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There they stood, naked and heartbroken, beyond words, beyond expression. Still, frozen in time, beyond their prime, lost in silence, thunderstruck. To the core. Obviously, utterly, bitterly beyond heartbroken. Posted on September 16, 2024

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Date: 9/18/2024 8:04:00 PM
To me this is a tremendous work of empathetic personalization. All that those naked, shivering trees 'express' -- you have captured. Bravo, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/19/2024 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

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