Best Criticize Poems
"Criticizing others is akin to criticizing God"
"Moment we are critical of our critic we become a critic"
Quote by Author
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Words pierce the soft heart, stay there forever
Mind recollects them oftentimes in life
Spoken words for lifelong give joy or tear
Still criticizing others is in rife
Feeling worthless, many tears often shed
depression often ends in suicide
Painful thoughts, existing as living dead
If they did the same, wouldn't it hurt your pride
You speak out of hatred, bloated ego
He who can't praise is never respected
Only if your habits you will forego,
you will receive love, help, praise and respect
For critical talks you're hated by all
All condemn, in everyone's eyes you fall
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Bhagvad Gita 18.61 - The Supreme Lord is situated in everyone's heart, O Arjuna, and is directing the wanderings of all living entities, who are seated as on a machine, made of the material energy.
Matthew 7: 1-3
Judge not, that ye be not judged.
2 For with what judgment ye judge, ye shall be judged: and with what measure ye mete, it shall be measured to you again.
3 And why beholdest thou the mote that is in thy brother's eye, but considerest not the beam that is in thine own eye?
25.06.2021
For Charlotte Puddifoot, Contemporary Sonnet contest
Syllable count checked at HMS
A blooper of yours
Is a lesson for others
Be careful when people say they are with you
People are of good and bad, what are you?
It's easy to say "I am a good" but within who are you?
Remember, human will always be human
Perfection is for only MAN
Human are element
Within a minute conversation can lost
But count it as a Benedicite
Every outward has a limit
Secrets are not to broadcast
Action also do have a limit
Those that seem to be friends
Might not be friends
Battalions of soldier laid siege for you to fall
Prepare yourself very well, you must not fall
Be human in your speech
Be a dove------a bridge of peace
Please feel free to criticize to this, I need a flak critique.
Thanks
Form:
I'm sick of the criticism
It's like their is vandalism
On my heart and way I live
Because I just want to give
My children the best I can
With a loving gentle hand
To guide them through the roughest times
So they'll look back and always find
All the love inside my heart
Will be there and not depart
Years will never make it fade
Their life will always be made
From love, care, hugs and much more
It is from deep in my core
So when others speak about
They should already be out
With a job and their own life
It's like somebody took a knife
And stabbed me right through the back
I don't like to get attacked
From those who don't know the story
Of our life-- it brings me fury
That they judge my parent skills
Getting a big giant thrill
Knocking me down with their words
Not knowing how much it hurts
The words they are daily saying
Of the p8cture their portraying
Its far from the real truth
And a past that made me choose
Not to make my kids go through
Everything that made me blue
So I might not be as tough
Like other parents who are rough
Pushing their kids till they break
That is the one huge mistake
I would never put them through
Mind your business--don't intrude
Unless you know the REAL me
And why I treat my family
A little different than others
I am not trying to smother
And put out their flame of life
I'm just holding off the strife
From entering then to fast
Lessons learned from my sad past
I am a side chick
I have existed from time immemorial
In ancient times I was a prostitute
In biblical times a concubine
Otherwise known as a mistress
The other woman
She that never came home
A woman tucked away somewhere
In all centuries
I have lived on the sidelines
Docile, submissive and unsung
Pandering to sexual needs
Of wayward husbands
Though I live in obscurity
I am a legend of all times
No husbands can resist me
Some risk it all for me
I am the sword of Damocles
Hanging over every marriage
I am a shadow that follows
Men under my spell
As they keep running to me for more
From cold matrimonial beds
While I keep devising new strategies
To be their everlasting nemesis
As a dynamic legend
To remain relevant in my trade
I seek out stars and the wealthy
And transform to a baby Mama
With a permanent cheque book
And a swollen bank account
Condemn me as much as you will
Despise me as much as you can
Criticize me as irresponsible
I remain indestructible
And a global citizen
Until men and women
Live in perfect relationship
But that remains a mirage
Until then the legend lives on!
Slip and slide my pride
sullen words tend to criticize
all is good, I lie.
When I sit and write there's no production or beat
Just this voice in my head and the tap of my feet
You can criticize my rhymes and make fun of my flow
But the fact that you read 'em it just makes my ego grow
You can tell me they're nothing and question there worth
But every poem that I write is like a mental rebirth
If you think you can do it better I just say "right on"
Cause the second this is competition is the second I'm gone
It's simply therapeutic and I use it as such
You can argue, dispute it, I don't care all that much
I write about my life and the things I've been through
If it helps you to read them then these poems are for you
So I guess I can sum up the things I'd really like to say
With
If you're here to bring me down I'd rather you just go away
So if you're coming at me hard I think you best turn around
Because I won't let you ruin the peace I have found.
