Rama Balasubramanian Poet Ninette

Don'T Criticize God

All 
humans
were made by 
God. All have the
same roots, same body  
internally.
Need for love
found in
all

All
those who
believe that
some humans are
superior to
others forget 
God resides 
within
all

All
those who
criticize
forget that they
are criticizing
the creator,
Almighty,
who made
All

All
humans 
act out of
ignorance. They
forget all are beads 
of same string We 
should respect
all, help
all

All
those who
are well-read,
have knowledge of 
scriptures use all free
time in finding
soul hidden
within
all


02.07.2021
Submitted to Critical Race Theory, Anthony Biaanco
Syllable count checked at PS syllables counter

Contest winner 9th position

References from Bhagvad Gita :
BG 7.7: There is nothing higher than myself, O Arjun. Everything rests in me, as beads strung on a thread.
BG 15.7: The embodied souls in this material world are My eternal fragmental parts. But bound by material nature, they are struggling with the six senses including the mind.
BG 5.18: The truly learned, with the eyes of divine knowledge, see with equal vision a Brahmin, a cow, an elephant, a dog, and a dog-eater

References from Bible :
Corinthians 8:6
But to us there is but one God, the Father, of whom are all things, and we in him; and one Lord Jesus Christ, by whom are all things, and we by him.
Romans 12:5
So we, numerous as we are, are one body in Christ (the Messiah) and individually we are parts one of another [mutually dependent on one another

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Kim Rodrigues July 22, 2021 at 3:51 AM Congratulations, Rama! Nice layout too!

Christuraj Alex July 21, 2021 at 11:08 PM use all free time in finding soul hidden within all Good advice. Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 2, 2021 at 2:17 PM This is a marvellous Ninette, Rama. I really enjoyed reading this excellent write from a golden pen. Your references add charm to the philosophical theme. Love and best wishes ~ Mala Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:29 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless

Anisha Dutta July 2, 2021 at 9:45 AM God. Is neither the creator nor the administrator Of the world I believe in Charles Darwin. Humans are products of EVOLUTION Don't get upset. Whether SOUL exists, yet to be investigated LOVE. Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:28 PM You are like my son. Take care, God bless

L Milton Hankins July 2, 2021 at 9:21 AM A marvelous write, Rama. I wish you much success in Anthony's contest. I see your poem rising toward the top! Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:28 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless

Joseph P. DiMino July 2, 2021 at 9:08 AM To nurture is part of the solution -- when God created this universe, He created it out of Himsef -- He did not go somewhere else for parts or ideas. Treat all humanity, all creation with Divine Respict. This is a great write my friend. I pray that it inspires others as I have been. Blessings! Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:27 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless

Beryl Edmonds July 2, 2021 at 8:25 AM A wonderful string of Ninettes Rama, thoughts well said. Some forget we’re all made from God’s hand and don’t understand that everyone’s equal who lives on His land… Belle Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:27 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless

Supraja Kannan July 2, 2021 at 7:20 AM This is a master piece... Loved it... Thoroughly enjoyed reading it... Definitely a winner... Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:27 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless

Demetrios Trifiatis July 2, 2021 at 5:49 AM A necklace of Ninettes made from pearls of undeniable truths. Criticizing God is the apotheosis of human ignorance! Good work, dearest Rama. Blessings. Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:27 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless

Tom Cunningham July 2, 2021 at 5:33 AM Your verse is filled with words of wisdom Rama. Tom Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 6:26 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless

John Kenny July 2, 2021 at 4:13 AM 'all are beads of same string' I love that phrasing, without all the beads in place the string has no balance. Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 4:20 AM That's what is happening. Wish we understood and acted wisely.

Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2021 at 4:00 AM I love this, Rama! The bible tells us to love our neighbors…even our enemies. We love each other in our flaws. As time goes on I see how relationships are weaved…how even shaky ones can become beautiful and how the unlikely help each other in their suffering. A winner in my book, sweet one! Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 4:04 AM Submitted just now. Had just few thoughts, thought this form is best. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Glad you liked my string of thoughts.