karmic warning voice,
That sends to others strong alarm,
That evil stay in check!

Though you SHOULD HATE the weakness shown,
FORGIVE the one who's weak,
To guard against it in ourselves,
Err on the side of meek,
With conscious choice first not to harm,
Don't look for lucky elves
Or friend (that you call on the phone).
React! Don't trust in charm!

Extend your hand to one who's down,
Trust God will aid your cause.
No tit for tat (deserved reward)
Find favor in His Laws,
His gift to those who know His Grace:
His servants! So adored,
They never fear their Father's frown
(Though no one sees his face). 


Long Tooth
April 24,  2018

Premium Member Damaged goods

There they stood,
naked and heartbroken,
beyond words, beyond expression.

Still, frozen in time,
beyond their prime,
lost in silence, thunderstruck.

To the core.
Obviously, utterly, 
bitterly beyond heartbroken.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025


Lovin' a Damaged Girl

You say you'll be there til the end
 You say you can forgive where I've been
 But how much do you truly understand
 A damaged girl needs a strong man
 
 There are things that go on in one's mind
 Certain memories one may never leave behind
 Certain wounds that may never heal
 At times I won't be able to tell you how I feel
 Moments may come where I force myself not to run
 Do you truly see the price I pay for damages done

 I feel your gentle touch and see the love in your eyes
 But the baggage I carry and the road I walk
 How much do you truly realize
 
 I love you within my soul and beyond my heart
 I toss and turn missin' you every moment we spend apart.
 I become a giddy little school girl knowin' you'll be home
 Fall into your arms knowin that never again to I have to live in this world alone
 But you must take the time to understand
 Lovin' a damaged girl takes a strong man

Even the Most Damaged Hearts Can Be Mended

"Even The Most Damaged hearts can be mended"
Like him, once a dying man
A death that he had created himself
Man made catastrophe, man made disease

He drunk alcohol everyday, the very cheap kind(kumi kumi)
The one that was only ten shillings
Very affordable for a man like him
He didn't have a job, it was hard to get one
Even with his two degrees, the economy was bad
There was no hope for the young, so they resulted to pastimes and alcohol
The young men like him filled the bars from morning till the following day

That was his breakfast, lunch, dinner and snack
You should have seen his poor body
The vigor had evaporated with the alcohol
Always unkempt, eyes cloudy, foul smell, dreams gone....
Even the wife left, and as she did, she took the kids
So further into the abyss he got
Sleeping on the roads became a norm
Lying and petty fights here and there defined his personality

He, once a young boy full of dreams
He loved to draw and he loved math
But he also had a verbally abusive dad
Who told him he was worthless
His talents and gifts did not matter like those words
That he heard at the end of every school term
So somewhere he planted this believe in his head
Then he met buddies who made him feel loved and accepted
It started as a fun drink, then for him it became his friend
Downward spiral he went....

Until the wife, his highschool sweetheart left
He reached rock bottom
He sought help from the preachers he had once avoided
He tried to amend the pains in his family
He was the therapy he needed
He was the cure to his freedom

Damaged Goods

You stole my soul
left me hollow inside
Broke my heart open
and left me to cry
You scratched my surface
to find my weakness
Threw it back in my face
so I could feel your sickness

Now I’m damaged goods
that’s how you left me
No one wants what’s broken
I’m damaged goods
and thanks to you
truer words were never spoken

You knocked me down 
So you’d be above me
Then fed your ego 
with all of my misery
You ripped me to shreds
for the littlest things
You broke my spirit
Left me here cringing

Now I’m damaged goods
that’s how you left me
No one wants what’s broken
I’m damaged goods
and thanks to you
truer words were never spoken


Premium Member Damaged Goods

Everyone makes it appear so easy,
being able to connect with somebody.
It's as if no one ever told them how hard it is,
but then again I am damaged goods.

damaged

~DAMAGED~


TAUNTING OF YOUR SADIST WHISPERS, ECHO IN MY HEAD
CONSTANTLY REMINDING ME, OF YOUR DESECRATION INFUSED
MY SELF~ESTEEM RENDERED UNTO ME, IN RATIONS FOR OBEDIENCE
NUMBLY, I ENVISIONED A CHANGE...THAT WOULD NEVER COME

WHELPS 'PON MY SOUL, DEEPER THAN THOSE MY SKIN
YOUR MANIACAL BARRAGES, VIRTIGUOUSLY PERVADE MY SLUMBER
FOR WANT OF MY TEARS, YOU...CAUSED MY RETREAT OF LIFE'S LIVING
THOUGH I STILL TRY TO CLEAVE, FOR WANT OF AN ENDING MORE ELATIVE

