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Soliloquy

“To be or not to be”, was Hamlet‘s sole question.
We’ve a common conundrum, that’s my confession.
Burn bridges or mend fences, in my discretion…

I stand above them, pistol heavy in my hand.
They cringe before me, she’s sobbing and he’s unmanned.
My mind’s really roiling, though my expression’s bland…

She surely did me wrong, there’s truly no dispute,
In flagrante delicto, they cannot refute.
Leaves me such a dilemma, achingly acute…

The Lord tells us “Vengeance is mine, I will repay!”
Also “to forgive is divine” didn’t he say?
How is a mere mortal to decide the right way…

But wait! “Nature weeps”, a pathetic fallacy 
As “either or” is just a false dichotomy 
In reality both are merely sophistry…

Should I mend the fence? Overly optimistic.
Should I burn the bridge? Aptly apocalyptic.
There is another choice, neatly nihilistic…

My attention was caught, resolution was sought.
The decision was fraught, it’s a Gordian knot 
Hamlet’s vexing question solved with a single shot…

New intent nicely teased, and tension slightly eased.
My mind now appeased, prior predicament ceased
With resolve swiftly pleased - the trigger slowly squeezed…

Escape Into Words

I love poetry
Where else can tragedy 
Become so achingly beautiful
Horror made ethereal
Tears like jewels
Fall musically to the floor
Even demons dance to 
The rhythm you create
Nightmares shrink
Into phrases on a page
Finding haven in quatrains
Freedom in metaphors
Structure in meters
I escape into this 
Fantastical world
Parallel to the harsh
Reality
I can not control

The Way

It's a slop of a silken surface

Forming that multi-faceted glaze 

Can't you see?

It's been done so many times before

It's bone-achingly exhausting

What is to be done? 

Nothing that can't be undone

Can you help me untwist my feet?

Go slow, slow, slow

I'm so happy

You get money to teach us


Inspired by The Voice - Summer night by Edvard Munch

Let my ribs and the trees cage me in
     I'm too afraid to speak
  balance is too hard to fathom
like the word "unwanted" is on ribbon I've swallowed
     choking me 
  as 
    it
 melds
     to
  my 
      lungs.

Stay quiet
      wait until you're wanted...

  But what will it do to me?
            time passes around me
    birds fly
days rise and fall
       I empty my mind
    hold on - 
            stay paused.

Can you be achingly afraid?
    scared to be my own demise
simply by existence.

I'll hold my tongue.

  My heart is broken
         too afraid to voice -    
  how it feels
       to be quiet.

BACKSTABBED

The gigantic acacia tree would testify
Were it not for savage ravages of rot
That erase feeble living things that die
After decades under sun’s missiles hot. 

And the birds that chirruped and flew 
About as he trudged over hill and bend 
Long went like all weak beings of flight,
And no more can lasting credence lend. 

If old baobab trunks had tongues that turn 
Methinks they would solid testimony avail,
Of how devoutly he toiled in dews and sun
And never refrained from heaven-sent toils. 

But since baobab trunks unspeaking are
And birds such fleeting breaths have they,
Can cold unfeeling stones their version say:
Tell how over them hopped he on his way? 

Though villainous eyes those labors saw,
Witnessing their tireless winds and turns;
None would ranks of vile ignominy break 
And end this betrayal that achingly burns.

And for want of witness this sobbing soul 
Perishes and dissolves like a soaking loaf
Amid bootless heavens’ amnesic lethargy,
As cruel decades to a rude century morph.

Premium Member Patience, Impatience

My heart is always willingly, patiently waiting
For the life I think you and I will be creating.
But my mind is going stir-crazy wondering
When it is the next time you will be coming.

My soul is knowingly, faithfully waiting
For your further, deepening awakening.
But my ego is desperately reaching
For your affectionate acknowledging.

My body is longingly, achingly waiting
For an embrace that is so tenderly soothing.
But my being feels your own soul lingering
In my room, beyond an illusion that is fading.

My heart patiently paints a future so loving,
For you're the one for which I was searching.
But my mind's always impatiently crying
For our life I see: a life finally worth living.


Beautiful World

The world is achingly beautiful,
Yet man walks burdened in pain.
Though born to be free and dutiful,
Everywhere, he’s bound by chains.

In a world that rushes blindly,
Man must learn to wait—
To face life’s questions quietly,
Through error, fate, and weight.

Life is a path of struggle,
A climb through joy and sorrow,
A journey marked by trials,
With dreams we chase tomorrow.

Through anguish, doubt, and fear,
He presses on each night,
No sword or shield in hand—
Just will, and silent fight.

It’s a war for the strongest,
A test of heart and mind.
Believe in who you are—
Don’t leave your strength behind.

The world is hard, yet wonderful,
A place of shade and light.
So rise again, keep walking—
Your spirit is your might.