It’s easy to criticize others
For their faults we don’t seem to possess
Each of us being perfectly blessed:
“I don’t like the car he drives
Or the shifty look in her eyes, it seems to me
They have some strange ideas and beliefs
Like they don’t eat beef
Or talk the way we do
And I don’t like the way they
Walk, talk, run, dance and prance
Around as if they own this town
And oh by the way did I say
How much I dislike the way he always frowns and
Spikes his hair up strange
And she’s nothing but a pain
Who drives us all insane
But as far as me I’m free
Of imperfections;
Just ask and I’ll give you some directions.”
To Those Who Criticize the South
By Elton Camp
So you think that it’s our cousins we marry
And it’s too long at the saloon we all tarry?
That we all have plenty of blacked-out teeth
That we are all only mountain men beneath?
Especially the summer, no shoes we wear
And frizzy and uncombed we keep our hair?
We have several lazy hound dogs in the yard
And to get us to do any work is very hard?
That standard English we are unable to speak
Catfish, possum and grits are what we eat?
Despite all the unfavorable things you say
When you retire, you will come our way
All
humans
were made by
God. All have the
same roots, same body
internally.
Need for love
found in
all
All
those who
believe that
some humans are
superior to
others forget
God resides
within
all
All
those who
criticize
forget that they
are criticizing
the creator,
Almighty,
who made
All
All
humans
act out of
ignorance. They
forget all are beads
of same string We
should respect
all, help
all
All
those who
are well-read,
have knowledge of
scriptures use all free
time in finding
soul hidden
within
all
02.07.2021
Submitted to Critical Race Theory, Anthony Biaanco
Syllable count checked at PS syllables counter
Contest winner 9th position
References from Bhagvad Gita :
BG 7.7: There is nothing higher than myself, O Arjun. Everything rests in me, as beads strung on a thread.
BG 15.7: The embodied souls in this material world are My eternal fragmental parts. But bound by material nature, they are struggling with the six senses including the mind.
BG 5.18: The truly learned, with the eyes of divine knowledge, see with equal vision a Brahmin, a cow, an elephant, a dog, and a dog-eater
References from Bible :
Corinthians 8:6
But to us there is but one God, the Father, of whom are all things, and we in him; and one Lord Jesus Christ, by whom are all things, and we by him.
Romans 12:5
So we, numerous as we are, are one body in Christ (the Messiah) and individually we are parts one of another [mutually dependent on one another
Close enough to criticize.
Poems are like women and poems are like men; beauty is unique.
You don’t know what will attract someone to read your poem and to see.
A poem one person may be bored of reading, may inspire someone else;
So I will continue to write what I want to,
Because I simply write to please myself.
If this poem is not for you, then I apologize for wasting your time;
But there are things inside my head,
That need to be let out of the darkness and into the light.
Up, up and away! They are written down and then they are gone!
In a place without a landscape,
Who will decide what is right and what is wrong?
The critics critique; I simply speak.
In this land of written words, I can only be a conduit.
Imagination without shackles;
Any subject can be tackled.
Use a pen, not a fist and you will have your freedom and find peace.
A word like integrity, a thought unleashed!
Poetry is the beauty; the negative reply comes from a beast.
A prince of charm in search of love;
A princess of empathy sure would be good.
(C)2016 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
Who am I to criticize another person
I try to play the role but, yet I hide behind a curtain,
Is my mind playing tricks on me
Or is it just my inner demons trying to get free,
I try hard to erase my terrible past
So I can cast all my vengeance to those who ask,
I am trying to change who I really am
But, the ones I have tried to impress don't really give a damn,
I shout to the world I am now a christian
Is it real or am I too far gone due to all my confessions,
The inner me wants to believe all this is true
But, the old saying goes I am me and you are you.
Written By: Unique Poetry.....2008
Rants about work
People complain.
They don’t want to be ordinary.
They want to be legends but don’t
Put in the work to obtain
That status.
They want more than what they have,
Yet can barely sustain
The lives they lead now.
But, they feel restrained
By a “regular job”.
Mentality strained.
Ego’s flying through the air.
Is it a bird?
It’s a plane.
People think they’re too good
For everything these days.
It’s insane.
I’m not here to criticize.
I’m keeping it plain.
Criticize Then Condemn and Complain
Some people sure like to entertain,
Driving back and forth in fast lane,
And are fretting;
Attention getting;
We criticize, condemn and complain.
Jim Horn
I meditate you in verses,
I paint you in poetry,
I write prose of you...
I look for all verbs,
affectionate, loving and warm
and the richest rhymes
to offer you...
Absolute uselessness...
Don't participate in anything,
you don't have any appreciation
by poetry...
You never receive it,
never read... neither that
were to criticize... !
So easy to criticize --
A fool can sound
like someone wise
Propose a plan
to fix it ~
Fools nix it