Karl Mcdonnell Poet Rhyme

Damaged Goods

Excuse me please can I return this heart,
The one you sold me was torn apart,
I have a receipt folded so neat,
Have you one in stock that doesn't beat,
Sorry love I've changed my mind,
Keep that heart it was never mine.

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Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 5:25 PM i can relate to this karl excellent pen Karl Mcdonnell February 6, 2015 at 11:24 AM Thanks Liam,appreciate that comment a lot.

Honestly J.T. February 4, 2015 at 11:03 AM She never really cared. Good poem -JT Karl Mcdonnell February 4, 2015 at 4:11 PM Yeah,I got the wrong one that day JT, cheers pal.