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Advise!

Yes! You are so right, I should have turned the light off when going to bed.

Mono-ku poem.

Premium Member Great Britian I would advise,'

You will soon be facing March 2026..' Which as far as I am aware? Will be in
Many places.' Not offering local elections)

We often hear that 'all the power is held way beyond, the grasp of the general
Populace.' So maybe an apathy is grown
I wonder who that might benefit?

However why not ? As a whole nation
Refuse to vote altogther.' It looks as if
That may be a strong action..Against
All the machinations of a rouge system.?

That would negate any planned funneling
Of voters, any misinforming of people, in
Fact it would let the system filter through why it exists at all.? And whether elected
Mp's on the whole, work for the country or
Among themselves.? Or for G M O'S outside of the country.'

Premium Member I advise don't try'

If you are looking for me..Its a lost cause i say
I seem to grow more distant and different day by day.' I
Once held ideals and ideas of what man I
Should be..Then Jesus came up cliose to be in front'
And I don't care now..For what once I prized
In truth it was but irrelevance, in deceptive guise.' The Light of Jesus..Is above all worldly worth
In Him, is my identity.' May I loose to Him all
Self importance,  unto the new birth."


THE EXPRESSION OF GRATITUDE FOR THOSE WORDS

Thank You for your wise words,
I learnt to be smart in stealing,
Stealing other’s hearts with my kind-words,
Which is filled like yours with meaning.

Thank You for your warm heart,
I learnt to be worth-adoring,
And stay awake and help others,
Even when I can hear their snoring.

Thank You for your lovely look,
Now I can fluently cook,
Cook heart-warming stories for those little children,
Who have nobody to pin their cloth’s hook.

Thank You for everything,
Without you- I am nothing,
Yet you gave me many things,
By which I can now fly and also make the world fly with wings.

Premium Member I'd advise no'

British troops in Ukraine.? Well they are already there.' 
Whats starners game? As peace keepers they could be
Hit' that would derail things I'm sure of it.' To much
Resources already have been drained.' Leave well enough
Alone..I would think if any really care in the main.?

Wise Advise

Abiding balance cadence dap ease facility gems handle
Illuminate jasper keep language magnanimous
Never oblige people qualify raise sage
Take unchangeable values waken  
Xenophobia-not yank zealotry


He Loves You

So you hit rock bottom heart first 

Then let me show you a verse 

About a man who sacrificed everything for you 

And loves you at your worst.



This is a favourite verse of mine 

John3:16 let's recite in parts tonight

'For God so loved the world that He gave His only son.'

The suffering Jesus went through for you was to make you be done 

With a life of sin, death and pain 

In the broken world that drives you insane.



' Whoever believes in Him shall not perish but have eternal life'

In this dark world, Christ gives you light 

To shine is bright His glory comes through 



He loved you so much He died for you 

He left His glory in heaven to come through for you 

Come to Him know For He is the truth 

No matter what people say Jesus loves you.??

Premium Member Cat Advise

Be on sensory alert and always stay curious.
Speak out against wrongs and what makes you furious.
Use caution when out on the street.
Don't just rub up on any one you meet.
Stay finicky about any thing you eat..
Pay close attention to your hygiene,
always keep those front paws clean..
If you want to live those nine lives, better
find time to exercise..
When your energy is feeling zapped it's
okay to curl up and take that nap..

Premium Member Dog Advise

Be sure to stick that head out the windows of your life.
It's okay to bark but don't dare bite..
A roll in the mud brings a sensory delight..
Guard your family every day and every night..
Greet strangers with a wag and all your days will be bright.

Looking Out of the Window

The perspective is beauty
the expectation is captivating
but through the window
the future without a fight,
 sans luck and resilience
will not come !

Memento Mori

"Remember that you are going to die", Latin phrase
        which reminds us that death is certainty...
        Art prepares the human being for death
        imminent... Memento mori...

                   I finally took the third dose
                    of the science vaccine...
                   I can already realize of dying
                   before the beginning and closer
                   of the edge...
                   For enjoying my eternity...
                   i can imagine i'm eternal
                   for this virus...
                   I can take care of myself  now
                   for what is to come...
                   If you happen to die from it,
                   it will be fatal for pure...
                   the noble will have left the evil
                   win... !

A Friendly Advise Live As Much You Can

While for life
             there is no definitive
             explanation
             we definitely advise
             live intensely
             as much as we can... !

Secret of the Knees

What makes a good mother?
What makes a good home?
Her granddaughter asked
A woman always on her knees my child

For pretty faces in time get old
And bodies eventually age
But past all that what really keeps
Is the character built upon her knees

A pillar she must be for many you see
A source of strength and comfort too
And she herself mettle she must find
Entirely completely, upon her knees

Her purpose you see is the greatest of all
To build nations, groom generations too
And if per chance a mistake is made
A sad lot will pay of the coming age

So upon the woman a lot is laid
Expectations unspoken, thankless too
But a good woman a good home will make
If she learns early the secret of the knees.

Premium Member I Advise a Rather Clueless Lady

A pink-'n-yellow ladybug flew up to me
  Said, 'I'm so pretty, can't you see
Why are the gentleman-bugs so put-off-y
  Perhaps I'm simply too carefree'

'O no, ma'am, that's just not so
  You're the best catch in all of Toronto
It's just that gents here don't know from pink-'n-yellow
  Wear a maple-leaf coat to catch a Canadian fellow'

Premium Member Listen Closely, My Son

So much to solicit, but with substance excluded,
she mimics intimacy, but leaves one secluded.
Flatteries slip off her tongue like honey's sultry sweetness.
"Come to this incensed bed for pleasure's soft caress."
Like a crafty serpent's spiel, her lips slither stellar speech.
Secure your spirit, flesh, and soul; she'll sample some of each.
With silken negligees, she'll sustain a slave's stronghold,
stealing one's strength like the lust for shiny gold.
One's best possession is sequestered, that of self, a sword within,
squandered to a showy stranger, a satanic mannequin.
Leaving spouse and offspring grieving, an egregious price to pay,
some have spurned their own cisterns to search for soggy clay.
Listen closely, my son, with stern discretion be wise.
For she will lead you in similitude as Eden's sad demise.

12-8-2020
References: Proverbs 5 & Proverbs 7
"Flee sexual immorality. Every sin that a man does is outside the body, but he who commits sexual immorality sins against his own body." 1 Corinthians 6:18

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