FOR ALL TREASURE OF TH' EARTH, I WOULD NOT SUFFER YE 'GAIN
I USED TO BELIEVE TH' PAST, WOULD NOT DETERMINE MY TOMORROWS
BUT JADED I'VE BECOME, MY TRUST NOW OPPRESSED IN CONTEMPT
FOR THAT WHICH DIDN'T KILL ME, YOU...MADE ME HUNGER

BELITTLED N' BROKEN, I NOW STAND ALONE...
MY EMPATHY FOR YOUR NEXT PREY, I OFFER AS SACRIFICE FOR YOUR DEMISE
WHEN YOU FIND YOURSELF, AMONGST TH' DEMONS OF YOUR IMPIETY...
FOR AS LONG AS I'M ALLOWED, I WILL SMILE INTO YOUR EYES...

...DAMAGED


©~AZAZA~'09

Premium Member I Am Damaged and Hopeless

When the world is all good,
Why is it I feel like I can't,
Do anything right.
I look at you,
I see your cold eyes,
Your frozen heart,
Your cast iron blood flowing,
Thru your ice cold veins.
Yes I sense you have no,
Emotions, feelings, or love,
For me anymore.
I wonder in amazement,
What could I have done ?
What went so very wrong ?
Why did you stray from me,
Into the arms of another woman.
I have no answers.
All I have are questions after questions,
In my mind and the proverbial,
The light at the end of the tunnel.
All I can surmise is that,
You really weren't meant for me,
That thought scares me.
I loved you with all my heart and,
You broke it into tiny little pieces,
Where no one else can put me,
Back together again.
I am a broken woman!!
I am damaged and hopeless.

Damaged Goods

Give me your pain   I will put it with mine 
I will save it for later in the back of my mind 
  
Give me your tears    I will keep them around 
To be taken out daily and worn with a frown 
  
Give me your fears  I will put them away 
What good is your fear when I die every day 
  
Give me your hatred   I will use it with care 
To direct at myself when I lay my soul bare 
  
But don't give me a kindness   I could never return 
Because bitterness and hatred is all I have learned 
  
Do not give me your love   for it wouldn't be safe 
I've a hole in my heart with no love to replace 
  
Do not give me your trust   for I wouldn't know how 
Mine has always been broken  replaced only with doubt 
  
And don't give me your laughter   for it would not sit well 
With the pain and self loathing that lives where I dwell

Damaged Goods

Excuse me please can I return this heart,
The one you sold me was torn apart,
I have a receipt folded so neat,
Have you one in stock that doesn't beat,
Sorry love I've changed my mind,
Keep that heart it was never mine.

Damaged

Rotting away like tooth decay
Crashing down like a building
Dissolving like sugar in water
Just pain and no shielding
Breaking like glass
Chipping like wood
Been falling apart 
From the start
Fixing it we should

Damaged

I am so damaged…                               Some of it because of me…                                    
                   And some because of my disease…  
                                                              Multiple Sclerosis…
Some due to no fault of my own…          
                                                         Just done to me…
    By my X-Husband who tried for 5 years…. 
                    To Kill me and my Boys…
Although in dealing with and seeing in my 
M.S…                                                                            I just look at my M.R.I…. 
                    And see all the Damaged Brain Cells…             And know that there is nothing 
I can do …
                                    To fix it…       
All I can do is just stay healthy… 
                              And finish my New Medication…
      That is all I have to focus on…    
And not try to worry for things I cannot change…         
I cannot Erase the past…                     
                                 I cannot Erase what I did…
Or what was done to me…  
                   I can only try to stay ahead of my Life…
I have to make my Life better now…
                  With everything that I can!

Damaged

undone
mistreated
hurt and injured 
unknown haunted secrets
shadows

so young
just a child
scolded in fear
berated in the dark
maltreat

harmful
wrongdoings
scared and alone
why can’t he be punished?
damage


Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: April 22, 2016

Premium Member Body Damaged

A face grotesque
Blood dripping down her cheek
Her eye jabbed

A horror that beseeched her this night
As clumps of hair come out of her skull

She can’t run
And she is greatly damaged
Crushed within

Her soul is hurt
Disfigured as her face
Torn apart

Her mouth spits red blood to the ground
Open wounds carry all over her face

The man hates
He proves his worthlessness
She’s beaten by his rage

Russell Sivey

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