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Aqua Therapy-Hiku Tanka

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Aqua Therapy

 

the pool’s push and pull

breaststroke or hugging a tree

the weights and noodles

back and forth I tread bare feet

simple sciatica cure

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——————————————————————————- t he pool’s push l X l and pul l b reaststroke or l X l hugging a tre e t he weights and l X l noodle s b ack and forth l X l I tread bare fee t s imple sciatica l X l cur e ——————————————————————————-

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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/9/2025 1:13:00 AM
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Good one Kim. Sounds like it is doing you good. Hope you continue.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 3:09:00 AM
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Me too! Thank you, Oliver!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/8/2025 6:31:00 PM
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It sounds good and maybe even a little fun. Best of luck
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 8:24:00 PM
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Yes! The epidural helped the most but the therapy made me stronger. Trying water aerobics tomorrow. We will see.
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Paige Hind
Date: 6/8/2025 5:17:00 PM
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I hope it's a cure for your pain, dear Kim. You just write about everything, lol. <3 TLC!
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Paige Hind
Date: 6/8/2025 9:13:00 PM
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Why not! <3 :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 8:23:00 PM
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I do! Why not? Thanks!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/8/2025 2:12:00 PM
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Congrats, Kim. I used to swim a lot in my time. Aqua aerobics are so good for the body.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 3:52:00 PM
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Getting into it tomorrow. Finished therapy last week. Hugs
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/8/2025 1:23:00 AM
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Very impressive..Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 5:24:00 AM
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Thank you, Bernard! :)
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/8/2025 12:25:00 AM
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Congratulations friend on your top win with a thoughtful creative piece. Wish you a cheerful day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 5:24:00 AM
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Thank you, Krishnanand!
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JCB Brul
Date: 6/7/2025 11:26:00 PM
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Wow, so creative! Congratulations, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 5:26:00 AM
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Thank you, JCB!
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 6/7/2025 10:42:00 PM
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Cooly innovative. Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 5:26:00 AM
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Thank you, Maclawrence!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/7/2025 9:44:00 PM
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Your tankas always amaze me, Kim. This one is no exception --- 'Hugging a Tree' blew my lid off... Thanks, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 5:27:00 AM
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LOL! Thank you :)

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