Ack Poems | Examples

An order that isn't

What causes one to feel this way?  

 
lack of control over every emotion, like you’ve fallen from a cliff
out and in goes the air through your lungs as you barely breathe 
vexed heart rate – feeling like you’re experiencing arrhythmia 
every whisper and flutter is seen, even if it’s just you in the mirror 

 
Don't you know? 
You’ve already read the answer.

Gaza sonnet has 14 lines

Gaza Sonnet
A doctor`s house with two daughters came under artillery fire
while he who worked at the hospital in Gaza
Trying to save life after yet another Israeli attack, lost both
His children, the military late apologized.
After the funeral, the good doctor did not seek help for his
Immense suffering , but carried on working while
grief unburdened was eating him up.
One day he went to the beach the sea was calm and blue
He undressed and began swimming he had to get away
A strong swimmer he swam long before an Israeli gunboat
blew him out of the water, red turned to pink and then
ack to calming azure as the warped thinking of the occupiers
said go he should have sought psychological help
For sorrow so deep that no well-meaning words suffice

Hidden Utility

J-ack
O-f
Y-our

V-ehicle
I-s
L-iterally
L-ifting
A-utomobile,
N-eeded
U-ntil
E-mergency
V-alues
A-rise

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Monocrostic (Birthday of Joy A. Villanueva)


Premium Member Aqua Therapy-Hiku Tanka

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t   he pool’s push   l   X  l         and                pul    l
b  reaststroke or    l   X  l      hugging a         tre     e
t   he weights and  l   X  l                        noodle     s
b  ack and forth     l   X  l     I tread bare        fee    t
s  imple sciatica     l   X  l                              cur    e
——————————————————————————-

Save Me Please Mia

S - she was always afraid, of what, I do not know, 
A- and she would always hide, from whom, remains unknown, 
V- various expressions would cross her face, but never one of delight, 
E- Emma, my saccharine sweet Emma, thou died of disease which still survives. 

M- "Myalgic Encephalomyelitis", the doctor said, Ah! the reason of demise, 
E- entire world may cripple! I cried. 

 P- people lively, world grinning in glee, what does it says about you, turning blind eye, to my grief? 
L - less of happiness now darling, soul coated in agony, 
E- engraved on your grave;
   Emma Jhonson, 
   2001 - 2017
   'its okay to be afraid sometimes',
A- and hither I'm, alone, gluing the broken strings, tending the cracked heart, 
S- Such a misery! tiresome trajectory! O' lord how I'm gonna survive?
E- emptiness, the huge void, which your departure created honey, countless times I ask, is this how could you say goodbye? 

-9/9/2021
MIA(Message in Acrostic)

Black

Beauty of a blind man's insight in darkness, 
Lack of lustre of insight in the sighted and the wise;
Aglow with stars, the scintillant splendid sky
Charms the black night only in light's absence
Kindling our cognition of the purpose of 'Black' - A Blessing!


Date: 08/25/2021
The Color Black Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke


Premium Member Captain Jack Sparrow

C-aptain of the Black Pearl
                                 A-stonishing
                                 P-irate lord
                                 T-aking on
                                 A-ll
                                 I-n his path 
                                 N-ever the less

                                 J-ack
                                 A-midst all others in the 
                                 C-aribbean is
                                 K-nowledgeable and brave

                                 S-ailing the seven seas
                                 P-irating and looting
                                 A-long with Mr. Gibbs by his side
                                 R-emember this and
                                 R-emember well
                                 O-verseeing Captain Jack for it is said
                                 W-ill be a moment you will dread

Premium Member Coming Back Home

Consoling is echo of love, forever I have heard and known
Oh, how foolish was my youth, searching destiny all alone 
Meeting you was utopian debut, and as I did, you felt it too
Indelibly in memories etched, there is no life without you
Never will I do that again, being on road has not been fun
Glad I trudged when I was young, now that trek is all done
Back I am in your hold, as melodies bold, tenderly unfold
Acceding to euphoric feelings two amorous hearts behold
Conjuring images, once dormant, latent clues tugging anew
Kindling now, bright and true, as clandestine passions woo
Home again, I feel charmed, hypnotized in seductive glance
Obsequious in your loving arms, adoring eyes of romance
Mesmerized in soul’s liaison, as bells of joy toll on and on
Elated now, I end my odyssey greeting you in newer dawn

February 28, 2021
Placed 1st: Coming back home poetry contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

Coming Back Home

What would be the state of mind of a young man coming back home after war?
__________________________________________________

Cares and worries cast away

Overflowing with joy since break of day

My head heavy seeing many dead

Incessant shots, much blood shed

Now excited like a small child

Going home to unwind tensions piled

Back in my streets, I see happy faces

A joyous welcome, warm embraces

Chatting with family, eating home food

Kneeling down to God, expressing gratitude

Humming a song, glad to be alive and free

On my bed I sleep carefree

Merciful lord end all wars

Erase war memories, war I deplore 

21st February 2021
Written for coming back home contest by John Hamilton

Premium Member Coming Back Home Jerome

Coming back home   
On a day you did roam   
My love is for you my Jerome   
I will wait at home   
Not in our dome   
Get me a pretty garden gnome
   
Back in your strong arms of love   
After all they fit me like a glove   
Caring softly like a little dove   
Kisses from heaven above   

Home to stay   
Or I will cry and turn gray   
Me and you everyday   
Eternally to have fun and to play 


Date Written: 2/11/2021  

Note: Acrostic  Rhyme

Premium Member Old Memories

C-oming back home in our autumn years
O-nce more looking for those familiar ties
M-emories carried through our lows and highs
I-n remembered joys and tears
N-othing smells as familiar as those bars
G-oing back to touch the fading stars

B-ack to every known place we had been
A-lways in our hearts till we’ve seen
C-atching sparks still strong in our eyes
K-eeping feelings tucked inside

H-appiness layered in cobweb’s of old
O-ld stories we seek that have been told
M-elodies in our hearts till the very end
E-nough said nothing is lost my friend.

9.2.2021

Lethality

L-ethality
O-f
R-abid
E-pidemic
N-astily
A-ttacks

E-veryone
S-o
M-en
E-ventually
L-ack
E-nergy

Topic: Birthday of Lorena Esmele (April 20) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Lingering Rack

M-outh
A-voids
R-espiratory
I-llness
E-vading
L-ingering

R-ack
O-r
M-isery

Topic: Birthday of Mariel F. Rom (April 08) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Premium Member Nap Upon Nap

I do not want to use the dreaded d-word
Because I don’t think it is that
But all I want to do frankly
Is nap, nap, nap, nap, nap.

My state of mind is fogged and smack
Allergic cough, right ear is clogged. Hack. Hack. Hack.
Cannot get my breath. An elephant sits on my chest.
Ack! Ack! Ack!
High pollen count bringing spring swiftly back.

Early this year, on a faster track
Hope it is not on the CV nineteen rack.
I do not think it is depression.
I do not want to think that. But I am going back to take another nap.

Premium Member Great Escape

Grinding the nine to five every day
Relying on, needing that big pay
Everyone’s demands, they want a part
Always stressed even when you start
Trust that you really need to depart

Exiting ever so graciously today
Somewhere nice to get away
Canceled your normal work plan
Accept that it’s OK, you really can
Pack quickly for your island getaway
Enjoy your much-needed time away

1/11/20

Contest: Great escape poetry contest

Sponsor: John Hamilton

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