Criticize

Slip and slide my pride
  sullen words tend to criticize
all is good, I lie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thomas Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Think many of us get this one DM. Take care :)
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 11:32 AM
Very cleverly penned ...I had a wry smile on my face reading this DM:-) hugs Jan xx
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