Premium Member Not Erma Bombeck

As You Get Achingly Older
The Energy It Takes For
Tedium Hurts More Than
The Time It Wastes/Saves.

BANK!

-Gray Squirrel

08-28-2025

Apathy, Won

For the strong ones — on their stay-in-bed days.
© Gabrielle Munslow 2025. All rights reserved.

I think I’d just like to be —
No noise in my head.
The TV on standby.
Radio not transmitting.
The dog forgetting his bark.
The tears unshed.
Just leave me in bed.

My whole psyche ashes away,
aching from absorbing prophetic punches.
I changed the trajectory of my life —
now I need to be achingly numb.

No words.
No prayers.
No petty arguments or poetry.
Just me.
Hair like a banshee,
mascara matching my disillusionment.
I wear my apathy like a medal —
nauseatingly won.

Let the world knock,
let the day stretch open.
I won’t rise.
I’ve already fought
too many mornings.
But don’t mistake my silence
for defeat —
I am not broken.
I’m just choosing not to speak
while I sharpen my teeth.

one day

My mind is a raging storm
Of never ending thoughts
And constant 'what if's
That chase away dreams
And plague the mind.

Not a day goes by
That you are never there,
You've come to occupy the space 
As though it were your own.

And through every tear,
Heartache and moment of pain,
Just know the day 
I reach Heaven
If I am so allowed, 
You are the first
I will come to find. 

And though time will heal,
It will never repair
As achingly beautiful 
As life tries to be,
Know I cannot wait
To be reunited with you.

Premium Member Lips of Desire

"The clouds parted like the pursed lips of desire,"
drawing an ambience for dreamers to dream
with watercolor whispers and acrylic zen ~
amorous, magnetic, and achingly alluring,
dusted in mauve-winged wishes,
as the moon’s crown sparkled in gold…

O beloved crescent ~ that stirs my ink,
     love me like sultry sea waves,
     rippling through Cupid’s veil ~ 
a surreal sketch of sunset soulmates,
destined to dance beyond time’s thistles,
     oblivious to the jades of jealousy.

Meet me where memories fade,
and pain is an unfamiliar poem, 
for I wear your love-stained letters ~
breathless, spellbound, and intoxicated
by the scent of handwritten heartbeats…

But if stars could sing, and dusk could speak,
would you heed the tunes of twilight,
like rain tracing fire along your skin,
while night hangs silent, and the breeze unfurls~
    a ballet of butterflies in sync,
    with the pulse and kiss of lunar lace…

Premium Member Flirtation

Achingly slow the way that we kissed,
enjoying the entrapment we laid in.
You commemorated this with cursive.

The soft swirl and soft hand of cursive
matched us as the paper was kissed.
Italics bold as your tongue trucked in.

It was comforting how you creeped in
with flirtation flowing in pristine cursive.
Immortality penned the way you kissed. 

A love letter french kissed in cursive.

Premium Member Web

such artistry, tied to two trees
background of a neighbor’s house
which one is mere majestic
you’d say unhesitatingly, the web
but did you know my neighbor

they shingled and painted
their whole house themselves
it was something else

you’d look at it and think
it’s boring brown, but
I see deeper into their lot

the spider’d disagree
my analysis is persistently
annoying because her web
appears as a soccer net

or football for those nuts
in the UK - don’t disparage
you say - but they are nuts
for football, aren’t they

the world wide web would AI
something achingly intricate
but it needs to mind its own
because we all find in small things
something quite beautiful

case in point, fireworks I couldn’t see
but I could hear the one’s next door
as I sat outdoors (and the only time
this year) I saw, lit up like a gathering
of fairies, in my little woods, fireflies

don’t argue, just nod, nod off
and be human instead

Premium Member Petals And The Full Moon

Petals and the Full Moon,
peppered with flakes of stars;
Wishes become cobwebs,
children no longer hum;
Growing up? Belief ebbs.

Petals and the Full Moon;
After achingly long,
lovers find an embrace;
Swaying in reflection,
the sea gives in to chase.

Petals and the Full Moon,
lost in the ambience
romantic wheel in drive;
Restless fuse of rapture,
a perfect match will thrive.

Premium Member -Rain

Sitting in his favourite cafe
Latte in hand
Engrossed in the words
In his familiar newspaper land

Startled by a loud rumble 
Dark clouds loomed above
The heavens suddenly opened
His thoughts turned to his true love

She was a free spirit
He was conservative
Their differences worked beautifully
Compromise and consideration being the alternative

She loved the rain and how it made her feel
She was at one with the rain
She showed him how to embrace it
He never viewed the rain the same

A lifetime together walking in the rain
Playful they laughed and danced
They swam in the wild raw ocean
 A time of precious love and romance

He achingly missed her
Though felt blessed to have had those years
She was and will always be his one and only
His memories welled his eyes with tears 

Jolted back to reality
Composed once again
With a smile and a happy heart
He stepped out into the pouring rain

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