Listen Closely, My Son

So much to solicit, but with substance excluded,
she mimics intimacy, but leaves one secluded.
Flatteries slip off her tongue like honey's sultry sweetness.
"Come to this incensed bed for pleasure's soft caress."
Like a crafty serpent's spiel, her lips slither stellar speech.
Secure your spirit, flesh, and soul; she'll sample some of each.
With silken negligees, she'll sustain a slave's stronghold,
stealing one's strength like the lust for shiny gold.
One's best possession is sequestered, that of self, a sword within,
squandered to a showy stranger, a satanic mannequin.
Leaving spouse and offspring grieving, an egregious price to pay,
some have spurned their own cisterns to search for soggy clay.
Listen closely, my son, with stern discretion be wise.
For she will lead you in similitude as Eden's sad demise.

12-8-2020
References: Proverbs 5 & Proverbs 7
"Flee sexual immorality. Every sin that a man does is outside the body, but he who commits sexual immorality sins against his own body." 1 Corinthians 6:18

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Date: 1/1/2021 8:23:00 AM
I thought this was from Proverbs. Amazing that so much of the book is written by Solomon and he had 300 wives and 700 concubines. Could you imagine living in that household? Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/3/2021 11:39:00 AM
Yep, lots of wisdom found in Proverbs. The thought of that many always boggles my mind. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 12/8/2020 11:34:00 AM
This is a brilliant take on the contest ..nice light use of alliteration..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/8/2020 6:49:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. I added a few more lines upon editing.
Date: 12/8/2020 11:33:00 AM
Well done, as soon as I started reading I thought this reminds me so much of Proverbs 5 and written with great alliteration, enjoyed this one a lot, the last line is golden!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/8/2020 6:41:00 PM
Thanks, John. I'm glad you made that connection.
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