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Coming Back Home

Consoling is echo of love, forever I have heard and known
Oh, how foolish was my youth, searching destiny all alone 
Meeting you was utopian debut, and as I did, you felt it too
Indelibly in memories etched, there is no life without you
Never will I do that again, being on road has not been fun
Glad I trudged when I was young, now that trek is all done
Back I am in your hold, as melodies bold, tenderly unfold
Acceding to euphoric feelings two amorous hearts behold
Conjuring images, once dormant, latent clues tugging anew
Kindling now, bright and true, as clandestine passions woo
Home again, I feel charmed, hypnotized in seductive glance
Obsequious in your loving arms, adoring eyes of romance
Mesmerized in soul’s liaison, as bells of joy toll on and on
Elated now, I end my odyssey greeting you in newer dawn

February 28, 2021
Placed 1st: Coming back home poetry contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2021

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Valsa George Date: 12/2/2021 6:17:00 AM There is nothing like being back home especially after a period of wanderings. It is bliss to be embraced by loving hands and surrounded by caring people ! In this beautiful acrostic, you have enumerated the euphoria of being at home. Which ever poem of yours, I chance to glance upon is a contest winner... ! Great ! Enjoy your gift, dear friend ! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/10/2021 11:30:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/acrostic write. What a journey. Enjoy your win with blessing.............. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/10/2021 12:41:00 PM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman Date: 3/8/2021 8:03:00 PM A Worthy number one, Vijay. Congratulations Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/9/2021 5:10:00 AM Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 3/8/2021 4:02:00 PM well written seamless acrostic - congrats on your no.1 win in the contest! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/9/2021 5:10:00 AM Honored by your visit, Charlotte. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/8/2021 3:15:00 PM Vijay, congratulations on your winning poem in John's contest. Your words took us with you on your journey searching for love and its discovery. High fives! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/8/2021 3:33:00 PM Glad you stopped by Sam with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/8/2021 10:57:00 AM Stopping back with big congrats on your top win in John's contest! Way to go, Vijay. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/8/2021 1:08:00 PM Much appreciate Carolyn--many thanks.

Constance La France Date: 3/8/2021 8:22:00 AM Vijay, congratulations in John's contest with this excellent Acrostic poem, well done _Constance Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/8/2021 1:07:00 PM Thank you Constance for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian Date: 3/7/2021 6:18:00 PM Amorous hearts greet in endless dawn, the leaving and returning is spellbinding. I really am a fan of your poetry. Congratulations on the first place. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/8/2021 6:21:00 AM So nice to hear that from you Barbara. Glad you visited with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. Date: 3/7/2021 12:42:00 PM WoW! Vijay, What a great entry for the contest theme. I'm not surprised you did so well in the contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/8/2021 6:21:00 AM Thank you friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Alexis. Many thanks.

John Hamilton Date: 3/7/2021 10:53:00 AM Another winning write Vijay, such amazing skill you display with your phrasing and word selection, congrats on another top win! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/8/2021 6:20:00 AM So special to win in your contest, John. Much appreciate your vote of approval. Many thanks.

Akkina Downing Date: 3/5/2021 7:34:00 PM Vijay, spectacular poem! Was off PS for a few days and thought to stop by and see what’s new, and as always reading with a smile and a great appreciation of poet like you. Great job and best wishes for the contest :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/6/2021 6:00:00 AM That explains why I haven't seen your poems lately. Your comments are much appreciated, as always, my friend. Many thanks, Akkina.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/3/2021 3:53:00 PM With every new greeting a little taste of the past, and the continual joy of living. Your words are well expressed , and go straight to the heart. gl in the contest, Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/4/2021 5:19:00 AM Much appreciate my friend your kind remarks. Many thanks, Vienna.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/2/2021 6:18:00 AM Wondrous Acrostic encompassing one's odyssey expressed in a supreme literary way, my friend, Vijay! Good luck, my dearest friend! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/2/2021 7:49:00 AM That is so special my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 3/1/2021 8:22:00 PM "I feel charmed" :) This thought brings a smile and I can relate. (For a few reasons) This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Soft and romantic, holding the right amount of passion. Beautiful in many ways. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/2/2021 7:48:00 AM Thank you, as always, for your kind remarks. Much appreciate , Brandy.

Angela Crabtree Date: 3/1/2021 12:42:00 PM This is a wonderful Acrostic with a perfect ending, Vijay. Hope you have a great week :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/2/2021 7:47:00 AM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/1/2021 9:36:00 AM Such a beautiful, descriptive poem about straying and coming home to open arms! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2021 11:18:00 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2021 3:15:00 AM My favorite lines: Home again, I feel charmed, hypnotized in seductive glance & Mesmerized in soul’s liaison, as bells of joy toll on and on// the first pulls your love in, the second resounds with it! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2021 6:10:00 AM Thank you Kim for your kind assessment. Always a joy when you stop by. Much appreciate my friend.

Eve Roper Date: 2/28/2021 8:09:00 PM Great Acrostic with great form and flow, Vijay, good luck in the contest. Thank you for your visit on my poem, “ Harbinger Birds of Spring” and leaving a wonderful compliment and congratulations. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2021 6:08:00 AM Glad you stopped by Eve with your supportive comments. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/28/2021 11:18:00 AM When a loved one is away, we miss them so much, Vijay. I could feel the sadness in your beautiful poem. You did well with the acrostic form too. Best wishes for a win in John's fun contest! Hugs, carolyn Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2021 6:07:00 AM Much appreciate Carolyn. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/28/2021 8:23:00 AM So romantic an acrostic. Delicious emotions that paint a wonderful homecoming. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2021 6:06:00 AM Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/28/2021 5:59:00 AM So well expressed Vijay. I expect it will do well in John’s contest. Blessings Richard. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2021 6:05:00 AM Glad you stopped by Richard. Much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/28/2021 4:58:00 AM Indeed there's no place like home, brilliant acrostic Vijay, good luck in the contest. Enjoy your Sunday. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2021 6:04:00 AM Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks.