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Damaged goods

There they stood,
naked and heartbroken,
beyond words, beyond expression.

Still, frozen in time,
beyond their prime,
lost in silence, thunderstruck.

To the core.
Obviously, utterly, 
bitterly beyond heartbroken.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 8:04 PM
To me this is a tremendous work of empathetic personalization. All that those naked, shivering trees 'express' -- you have captured. Bravo, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 5:09 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
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