Aqua Therapy-Hiku Tanka
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Aqua Therapy
the pool’s push and pull
breaststroke or hugging a tree
the weights and noodles
back and forth I tread bare feet
simple sciatica cure
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t he pool’s push l X l and pul l
b reaststroke or l X l hugging a tre e
t he weights and l X l noodle s
b ack and forth l X l I tread bare fee t
s imple sciatica l X l cur e
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Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025
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