Coming Back Home

What would be the state of mind of a young man coming back home after war?
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Cares and worries cast away

Overflowing with joy since break of day

My head heavy seeing many dead

Incessant shots, much blood shed

Now excited like a small child

Going home to unwind tensions piled

Back in my streets, I see happy faces

A joyous welcome, warm embraces

Chatting with family, eating home food

Kneeling down to God, expressing gratitude

Humming a song, glad to be alive and free

On my bed I sleep carefree

Merciful lord end all wars

Erase war memories, war I deplore 

21st February 2021
Written for coming back home contest by John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/3/2021 8:04:00 AM
A fantastic acrostic, Rama! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/2/2021 2:41:00 AM
It's a beautiful story in itself. A war story. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/8/2021 8:33:00 AM
BR, congratulations in John's contest with this Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/7/2021 1:17:00 PM
Hi Rama, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/8/2021 3:13:00 AM
Thanks. You too have a great day ahead. Take care,God bless!
Date: 3/7/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Rama for your entry, congrats on placing!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/8/2021 3:12:00 AM
Thanks. Take care,God bless!
Date: 2/21/2021 5:33:00 PM
War is a terrible thing and has no mercy on the helpless. Coming home is healing when you have something to come back to. Great job here. God Bless my friend. JB
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 2:02:00 AM
War is indeed terrible, serving no purpose. Thanks for your uplifting comments. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/21/2021 3:43:00 PM
this is so well done, I can only imagine how they would feel, you captured this really good. gl
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 2:01:00 AM
Nice to hear I did a good job. Just imagined how they would feel. These are my thoughts, reality I don't know. Thanks for your uplifting comments. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/21/2021 8:02:00 AM
Outstanding Acrostic my dearest friend, Rama. Good luck on the contest. Blessings.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/23/2021 1:59:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful comments. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/21/2021 7:18:00 AM
Lovely optimistic poem but we must pray for those who suffer the after effects of war. ~~
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/21/2021 7:26:00 AM
Yes we must, intact war's should end. Why wars? No solid reason I can find. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
Date: 2/21/2021 3:47:00 AM
Very nice Rama! C you missed writing ‘chatting’ Excellent write
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/21/2021 3:53:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments. Wanted to capture the state of mind of a young warrior, took some time. Got this inspiration after reading yours. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
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