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Coming Back Home

Consoling is echo of love, forever I have heard and known Oh, how foolish was my youth, searching destiny all alone Meeting you was utopian debut, and as I did, you felt it too Indelibly in memories etched, there is no life without you Never will I do that again, being on road has not been fun Glad I trudged when I was young, now that trek is all done Back I am in your hold, as melodies bold, tenderly unfold Acceding to euphoric feelings two amorous hearts behold Conjuring images, once dormant, latent clues tugging anew Kindling now, bright and true, as clandestine passions woo Home again, I feel charmed, hypnotized in seductive glance Obsequious in your loving arms, adoring eyes of romance Mesmerized in soul’s liaison, as bells of joy toll on and on Elated now, I end my odyssey greeting you in newer dawn February 28, 2021 Placed 1st: Coming back home poetry contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Valsa George

Date: 12/2/2021 6:17:00 AM

There is nothing like being back home especially after a period of wanderings. It is bliss to be embraced by loving hands and surrounded by caring people ! In this beautiful acrostic, you have enumerated the euphoria of being at home. Which ever poem of yours, I chance to glance upon is a contest winner... ! Great ! Enjoy your gift, dear friend !

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/10/2021 11:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/acrostic write. What a journey. Enjoy your win with blessing..............

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/10/2021 12:41:00 PM

Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/8/2021 8:03:00 PM

A Worthy number one, Vijay. Congratulations

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2021 5:10:00 AM

Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/8/2021 4:02:00 PM

well written seamless acrostic - congrats on your no.1 win in the contest! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2021 5:10:00 AM

Honored by your visit, Charlotte. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/8/2021 3:15:00 PM

Vijay, congratulations on your winning poem in John's contest. Your words took us with you on your journey searching for love and its discovery. High fives!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 3:33:00 PM

Glad you stopped by Sam with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2021 10:57:00 AM

Stopping back with big congrats on your top win in John's contest! Way to go, Vijay. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 1:08:00 PM

Much appreciate Carolyn--many thanks.

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2021 8:22:00 AM

Vijay, congratulations in John's contest with this excellent Acrostic poem, well done _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 1:07:00 PM

Thank you Constance for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 3/7/2021 6:18:00 PM

Amorous hearts greet in endless dawn, the leaving and returning is spellbinding. I really am a fan of your poetry. Congratulations on the first place.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:21:00 AM

So nice to hear that from you Barbara. Glad you visited with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/7/2021 12:42:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, What a great entry for the contest theme. I'm not surprised you did so well in the contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:21:00 AM

Thank you friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Alexis. Many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 3/7/2021 10:53:00 AM

Another winning write Vijay, such amazing skill you display with your phrasing and word selection, congrats on another top win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:20:00 AM

So special to win in your contest, John. Much appreciate your vote of approval. Many thanks.

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/5/2021 7:34:00 PM

Vijay, spectacular poem! Was off PS for a few days and thought to stop by and see what’s new, and as always reading with a smile and a great appreciation of poet like you. Great job and best wishes for the contest :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2021 6:00:00 AM

That explains why I haven't seen your poems lately. Your comments are much appreciated, as always, my friend. Many thanks, Akkina.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/3/2021 3:53:00 PM

With every new greeting a little taste of the past, and the continual joy of living. Your words are well expressed , and go straight to the heart. gl in the contest, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2021 5:19:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend your kind remarks. Many thanks, Vienna.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/2/2021 6:18:00 AM

Wondrous Acrostic encompassing one's odyssey expressed in a supreme literary way, my friend, Vijay! Good luck, my dearest friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2021 7:49:00 AM

That is so special my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/1/2021 8:22:00 PM

"I feel charmed" :) This thought brings a smile and I can relate. (For a few reasons) This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Soft and romantic, holding the right amount of passion. Beautiful in many ways. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2021 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, as always, for your kind remarks. Much appreciate , Brandy.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 3/1/2021 12:42:00 PM

This is a wonderful Acrostic with a perfect ending, Vijay. Hope you have a great week :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2021 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/1/2021 9:36:00 AM

Such a beautiful, descriptive poem about straying and coming home to open arms! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2021 11:18:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/1/2021 3:15:00 AM

My favorite lines: Home again, I feel charmed, hypnotized in seductive glance & Mesmerized in soul’s liaison, as bells of joy toll on and on// the first pulls your love in, the second resounds with it!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2021 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Kim for your kind assessment. Always a joy when you stop by. Much appreciate my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2021 8:09:00 PM

Great Acrostic with great form and flow, Vijay, good luck in the contest. Thank you for your visit on my poem, “ Harbinger Birds of Spring” and leaving a wonderful compliment and congratulations. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2021 6:08:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Eve with your supportive comments. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2021 11:18:00 AM

When a loved one is away, we miss them so much, Vijay. I could feel the sadness in your beautiful poem. You did well with the acrostic form too. Best wishes for a win in John's fun contest! Hugs, carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2021 6:07:00 AM

Much appreciate Carolyn. Many thanks for your kind remarks.