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Damaged Goods

Give me your pain   I will put it with mine 
I will save it for later in the back of my mind 
  
Give me your tears    I will keep them around 
To be taken out daily and worn with a frown 
  
Give me your fears  I will put them away 
What good is your fear when I die every day 
  
Give me your hatred   I will use it with care 
To direct at myself when I lay my soul bare 
  
But don't give me a kindness   I could never return 
Because bitterness and hatred is all I have learned 
  
Do not give me your love   for it wouldn't be safe 
I've a hole in my heart with no love to replace 
  
Do not give me your trust   for I wouldn't know how 
Mine has always been broken  replaced only with doubt 
  
And don't give me your laughter   for it would not sit well 
With the pain and self loathing that lives where I dwell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/18/2016 12:27:00 PM
I HAVE LOVE TO SHARE MY SISTER: SENDING IT TO YOU> ALWAYS Elizabeth.xxx
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:10:00 AM
Hi Shaunda: Very Intense and powerful. lGreat Write!
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/17/2016 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much. Appreciated.
Date: 3/16/2016 11:52:00 AM
a painful situation to share. I don't know what others consider damage goods. But, you describe and share them well. I like this poem very much. LINDA
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/16/2016 12:55:00 PM
The damage is in the mind mostly. Truth be told, the broken face, beatings and such were much more preferable than the alternative.
Date: 3/16/2016 6:25:00 AM
pretty amazing.. love the climax building up..
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/16/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thank you dear Vinaya.

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