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A Bridge of Peace Please Criticize

A blooper of yours Is a lesson for others Be careful when people say they are with you People are of good and bad, what are you? It's easy to say "I am a good" but within who are you? Remember, human will always be human Perfection is for only MAN Human are element Within a minute conversation can lost But count it as a Benedicite Every outward has a limit Secrets are not to broadcast Action also do have a limit Those that seem to be friends Might not be friends Battalions of soldier laid siege for you to fall Prepare yourself very well, you must not fall Be human in your speech Be a dove------a bridge of peace Please feel free to criticize to this, I need a flak critique. Thanks

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Probir Gupta

Date: 8/25/2017 12:01:00 AM

Nothing to criticize I find here ... One reason may be I agree to the philosophy hinted in the poem ...the last two lines are done in lovely poetry ... I feel I have now criticized contradicting myself ... Btw, thank you for liking my So many years you and I ...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/16/2015 10:39:00 PM

Having read this poem, rather than critic, I can only say , I read the message, the feeling, the sentiment, that being said this is a beautiful poem!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/16/2015 4:43:00 AM

" Who are you?" you ask my friend and this is a legitimate question that we have to ask ourselves first. I think we are three things: First, the one we think we are, second, the one who others think that we are and third, the one who we really are. In the first place, we are not what we think we are . In the second place, we are not what others think we are for others do not know themselves well and third, who we really are is unknown to all but to God! Provoking and profound poem.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 1/2/2023 10:13:00 PM

Thank you for the thoughtful comment sir. Blessings, Afolabi.